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Reviews for Eternity of lust

By : Sexgoddess2110
  • From kirosrazer on March 14, 2008
    This was an excellent yuri fic.
    I love the pairing.
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  • From ANON - Shamie-chan on August 21, 2006
    Errr, the constant paragraph breaks was rather distracting. All the cursing was too. Other than that, you did fair. Grammarical errors here and there, "cryed" and the wrong form of 'there' are a couple of examples. But there wasn't anything major that left me totally lost. As I said, fair, it would have been much better if it wern't for all those breaks.
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  • From ANON - rosier on July 18, 2005
    very good fic! I liked it! you should write an OroKabu yaoi fic!! I`d really like to read it! *drool
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2005
    kool
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  • From on March 24, 2005
    I'd love it if you wrote more.

    Nice choice of pairing here at first. ^^ Tsunade/Shizune.. :: love ::
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  • From ANON - kirameki on March 24, 2005
    Well, I don't normally read Yuri but I figured I'd give it a chance. Not bad, you have potential as far as I can tell. Though I got confused at times as to who you were talking about doing what actions. You kept saying her and it seemed you were switching between them. Maybe be a little more clear about which character is doing what.
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  • From ANON - LadyTigresa on March 23, 2005
    Hehe I loved it! Make more!
    lol i could just say this on msn but oh well.

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