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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - A.H. on February 01, 2006
    MUAHAHAH! NEW UPDATE!!! XD Almost fell over meh chair when I saw the new chapter. >.o You better keep writing after this is over! XDDDD
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  • From ANON - R.E on February 01, 2006
    i loved keep it . um do you have your epilouge typed down yet, just wondering.Update soon!
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  • From Inuzuka on January 31, 2006
    That was actually a really, really good fic. Not only was it AU, but it was college. I actually managed to read a 22 chapter college fic. The hell did you do to me?!?

    The music thing--Naruto didn't have to have such shit music taste!--and...occasional dialogue things bothered me, plus the thing about Naruto being obsessed with his body--he never gave a shit about looks--got on my nerves, but it was splendidly written. I've actually been avoiding this fic, having heard it's praise, seen it as a 22 chapter college fic, and hated it, but I regret it. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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  • From ANON - Flayne on January 31, 2006
    Brilliant Story. Brilliant Writings. Brilliant Author.

    Well, I think that are things you already know...XD

    Actually, there is a question I've wanted to ask about the story after reading the memories of Sasuke (though couldn't find time to ask it til now....*drop*) and that is:

    Their house was burnt down right? And his parents were caught in the flame, too and therefore burnt to death. But why were there 'blood everywhere then?

    (Ok, I know of the possibility of something in the room having crushed them or something, but... Well, I think I still keep to the image that Itachi slaughtered them all, cuz angsty-psychotic!Uchihas are just the most appealing for me. Hoho. XD)

    Love your story all the same and hope you'll update soon. (And write more NaruSasu fics after finishing this one. XP)

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  • From ANON - Green-Kitty on January 29, 2006
    Great plot and its nice that you have a chase and dont get into the naughty too soon...I luv gaara in this and everyone else. Even though they're AU they fit into the story line
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  • From ANON - Itoshii-youma on January 29, 2006
    “We bet on who could get you to kiss him first, Naruto.” Three pairs of eyes swung over to Gaara, who, to his credit, didn’t flinch. “If you kissed one of the three of us, the other two had to back off.”

    Since Naruto didnt know that Gaara initiated the bet, why would his eyes swing to Gaara, it should only be two pairs of eyes. Anyways, just felt like saying that, i have no other complaints, i really like this story and i am a great NaruSasu fan, not that i mind sasunaru, but they make Naruto so "gurly" and its infurianting since we all know Naruto is SEME! U keep the characters true to themselves, and added a touch of flirtatous Naruto..which is just totally awesome, i hope u update soon.
    awesome
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  • From ANON - Shadowkid on January 28, 2006
    wow.

    That's it, just... wow
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  • From ANON - Lantherien on January 27, 2006
    Wow....I;m wrapped. This is so different to many of the others out there, I'm glued and impressed. I love the real life insercurities and living styles. Please email me when you update. Kate_kit15@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - AngelWing1138 on January 26, 2006
    This is such an AWESOME fanfic! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! You're an awesome writer, and this was so well written! I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what happens. And then it's the Eprolouge(I can't spell) and then it's over, right? That means I can re-read it over and over again whenever I'm bored and want something good to read! Whee! ^^
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on January 26, 2006
    I truly love this story! And the effect is even better when I'm listening to 'cold' by Crossfade while I'm reading this story!!! No wonder you have so many reviews! And all your chapters are so long! This story is awesome and I can't wait for your next chapter!!! It's really touching and sweet and I'll be damned if anyone doesn't like it! Even if they're not into M/M or Naruto! I am a true fan of this story! ^_________^ Update soon!!!!! Thankyou for starting this story in the first place!
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  • From ANON - SeveredWings on January 25, 2006
    My dear author, all I can say is 'wow'. You have an anazing talent, and no I am not just here to stoke your ego. You really do. Sentence structure, grammar, spelling, and plot were great. This is a very beautiful piece of work, and really look forward to seeing it through. Although, seeing the end would mean it has ended. That really sucks, but you know what they say about all good things, ne?

    I wanted to give you props. to for the little trail ride...LOL. I ride and train horses, and you did an amazing job in discribing it. AND, even though the characters are OCC at times, you mingled there 'true' natures lovely. Seeing Sasuke want to pee himself from riding almost made me piss my pants! And Naruto and scary movies???? *Holds in belly laughs*...and not even touching ghost busters! Also, I liked to takes on the darker aspects of the boys lives...Sasuke with the fire, Naruto and the being alone...Gaara and his family ties. It's a rare treat to find an AU fic and acutally enjoy it.

    Thanks again for putting so much time and effort into this. I can see it means a lot to you, thanks for sharing. Hope to see an update soon.

    SeveredWings
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  • From ANON - Arya on January 25, 2006
    Please finish this is the best NauSas i've read in awhile!!!
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  • From ANON - Eevina on January 25, 2006
    fuck, fuck, fuck, i hate when sasuke ruins naruto's times with neji, and yet, i hate when sasuke hangs out with naruto and the fact that he is going home with him?????????? Its ok to see Gaara and neji, esp neji, but the hell with sasuke go out with sakura, do something what a virgin would do.(not have sex )Sasuke ur becoming to be a bitch. oh, soon ur gonna be my fuckin asswipe.*she chuckles and walks into the mist* *she trips on a rock and bleed then she rises like a phoenix rising from it's ashes* i hope its sasuke's ashes but hopes he aint coming back. I LOVE UR STORY, DONT MIND WAT I WROTE, THATS HOW I FEEL ABT SASUKE, LIKE A POEM I WROTE.
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  • From ANON - R.E on January 25, 2006
    well i liked wat u wrote abt, but i'm not to sure that i really really liked it.Um...... i don't think i like sasuke's jealousy and attitude, well i love his attitude but i mostly meant i diidn't like when he's jealous. other than that the fic was good, try updating another chapter, or r u going to update another chapter?Just curious.

    P.S where's the females in the story(except sakura)
    Hey i'm a teen trying to do my thing.
    Really hard to get through. nice story. keep up with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on January 25, 2006
    I totally DOUBT any of the thousand reviews you've reseaved so far are flames!!! This story is really good! Really tense, but that's what keeps me interested! Though I kinda feel REALLY sorry for Naruto, Sasuke, Neji AND Garra. They're having a hard time establishing proper stable relationships. Is the moral of this story how troublesome it is if you're gay or something?(=^.^=) Love your story!
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