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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - melaiya on May 21, 2005
    I love this, your doinga remarkable job with pov and such. Keep up the good work, cnat wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Haze on May 20, 2005
    Oh. my. god. I love you. ^__^ This story has me so hooked it isn't even funny. This is definately one of my favs. Everything is so incredibly well written. It's a nice change to read stuff that is as lovely and detailed as all of this is. There have been times where I just burst out laughing...like when Sasuke is freaking out about riding a horse. XP So OOC, but if you really think about the actual Sasuke thinking stuff like that....so funny. I love how Naruto seems to be (or will be?) the seme at this point. So awesome. You don't really see that often.

    My only comoplaint....POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!! ^__~
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  • From ANON - Tina on May 19, 2005
    you made me actually want to read...that is a VERY good comment from me. I love the way you do different points of view and how you tell the person's feeling. That last chapter was soo cute with Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the GREAT work and plz wrrte more and update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - La La on May 19, 2005
    Oh my gosh, the last part of this chapter is so sweet. Sasuke seeing Naruto before falling sleep..ADORABLE! But I really did think that Naruto was in there with him. Grrr. Poor Neji and Gaara, I think we know fo real, which relationship Naruto wants to be in now. And the baby-cuddling part was hilarious. Was it a butt squeeze? Or a butt pat. x) I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Elisha on May 19, 2005
    O_O Your stories are awesome!! =) plz continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on May 19, 2005
    Oh man. That chapter was so great... ;____; BUT YOU LOVE TO TEASE SO MUCH T________T;;;;; You gotta hook those two up already damnit ><
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  • From ANON - Metranome on May 19, 2005
    Mein fuhrer demands reviews, mein fuhrer gets reviews! Heil Naruto fics! Hm...was that a bad joke? Sorry. I'm really looking forward to more of this. And what exactly is that evil Hyuuga planning? I guess I'll have to wait and see. Oh well, I'll live. Maybe. *whimper*
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  • From ANON - Adoramouse on May 19, 2005
    I love this! Honestly, I'm not generally a fan of jealousy as a plot device, but your delivery is just awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (Will you put me on your email notification list?) I'm especially enjoying all the cuddly moments between Naruto and Sasuke lately. I like how even though Sasuke agreed to the bet and is determined to seduce Naruto he doesn't seem to realize that it's actually him that's being pursued. Naruto is so sneaky. :)
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on May 18, 2005
    I swear, you had WAY to much fun writing for Sioux in Chapter 11.*LOL*

    Okay, anyway, I LOVE this fic! While Naruto's buffness startled me, I'm willing to forgive it for some great characterization and wonderful ups and downs. ^.^ I laugh, I swoon, I nearly cry, and I want to throw things at Neji and Gaara! Get away from Sasuke's Naruto! Or, wait.. maybe it's the other way around? Naruto definately is the one calling the shots here and none of the boys chasing him seem to realize it. Besides, Neji and Gaara are too wrapped up in "owning" him. Sure, Sasuke agreed, too, but he'd the only one who gets the fluffy moments. *L*

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing this! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SasukeItachiSmex on May 18, 2005
    Sasuke...what? Sasuke WHAT!? -Pouts- How could you leave it off there!? Then again that was a lovely chapter as they all are. -Shifty glance- But I'm starting to squiiirm because you're making us waiiiit so long. ;.; It's so cruel of you yet I love the torture. -Grins- I love how you POV it from certain areas, and descrive everything....

    AND...

    A butt-squeeze?

    I have never. EVER. Heard of a 'but squeeze'. I laughed so much while I read this. It sounds like me and my girlfriend. She absolutely ADORES horses and I'm scared shitless of them. >> She says she'll throw me over her shoulder and put me on one. -Huffs- ( I doubt that'll happen, but then again I always lose. )

    Shantell: 13507146519476 Me: 0

    And that's not the real estimate. xDD She has a loooot more.

    Keep writing, it's so lovely. -Bounces- I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Yurikai Kurosaki on May 18, 2005
    What do you know! You're such a tease really!!!!!And i'm sure you must laugh whenever someone tells you so!

    Anyway....you're awsome!!! This fic is just...vraiment pas croyable!!!!!I really love it!
    Sasuke is so slow...Is he ever gonna admit it to Naruto? And I sure hope Gaara and Neji won't get in their way!!!!!!!GGGRRR

    Keep it going!!!!^^
    See ya
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  • From ANON - bara, bara-aoi on May 18, 2005
    (c12) AHHHHHHHhh omg, you really had me going in the bath tub there!! Any way i'm enjoying this story muchly, please continue soon ^__^
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  • From fairyvicki on May 18, 2005
    This is amazingly well written. I've been sat here for the last couple of hours thoroughly engrossed. Every time I think Sasuke's getting somewhere you add another little twist (and I die of frustration!). The bath scene had me squealing like a little girl, thinking, "But it can't be this easy - he's going to mess it up!" and then - gah! You're such a tease....

    I'm a new Naruto fan, so I'm not entirely sure how in or out of character anyone is, really. Although at times Sasuke did seem like a bit of a sissy with the horse (he's worse than me). I'm wondering what Neji and Gaara will get up to when they return and since they're going to a show on...Friday there are obviously several more twists up your sleeve, Akai-sensei. I'm very much looking forward to them!

    If you could add me to the email update list, I would be very grateful. My address is available on my profile. Thankies for an amazing fic!
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  • From ANON - NaruSasu FanBoi on May 18, 2005
    I love this fic! Its really well written AND its hot! Why don't one of them admit they like eachother? *grumble*
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - TeenBulma on May 18, 2005
    Tricky tricky! XD *pouts* I thought that was really happening. Oh well, the chapter was still good :D Especially close to the ending. Can't wait for the next update!
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