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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - SasukeItachiSmex on April 08, 2005
    ;.;...;.;...How could you leave it there?! You better update soon. >< You had better! This is the first fic of Naruto and Sasuke that I actually like as much as the other one. ^___^ I can't wait to see Sasuke's expression, his reaction, and the way Naruto will make it up to him. >> Even though they really aren't together. But, anyway, goodness...-Pants- Keep it up!! Don't stop writing. ;.;

    -Clings for dear life- xD Hey, and check out my story. Just A Kiss, is the title. ^^
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  • From ANON - Hiso-chan on April 08, 2005
    *forgets to breath while gawking*
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  • From ANON - vivacious on April 08, 2005
    great april fools! i almost had a heart attack then laughed my ass off. evil cliffie but that's why i love this fic. thanks and keep it up!
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on April 08, 2005
    lol cant wait till next chapter...keep it up!
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  • From ANON - 123 on April 08, 2005
    MORE!!! (cackles madly) MORE!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - k on April 08, 2005
    Ordinarily I don't enjoy AU high school fics much, but this is one of the best I've ever read. Scratch that, it's THE best. You've done a fabulous job keeping the feeling of these characters true to the series, despite necessary adjustments to match their new environment. Your Naruto is especially interesting - he's both clueless and clever, which makes me happy. I love the pacing of the SasuNaru-ness too. I'd say this is one of my favorite new fics, I'll definitely keep checking back for more. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on April 07, 2005
    Ahhh! Update! Such a nasty cliffie you wicked wicked person! I love it though! Yeah!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on April 07, 2005
    *sings madly* "Nejii's gonna get it! Nejii's gonna get it!"

    aha!!! this story is great...it was beginning to sound a lot like some other AUs I've read but you definitely switched it up wiith throwing Nejii and Gaara into the mix! I read all 5 chaps in one sitting...twas too good to turn away! The humor that is added in this story is great. i can't wait to read the next chap so it better be up soon!

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - moi on April 07, 2005
    ahhh, gawdammit, i love your writing. 'tis hilarious! and you captured naruto exactly as id imagine him, all grown up and all. everyone's characterizations kickass. anywho, very cool. rawr. want more.
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  • From on April 07, 2005
    Gotta stop calling that hotline…

    El capítulo Tres - Aquí soy, escribiendo En español para estar molestando.

    El maratón continúa… Tres hecho, dos en ir.
    Well enough of that! Pleh.. Spanish! Just to make you suffer. Mwahahah *cackles*

    Neji, whom for the duration of this review will be referred to as the condemned, I have a little something to tell you…


    KEEP YOUR DAMNED DIRTY LIPS OFF NARUTO YOU MOTHER F****R!!!
    *inhales* Ok I feel better now ^_^


    Fantastic chapter Dana-chan, or should I say Dana-sama *bows and worships* “I’m not worthy!”

    Go yellowcard! Go laudy! Go green socks and pee stained briefs *editor runs in and informs him that it was in fact a sock which stained the briefs* meh…

    I think I need to go now… I really want a juicy piece of meat, I could swallow the whole thing in one go. O_o So what was Naruto’s favor going to be to Neji again, I forgot.

    Your loyal fan forev…. Hmm? No way!! Emeraldfire8 posted again? Well screw this writer…
    now what was I saying?

    -Jay-
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  • From on April 07, 2005
    Bum… buh da dum… bum ba da dum ba da da bum ba da da… ect… rinse wash and repeat
    CHAPTER TWO!!!

    Oh man… I could killlllll Neji in this chapter. He’s so vile… (Man when did I become such a Sasuke fangirl) *chases after Sasuke and glomps upon catching* Mine!!!! *snarl*

    Eh... sorry had a moment

    Well I do have to say I love the idea of Neji headbanging at a rock concert *pops on Yellowcard and plays Believe* he’s defiantly got the build for it.

    I still have to laugh at Gaara crushing on Naruto as well. At first it doesn’t seem right, but the more you think about it, things just fall into place and you realize he actually liked Naruto from the beginning. I mean… his head does say love afterall… (or was that lonely…? Na it was love, because I say so!) And those attempted murders of Naru… CLEARLY a poorly expressed cry of love, I’m sure that in his mind he thought the message coming across was “Hey you, I’m scared. I’m scared of committing to or even possibly thinking about dating you because you’re that intimidating and impressive.” Wow… cupid strikes again. Good luck hot stuff. Some day you two will be lying in bed, kissing and mutually masturba… err what am I saying! >_
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  • From on April 07, 2005
    I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
    everybody's nerves, everybody's nerves.
    Oh, I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
    and this is how it goes: Chapter One!
    (Hehe sorry couldn’t resist. I was considering doing pages and then chapters. ^_~)

    Anyway… let the reviewing begin!!

    Well… after reading all these chapters of this story it’s hard to remember the first one. *goes back and skims* Ah, right right. Wonderful beginning, I particularly liked the scene with Naruto and the homework. It was so brilliant… but you already knew that. Hmm, well the potatoes on the pepperoni were nice, but the seventy five muffin men didn’t like crossing the river Jordan because London Bridge is falling down. And besides that, I absolutely love the tension with Neji he puts the pressure on Sasuke right away, which is what we like because of that stupid Ochimaru arc… *erases history* “It never happened people! Nothing to see here.”

    Hmm, four more chapters to review so I better get cracking. Just remember to keep your head between your legs and kiss your butt goodbye in the face of danger, and we’ll be good. Well chickens, lets fly!

    (Don’t ask… I saw chicken run recently… and… well I am me afterall… We’ll see how these reviews go!)

    Love you, and your little dog too! Err… wait a sec…
    -Jay-
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  • From ANON - yay on April 07, 2005
    Yay!!! more!!
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  • From ANON - lo on April 07, 2005
    fun cliff hanger. I like how you are developing the characters. I like the interactions and evrything. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - macy on April 07, 2005
    the april's fool joke was a good one. for a moment i was in a state of, "Are you @$#&^* kidding me?!?!??!?! Noo!! Poor Sasuke-chan!!" Ahehehe.... uhh...but I recovered and enjoyed the real chapter immensely. it was soooo good!!! I wanted to read more, and more, and more. Heeheee..I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for an awesome update! ^^
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