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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Hitomi on April 29, 2005
    (Ch. 9)
    That was... cute. Though I admit I really wanted Sasuke to jump Naruto. Or for Naruto to rid Sasuke all day long. XD
    But I guess I can wait. For a bit, though. *winks*

    Neji's flower-suprise kicked ass. He's such a freaky person. Too bad his hung for someone who's already taken. Yup.^^
    But still... he's card was sweet. Gaging sweet. XDDD

    Kiba warmed my heart. He's such a sweetie! It's so nice to see him care so deeply for our Naruto-kun. Maybe, some day, Kiba will get to see Naruto's apartment too, ne?^_^

    The kids? Konohamaru? I LOVE Konohamaru, so bring him ON!! Yeah!XDD
    And that cat-song... oi veey. That was hilarious!!
    XDDD


    Can't wait for the next!
    Until then,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Hawkmun on April 29, 2005
    ...Well, now that I'm well and officially hooked... you better write more soon... I know it's hard to pump out chapters but you're really good at it. ;_; This is awesome. Keep up the good work.

    ~Hawkmun
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  • From ANON - kigen on April 29, 2005
    Naruto's truck is well earn through hard work and it sure does suit him. And I'm glad Sasuke conrtoled himself lol. Oh I bet i know who those kids that naruto has been talking about. And will we finally see Tsunade?
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  • From ANON - lo on April 29, 2005
    Good chapter. Naruto is turning out to be a terrible evil tease, it's great. I really enjoy the interaction between the characters. I actually laughed out loud with the flower bit, and that scene in the car with that cat song. Good job. Not many people can be funny, you pull it off beautifully.
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  • From ANON - animegirl on April 29, 2005
    another great chapter, yay! God do i love this story, i was laughing my ass off when naruto told sasuke that he was gona 'ride him all day', that was the best! i really really hope that naruto is testing how strong sasuke's feelings are for him because he actually likes sasuke back, but is afraid to get to close and being hurt. i'd kill for some narusasu action but since that "kissing" bet was made i have a feeling that it may be awhile before we get any steamy scenes. Maybe you could have naruto and sasuke 'Accidentally' kiss so technically there's no rule breaking or accidentally fall onto each other in a naughty position *wink wink*. at least give us something to curb our yaoi blood lust. i love the sexual innuendos naruto's always hinting to sasuke, it's freakin HOT!
    please update soon and give us another chapter, i really can't wait to see what happens now that naruto and sasuke are alone together, and i'm curious as to who naruto's friends are. i hope haku is one of them, i love him, he was one of my fav characters and i'm so mad he was killed off so early in the series. i'd be pretty cool if you had him in your story.
    PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MindGames5150 on April 29, 2005
    No fair, no fair! No smutt!!! *whines pathetically* Oh well, i'll live. Anyways, keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on April 29, 2005
    loving it, loving it. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 29, 2005
    Yay!!! You updated again!!! *gives you the usual chocolates* ^^ I absolutely loved this chapter -- the way Neji was straight-forward and frank with Naruto was a nice "change", if it can be called that, and I loved the ending so, so, soooo much!!! Having Sasuke be "sentimental" is a great idea -- and you kept him in character at the same time, so congrats!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Hiso-chan on April 28, 2005
    Sasuke seems to be a lot calmer in this chapter 9, I like that. And once again; I love the way you write Kiba!

    Uh, I could have done with out the singing part that's just me, I'm just picky I guess. Naruto keeps on pulling out those surprises but he still seems to take things over-board which remains true to his character, which I like. Neji always had annoyed me so the more people write about him the more I just try to ignore his exsistance (picky! PICKY!).

    I was woundering, we know that Naruto pratically raised himself, but what about Sasuke? What was his family like? Will you delv into that after this part with Naruto's "family"?
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  • From ANON - Writing as I read: on April 28, 2005
    Oh god, Naruto really cracked me up in the beginning of the chapter. He is so devious! Sasuke is so predictable it's endearing.

    And Neji: you eeediot. I personally agreed with Naruto and his reaction. “I couldn’t help myself. You remind me of a flower.” Woah, Neji! WTF? “Are you deliberately trying to slaughter my sense of male pride here??” Go Naruto, go Naruto go. *chants*

    It's about time Sasuke figured it out! Yay Kiba.

    Omg. The cat song. I'm dying here. *weeze*

    I really like the doodle of the orange spiral and that it was done in crayon. Hehe, "I’m going to milk the experience for all it’s worth.” Freud would be so proud. >_< I don't even think Naruto meant it that way.

    Ooo. Sharing a bed. Iiiinteresting. (Heh, I guess I'm a hornball too, Sasuke, lol.) I love Naruto's pillows!
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  • From ANON - Yami-Hikari on April 28, 2005
    You made my day! Yay, another chapter... I love them.
    I love how you've always got me guessing at the end of a chapyter, but without an actual cliffhanger.
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  • From ANON - Hiso-chan on April 28, 2005
    Been sick and I finally got to read chapter 8. Personally I didn't really like the dream sequence because to me it sounds like he's going to loose it and hurt all of them and push them all away one way or another. It also seems that Sasuke's having more and more trouble keeping himself under-tabs. Maybe he should realize how freaking weird he's been acting and try to cool it down (if he can't then he could get angry at himself and that'd make for some interesting reading).

    What I did like was how calm Gaara has been, he seems to be the only non-spaz. XD And I just love it when you bring in Kiba. I love that little dude even if someone stuck him in a leather outfit with a puffy collar.... actually that sounds kind of yummy. Er, well, my point is; you write Kiba and Hinata very well I can't critisize. lol good work
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on April 28, 2005
    wow! this was your best chapter yet! great job! please update fast!
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  • From ANON - Shikashinigami on April 28, 2005
    Glad to hear it'll be Sasu/Naru... I was worried for a while there, lol. I really like how Sasuke is warming up to Naruto and not just jumping him, like most people make them do. Also I like how Naruto is singling Sasuke out. It's descreet... yet at the same time all the more provocative mwahaha. I would also like to praise you on your grammar and effort to make this an exceptionally enjoyable story. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - 123 on April 28, 2005
    I love the mushy sasuke/naruto goodness in this chapter!! even though you still have the rivalry thing in there at the beginning, the rest of it was very nice!!

    And since it was so nice and fluffy at the end, i could stand that untill you get onto the smut. *cackles madly*
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