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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - sorviball on May 24, 2005
    EEEEE!!! The bed scene was so sexy!! Boo to Sakura for interrupting! Ok, so you're making me feel really bad for Neji here. I mean, I'd prefer him over Sasuke, but the way the story's going, I'm gonna say it's a SasuNaru fic. But then, you add that part about how long he's liked Naruto, and nothing's come of it! Be nice to Neji for me k? Maybe he could, I dunno, get with Gaara or something! I just felt so bad for him. It sucks to like someone so long and never have the feelings returned!

    Anyway, the fic is going great and I can't wait for the next chapter!! I just want Naruto and Sasuke to get it on already!!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on May 24, 2005
    Oooooh! Who wouldn't want to wake up to a "naughty" Naruto in the morning?! Ai yi yi! He was givin Sask the works!! Only if he would've kissed him! Sask would've had free reign to do as he pleased! *sigh* Just tell him how you feel Sasuke!!!! lol But yeah their whole bit was just great and poor Sask how embarrassed Naruto kept making him! Ah but that's why we love you! You do so well in making Sask squirm like a worm around Naru which is A-OK with me ^___~

    Ah so we see why Neji is obsessed w/ the blonde fox....Hellz I would be too if I had to kiss him over and over and over again...poor Neji though for lookin like a girl..wonder if Sask was there if he would've had to the role instead *smirks* oooh so do we get to hear Gaara's backstory next??? ^_____________^ Hope so!!! and more naru/saskness!! gaah soo much fun!

    I'ma cry when you leave!! Just one more?? *sigh* It's almost the end of the month...no fair! You'll be fic-postin like crazy when you get back that's for sure ^__~ Anywho, get that next badboy out here soon! Love ya! Matane na no da!!!
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  • From ANON - shuchan on May 24, 2005
    can't there just be a 4som? that would be a lot more simple, and not to mention, yummy!
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  • From ANON - Shikashinigami on May 24, 2005
    *pouts* It's still gonna be Sasuke/Naruto right? I like neji and Gaara and all.... but... *cough* welll.... you know..... Heeeheheeheheheheheh. Keep up the awesome writing though! Ja ne!!
    Shiroi.
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  • From ANON - AkaiTsume on May 24, 2005
    The next chapter is almost entirely from Naruto's pov, so sit tight. ^_^
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  • From Sammei on May 24, 2005
    Oh goodness. I've grown to love this. XD I remember seeing that Udder Butter stuff.. craziness! Anyhow, you say you like constructive criticism instead of one-liners or what not, but.. I don't really know what there is about this that bears criticizing. I really like what you've done with this! Although I'm not sure I can see Neji going all out on the flower thing.. he strikes me as a more subtle sort of guy. Is there going to be more of Gaara in this? I know this is a NaruSasu, but.. Gaara seems pretty one-dimensional as of now. ....and Naruto's obsession with cuddling people and using them as plushies reminds me vaguely of someone I know.. ::shoots a mild glare in Akai's direction::
    Anyhow, could you also put me on your mailing list for when you update? I'm sure I'll talk to you before then, but have fun in Japan!
    luv ya!
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  • From ANON - Neome21 on May 24, 2005
    sigh, your fanfiction is addicting, I've just been reading it all again for the past couple hours despite having to be up for work in less than 6. (really have to stop accidently putting those carrots in). I realized reading through this time how i love a confused Sasuke the way you write him. Because i mean really its obvious in the series that even though he's such a genius he's not exactly thinking clearly most of the time. In light of how many fics have featured naruto as kind of a slut, this is a nice oasis. I think bringing his thoughts out was perfect timing here because it was starting to be really ... not obvious but almost ... that Naruto really did like Sasuke. Plus it gives us that nice added frustration of saying "god sasuke the solution is so simple, what are you doing?!" all in all I'm still completely enthralled by this story and act completely ridiculous when i see that it's updated. thanks for writing it and hope we get to see a little bit more before you head off.
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  • From ANON - Neome21 on May 24, 2005
    sigh, your fanfiction is addicting, I've just been reading it all again for the past couple hours despite having to be up for work in less than 6 >
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  • From ANON - Kayla~ on May 23, 2005
    ..... *cries of how good your story is* .... awesome... tremendous.... terrific... amazing.... *cries some more* ... I love your story, and I got to the end of Ch. 12 and now I am going to be coming here every day to see if you've updated :) I have been writing a SasuNaru fanfiction, but lately I've been caught up with other things and haven't been writing much... and now that I've read your story, I feel like I NEED to write more - with a lotta fluff.... I love you T_T
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  • From Sammei on May 23, 2005
    Alright, I told you I would actually read this someday.. and I am! I'm on chapter 3 now, and I'm loving it! I outright snorted at the "It’s not every day you see someone caress a washing machine and chuckle evilly" bit.. and I really like how you're making Naruto exploit how everyone thinks he's oblivious. Great stuff! And the things you're doing to Sasuke.. I can't help it, I like abusing him, too. XD I'm positive I'll catch up within the next couple of days. I won't bother asking any questions because they might be answered in the chapters I haven't read yet. Anyhow, excellent job!
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  • From ANON - just_me on May 22, 2005
    Wow! It took me a while to read all the chapters, but I did it....*pants for air*
    *clears throat* Anyways, I'm a big Sioux fan already. I really like the way she 'thinks'. *waves banners*
    Ah, and poor Sasuke. I bet he's going to end up crazy and ready for the loonybin after a weekend with Naruto.
    You really turned the blond dobe in a tease. I luv it. *thumbs up*
    I really, really hope you update soon... *begging puppy eyes*
    You're one of my fave's already. *cheers*

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  • From ANON - Clemence on May 22, 2005
    The more I read your fanfic the more I like it :).
    I'm not fond of the Gaara/Neji thing, but I love how you make Naruto turn Sasuke crazy... ^^ And horse-riding was sure an original idea...
    But the next day Sasuke will suffer like hell lol... Even a good massage would have a hard time getting ride of all the cramp ^^

    Anyway, I love the cat and mice game the two of them play... ^^

    PS, do you know where I could find the song you used, "Feline American Princess", I totally didn't knew it and I would love to listen it, it's very funny .
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  • From ANON - pixiequeen on May 21, 2005
    I really liked these updates, especially how you put the horses point of veiw into play. I liked to see my Shika soon too ^_^
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  • From ANON - jzi on May 21, 2005
    hey this is really good. The chapters are longer so nothings really wrong anymore lol! BUT, it would be much better if we readers were to see a update twice a week. Once a week is not enough, and the more i read the longer i cna't wait. So....yea update faster lady!!!! lol just playing ^_^ (though it would be nice)
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  • From ANON - MindGames5150 on May 21, 2005
    I love it! I absolutely adore it! I can't wait for the next chaper!
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