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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From loveusender on April 25, 2010
    I just re-read this story again and fell back in love with it! one of my all time favorites..
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  • From SakuraLee91 on April 21, 2010
    Oh man I absolutely love this story. . .I read it on Fanfiction.net and had to come to adultfanfiction.net in order to read the smut! lol! You're an awesome writer!!!
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  • From loveusender on March 18, 2010
    Twenty four chapters of PURE.FUCKING.WIN. this was at this was. there aren't a lot of authors i favourite, but hun, you just got added to me list *runs off to read more stories on her NaruSasu charged craze*
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on January 05, 2010
    I think it's really unfair that you make Sasuke the bad guy, considering it's Naruto's fault.
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  • From Calcifer on March 20, 2009
    Awwwwwwu. I loved this story. Very creative, and well written. And for some reason I just can't get out of my head that one part where they were horse back riding, and Sioux's thoughts were 'driiiiifting to the left'..... Any ways. I enjoyed this story. The pace was good. Not too rushed, and not dragged out. Good job ^^

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From chibialichan on May 19, 2008
    i know that u said something aboout there being an epilogue for this story, can you email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you do so that i won't miss it... thanks =^-^=
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  • From chibialichan on May 19, 2008
    this story was just so nicely done... it had all the right amount of drama, angst, humor, etc... i just loved it!!! all of the characters were just ooc enough to make it work in this au, but still kept in character, except gaara, i think. he was a bit more ooc then the rest of them. but i still loved it. can't wait to read the rest of your work! keep up the great work! =^-^=
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  • From hulabalooba on May 09, 2008
    Hi!
    I just joined here so im not completely sure how this works but well see... I read your fic, the second one ive ever read in this Naruto category, so this all is new for me.

    First of all, i really enjoyed your fic. I found it really entertaining and it made me smile like maniac always when reading it and also when just thinkig about it. So i ended up trying to restrain myself laughing out loud and smirking at everything to prevent my parent asking stupid questions about my happiness.

    The way you deepened Naruto's personality in this fic made me think a lot of things and wanting me to be more content with my life. Hi was absolutely lovely in this fic. No wonder everyone were after him.
    I loved how mischievous Naruto was towards Sasuke and how confused Sasuke was about it. And i was too until you put us inside also Naruto's head. It was really sweet to read what they tought about each other not knowing the other one's thoughts. It made my opinion about Sasuke more softened and approval. They were so cute at Naruto's home. Especially Sasuke!

    Fic really hit me hard. You made me wanting to read all the time, neglect my homeworks and sleep. I dont know if it was the relationship between two boys or genious style of writing which enthraled me through the fic.

    I appreciate the effort you made for the fic. (The lyrics and such)I think the riding part was brilliant but my absolutely favourite was the drag show! I searched the songs they sang and listened then meanwhile reading the equivalent part in the story. And i had good time, didnt i! And so i refound three songs from my youth which i had compelety forgot. Thank you! Im sorry that i didnt found the song Felipe American Princess. It sounded really interesting, not familiar tho'. And so back to the business. I imagined the whole drag show scene in front of my eyes. And giggled my head off.

    I liked the ending until the dance at the party. Somehow i think the present was pretty lame or something. What did they do with that garden anyway? And for me that sex part was in unnecessary, almost skipped it... Well the actual ending, last three chapters, were okay. I dont know why it happens to me many times: i read fic for desire of some smutness and then i got really into it and be content just with the love confession parts. So many times i just like more the beginning part where you evolve and prime the plot.
    And you were really good in that! The best parts of the fic were over after the draq show. Thats typical for the fic ive read...Or maybe its typical for me to think like that.

    I think your fic was happy, hooking, vivid and adorable. You used nice vocabulary, lots of new words for me. Now i try to forget the specifics of this fic and read some others. And then after a while read this again. =)

    Thanks for making me happy! Have a nice weekend!

    - A reader from Finland
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  • From PansyLane on April 02, 2008
    Hey there! I read this amazing fic about a year ago, but haven't had the opportunity to review it. (Ok, I had, I was just too lazy, sorry. XD) So, what can I say? It's a really amazing story, one of the best AU fics I've ever read. (Actually I hadn't liked AU fics before I read yours, and now I read more AU than Canon...) Anyway, I love "your" Naruto. Oh, and I'm in love with Naru(seme)xSasUke since I read Chasing Naruto... it's just sooo right. :D After all, I feel a need to thank you for sharing this amazing fic with us. This is a fic that I will read again and again.

    Best wishes: Pansy
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  • From hsosborne on March 28, 2008
    luv it Great story and amazing ending
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  • From Imagy on January 19, 2008
    LOVED IT
    ABSOLUTELY
    LoVeD EEEEEEEEHHHHHHT!

    Can't wait to read more of your work~!
    and if this one was any indication
    they will be breath taking

    catch yah later, babe~!

    ~*~ Nikki ~*~
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  • From sasquatchsnake on November 22, 2007
    Beautiful. I am in love with this story. ^^ Thank you so much for sharing it!
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  • From Sinslayer on November 15, 2007
    encore, encore!!!! great job. ^_~
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  • From Jelp on September 01, 2007
    I read this story well over a year ago, but your story was pretty much the only one that I kept up with here at adultfanfiction.net. Of course, now I come to aff.net alot, and it's because of this gem of a story. I felt bad for never leaving a proper review - I just kept giving stars - so I felt it necessary since I absoultely love this fic. My favorite part is the quote in Chapter 3 about Sasuke caressing the washing machine and chuckling evilly, and Naruto's response of: “Ok, that’s just creepy...It’s not every day you see someone caress a washing machine and chuckle evilly...Quite frankly, I think I’m scared.” Excellent fic, and I hope that you continue writing at some point. I'm sure that with your dual major (if your bio info. is up to date) it's probably extremely difficult to do so. Anyway, I guess what I'm trying to say is, amazing story, and thank you for writing it. :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on June 10, 2007
    this was a great story, i really enjoyed reading it. i wonder if you will be writing anything else. so either way. i loved it, want to thank you for writing it.
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