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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - okami kaze on January 24, 2006
    grar! *pounces* vit was so goooooooooooooddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^______________________^ i want an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glare* lol. jk. it was aswesome. good job. i wa laughing so hard i almost fell out of my chair!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Exploded Toilet Bowl on January 24, 2006
    Hmm. Nothing wrong with the fiction except there is a problem with your tense. "A low growl from the taller boy reverberated against his lips, and Sasuke found himself walked backward until his back hit a tree." I think it should be "A low growl from the taller boy reverberated against his lips, and Sasuke found himself walking backwards until his back hit a tree."

    Yup. That should be about it! I love your fiction! Keep going! I want to know the very last chapter soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Keishiki-Dono on January 23, 2006
    Finally! An update!!!! I loved your newest chapter and can't wait for the follow-up. Hope you update again soon.

    Much luffs.
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  • From ANON - Keishiki-Dono on January 23, 2006
    Yay! OwO
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on January 23, 2006
    This fic was SO GOOD! I had every intention of studying, but I had to finish the whole thing before I reviewed! I hope you update with the finish soon. I have never read a fic that had me at the edge of my seat due to the sexual tension, and keep me laughing at the same time! *kneeling many times on floor* You are an awesome writer! ^_^ EM
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  • From Sammei on January 23, 2006
    FINALLY managed to dig myself out from underneath all this homework and read the update! And I was not disappointed. ^_^ The whole thing about Naruto not being able to angst, and Elmo with an uzi.. Great. And I totally think it's possible to angst over your ass. Well, maybe. Heh. I'll also have you know that the "Sexiness" music from Naruto started playing while Sasuke and Naruto were snogging. I nearly woke up my roommate with my laughing. >_> At any rate, I really like what you did with Naruto finding out about the bet. What you did seemed more his style than like, say, getting totally ticked and storming off and not speaking to them for a month, or whatever. And.. his dancing.. with the broom.. and the hairstyle. Oh my gawd. Heh. I cannot wait to see what you're having him plot (with Sakura) for the next chapter! And to see how Gaara and Neji (with TenTen ;) are faring. Oh, and how Sakura takes Sasuke being off the market. Eagerly awaiting the next update!
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  • From ANON - hige on January 23, 2006
    You're amazing! dammit you're really good! Update soon! okay? I'm dying to wait for your updates and I'm glad i didn't miss this fic, its like missing half of my life! keep up the good work! ja!ü
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  • From ANON - W on January 23, 2006
    OMG. that was such a good fic. It had me groaning when they got so close to telling each other, just to be interrupted. It was such a twisting storyline, one that i could never think up. So good. You made the characters so alive, so dynamic, it was hard to stop reading... and i didn't. It's midnight now, and i have finals tomorrow *sweatdrops* but who cares? I would have stayed up later to finish it. I loved this fic so far, and i really hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Paradox Ink on January 22, 2006
    OMG! That was so great! I'd totatlly lost hope that this story would be finished, but then I was bored one weekend, and check up on it and THERE IT WAS! Almost DONE! This chapter was really great, though I'm mad at being deprive of a well deserved lemon-scene. I'm glad they've finally stopped playing tag with Naruto. Although, he was a bit meant to Gaara and Neji, don't you think? Gaara I can understand. He was acting really evil and psychopathic, but Neji? He was nice! He backed off! Well, I assume he'll make up with them later. I mean, Naruto is just too nice not to. Poor Sasuke, though. He's always so confused by Naruto.
    I can't wait until the big birthday chapter! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on January 22, 2006
    Ah! That was priceless! Gods, ya had me laughing when Sasuke was like, :I'm going to die, oh god." And that kiss was HOT. I'm SO happy that they loooove each other. xD It was starting to get annoying. I'm getting mixed feeling bout the end of this. Happy it's gonna be over, so I don't have to review for every new chapter xD but sa cause I'm gonna miss it. Oh the horror.
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on January 22, 2006
    Ah! That was priceless! Gods, ya had me laughing when Sasuke was like, :I'm going to die, oh god." And that kiss was HOT. I'm SO happy that they loooove each other. xD It was starting to get annoying. I'm getting mixed feeling bout the end of this. Happy it's gonna be over, so I don't have to review for every new chapter xD but sa cause I'm gonna miss it. Oh the horror.
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on January 22, 2006
    OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! hell, i LOVE EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER FOR THIS FIC! 8D 8D 8D

    To Naruto: That's how you do it man! Way to go!! I'm so damn proud of you!! XD

    To Sasuke: Just wait for your Prince Charming to "sweep you off your feet!"

    I really love some of the lines used here, like "Sunshine of the planet" and "Could you be angsty over your ass?". That was hilarious! XD

    One more chapter to go and I'll RE-READ this whole fiction again! Yay!!! XDDD
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  • From ANON - The Empress on January 22, 2006
    *jumps up in joy* Yes! Finally! Fi--nal-ly! They finally admit they love each other and the other to are out of the frickin' picture. Geez. Although I did think Naruto was gonna seriously open up a can of 120% whoopass on those three. =/ I was kinda scared. It was as if I was there having Naruto stare at me like that....scary. At least it didn't hurt them. As for the part with Naruto dancing in his spongebob boxers with eraser hair holding a broom while wearing glasses and Sasuke walking in on him.....roflmao. That was hilarious. lol ^_^ I especially like the part with them making out and Kiba walking in on them...*giggles* I can't wait to read the next chapter. =) *is breathing easy now* I am so relieved. This story has been messing with my head and I loved every freakin minute of it. No story has ever done that.....no story has EVER done that to me. Until now. You are so cool. Someone should make a doujinshi of this or anime or something because this story kicks ass. ^_~
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  • From ANON - KuroiItami on January 21, 2006
    *applauses* You should be proud of yourself. As in, EXTREMELY proud of yourself, since you got a quiet reader like me to actually review your breath taking fanfic. It's been YEARS since I last reviewed a fanfic, so I admit, I'm beyond rusty in writing reviews. *bows* Forgive my awkwardness ^^;;; Anyway, enough of my crap and let's get onto the praise!

    Well, first things first...*glomps* I LOVE this fanfic to bits!! From the witty comic reliefs to the heart throbbing angst, I was seriously on the edge of my seat throughout the whole story, ESPECIALLY this chapter (oh gods...Ghostbusters....THAT brought back good memories ^___^) Thank you SO much for reminding me that there ARE good fanfics out there, and that it's sometimes worth the time to surf through a horde of SasuNaru fanfics. My day was seriously brightened up because of this update; you have no clue how much I needed this diversion, so *deathglomps* keep up the good work and keep writing! I'll always be supporting you and your stories, even if I don't review! (and I apologize for not reviewing more often ^__^;;; ) Seriously wish I can write a more critical and longer review, but I really need to study more for my upcoming midterm...>.< I hope this is satisfactory enough ^^;;;

    - KuroiItami
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    Yay! Gggoooo~ chapiter 23! They finally got together! *rejoice* *throws confetti*
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