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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From chinohana on January 21, 2006
    "The ball’s in my court now, Uchiha. He smirked. Let’s play. " when i read this sentence, i went brain-dead and thoguth about you-know-what. i had to read this three times before cracjing up and realising the meaning of it.

    "Note to self: Stupidity breeds phenomenal kissers." i really wished my boyfriend was an idiot to test the theory...

    "I’m going to sweep my little Prince Charming off his feet.” i melted; a cliché sentence, but soooooo ameltish when naruto says it...

    i loooved this!!!!!
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  • From godofcontradiction on January 21, 2006
    awww! Darling, that's sweet! I'm gald you finally updated.. been waiting loooooooooong! ^^ It's always a pleasure reading this- and i await the epilogue with glorious anticipation. Goodluck! ^^
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  • From ANON - Michiru on January 21, 2006
    I'm so happy you updated! Seriously, you have no idea how much I look forward to reading new chapters of this story. (I'm kind of sad that it will be ending with the next chapter - and maybe epilogue - but even good things must come to an end sometime, I suppose. :p I just hope that you will write more sasunaru fanfiction!) I was really happy with this chapter... I'm glad that Naruto has finally seemed to forgive Sasuke, and that both of them have moved on. The angst is necessary and adds to the story, but I enjoy fluff so much more. ^^; And... well, really, I can't seem to find anything else to say other than I loved this chapter, and I look forward to reading the next one. *^^*
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on January 20, 2006
    *spazzes* YES!!! *dances around* YesyesyesyesyesYES!!! It's about farkin' TIME that Sasuke did something right! I almost thought he'd screwed it up again at one point during their conversation at the end, but he held back his retorts and pulled through! Plus, Naruto being Naruto, is certainly willing to forgive the one he's inb love with. ^_^

    Awesome scene with them having the same epiphany simultaneously. That was definately a fangirl-sque moment. ^_^ Sasuke's play-by-play of the fight at the beginning was great, too. All in all, you had my emotions going all over the place!

    *dances some more* I'm too happy! I have to go read that chapter again! ^_______^ *zoom!*
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  • From ANON - Flo on January 20, 2006
    I love the fic. ^^ Keep it up, sweetheart.
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  • From ANON - Judith on January 20, 2006
    That was like awesome man. I read the whole thing up to now. It took me three days between school work and through other mundane duties to get to this very chapter. I await your Epilogue.

    Usually, I dislike comedy fanfiction but you found a way to grab my attention and keep it there, enough to glue my eyes on this damned screen four hours past late. I love the way you added the "funny-ness" in this story without actuaclly distorting the quality of it. Man, your depiction of Naruto is just perfect in my eyes and Sasuke is just so irresistable in this lovely fiction. And dude, you even did the impossible for me! You actually got me to admire Gaara to the point that I might even want to read fics solely based on him. And Niji, what a little bastard.

    Well, all in all I have nothing to really tell you to actually help you improve this story. It's as perfect as it is. And one more thing, any suggestions for fanfics, preferably Naruto/Sasuke, that have as much quality as yours seem to have?

    -minijudi (minijudi2003@yahoo.com)

    You rock. I admire your dedication to us when you're obviously struggling through college. Good luck in your studies. ^_^
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  • From sonicphotonic on January 20, 2006
    omfg this chapter was great! But the cliffhanger. ;~; I haven't reviewed this story before but I want to let you know I check aff everyday to see if you've updated. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Kiaralana on January 20, 2006
    Great!! I love it! Sorry, but I can't think of anything smarter to say :3
    The disclaimer "READERS BE WARNED. THE FOLLOWING WILL AFFECT YOUR BRAIN IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS." is absolutely right, I can tell! XD
    Hope to read the next chapter soon ^^.
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  • From ANON - 123 on January 20, 2006
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Squishy goodness!!!

    *dances* Whats next? SMUT!!! Ah haha, I kid. The "hall" sort of place where the party is being held at is going to burst into flames, isnt it?

    .....

    And THEN we get smut!

    I should just really, really give up on trying to predict stuff in your story...but since you do lovely, nice long chapters...something (besides smut ^_^) is going to happen. Gaara and Orochi start dating? Ohh, I do hope you tell us what the mysterious project Naruto's been woking on is.

    And for the love of god, let Sasuke and Naruto stay together for longer than a chapter this time! I love joo!! Keep up the excellent writing!

    And that part where Naruto is dancing to the Ghost Busters? Gold.
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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on January 20, 2006
    Ahhhhhh...finally, after so so long, they've admitted things.

    I loved the way their relationship progressed, and how kickass Naruto was.

    I love you! Really, your fic's amazing. I wish I could write that way.

    Oooohhhh...are we gonna get a lemon, finally?
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 20, 2006
    OMGOMGOMG! I love this I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! i CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER NE! NICE PLOTTING STYLE~ IS THERE GONNA BE A SMUT? hahahahaha! Oooooah~ I cant wait really, I love your fic! PLZPLZPLZPLZ keep up the good work ne! Ganbade yo!
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  • From ANON - adri on January 20, 2006
    omg.. you scared me so bad when i saw the first part. i thought you quit this fic for sure.

    i love this chapter!!!! please please please update soon!! *tears*
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  • From ANON - vegeta's slave on January 20, 2006
    Amazing, you are awesome. I hope you continue to write the rest of it. I can't wait for some Naruto Sasuke loving.
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  • From ANON - Jo Kirkpatrick on January 19, 2006
    Excellent story!! I'm looking forward to the final part as well. Interesting way to end it. *giggle* I especially liked the part where Kiba walked in, and Sasuke's mental frustration and wanting to stomp his feet. You make things very realistic and give it just the right words. Really, you're a wonderful writer and I love how well you pull me into the story. My heart warms up at the right spots and I get frustrated at the right spots. It's an amazing roller coaster ride.

    You mentioned in an email about being added to a list for further updates and future stories. Please include me, for I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Kot Notloved on January 19, 2006
    i don't read anything elso from AFF but this...cause this is the best fic ever.... i love the way you writte
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