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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 17, 2005
    Aahh! You, evil, evil person!!! Do you have any idea what you're DOING??? You're friggin' humanizing the "enemy", baka! *pouts* And now I feel bad for both Neji AND Gaara.......... >.< (lol) Okay, yeah. Thanks for the update -- I absolutely love where you're taking this!!! Very cute/touching chapter.....I especially like how well you have characterized the... well, characters. ^^ Oh, and the "movie thing" was a riot -- very adorable idea, and quite well done! I look forward to seeing how Sasuke uses that knowledge in the future........ *evil grin* ^___~ Also, something I noticed: wasn't Neji going to come pick up his notes that evening? Naruto said he would be "home", but then he went to the movies, soooo..... *shrugs* Just thought I'd mention it. The way I see it, either you just overlooked it, or you have big plans for an angsty "Neji scene" in the next chappy and I'm wasting my time, lol. ^___~ I can't wait for your update -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Metranome on August 17, 2005
    Salutations! Glad to see you're back at last. Those were great new chapters, and it's refreshing to see Naruto finally get his. He's been such a damn tease this whole time, he deserves it. :) I hope Japan was a wonderful experience for you. I guess I don't need to ask you to update; after all, you've probably had enough of that for now. Hmm...how to end this review. Um...peace out? Don't hurt me. *grins sheepishly*
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  • From ANON - Lush on August 17, 2005
    Please put me on the list for information regarding your updates.

    Beautifully written, I'm eager to see more -- yet a tiny part of me squeaks that Sasuke, the typical dark, brooding beauty, isn't getting enough attention from fans -- or from you as an author. What do you think? I'm charmed by Naruto, loving his muscularity and appearance, (my favorite part remains when he showed off at the gym, his muscles popping in his arms... everyone was staring; ().()!) and Gaara has an interesting past, though it isn't something I personally enjoy ruminating on.

    Thanks for an awesome fiction, and please keep up the great work.

    -Much affection, Lush
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  • From ANON - Terry on August 17, 2005
    I'm at the halfway point, and so far I LOVE this fic! The April Fool's joke was great! I love this competition b/t Sasuke, Gaara, and Neji so far. Personally, I love Neji, but I'm all for Naruto/Sasuke or Naruto/Gaara. Question: Why did you want to make Naruto the tallest when he's the shortest in the anime. He got redemption in his alternate universe? Anyway, great fic. Gotta read the rest.
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on August 17, 2005
    LOL naruto scared of horror movies...thats awesome =) great chapter, hope your computer doesnt give you too much problems for next weeks update.....>
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  • From ANON - ann on August 17, 2005
    hey!! i follow this ficcie closely, and can i join your update mailing?? i love this fiction.. always makes me laugh! u rock!! =]
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on August 17, 2005
    Hello!

    Wooohoo... Another great chapter. Nice litter sidestory about Gaara but to be honest I'm not a big fan of Gaara so euphoric or sad about it like some others.

    The cinema scene was hilarious. Who thought both of them were such "crybabies" regarding such ordinary things like horror movies or horses :)
    Whenever they will visit me (hey, it's allowed to dream, isn't it :D ) I think I'm going to invite them to a horror movie and we will go there by horse :D Just to torture them and then invite them to a steak house... Bah, I babble stupid things :)

    However I like your story very much and I beg you not to stop writing!

    By the way: What the hell is a studmuffin?

    Ciao,
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - nicole on August 17, 2005
    I love this story could you email me at scott1000@verizon.ne when you update thanks

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  • From ANON - kataru on August 17, 2005
    AAAERRRRRRRGHHHHHH!!!! I knew this coming.... I HATE SSSIISSSSSY NARUTO!!!! damit Naruto, I'll gonna beat your WIMPY ASS and torture you will lots of HORROR till you act COMPLETELY like a REAL MAN! *naruto squealling gives me the creeps* X_X *lay dead*
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  • From ANON - kureno on August 17, 2005
    Hello! I have been reading this wonderful fic for sometime now and I must say that it is a personal favorite. The character interactions are great. I don't know whether you will consider this (or if I even spelled whether right) but I kinda was wondering about Sasukes background. Where is his family through this becasue I think most of the other characters family situations have been at least touched upon but not his really. Does Naruto know about Sasukes family or does the family situation mean anthing really. I was just wondering about that. Another interesting thing you might consider writting about is (since it seems that they all appear to have gone to the same school at the same time) is Neji or Gaaras point of view of Sasuke and Narutos freindship/relationship. I'm sure they saw something way before the two even realized it. Just things that you haven't really looked into much that you might consider going into, if the next chapters haven't already been written and planned. Keep on Keeping on!
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  • From Sammei on August 17, 2005
    Naruto gets what's coming to him? How very innnnnteresting. ^_^ I'm a total fan of NaruSasu, but.. this chapter... aw, can't he be with Gaara, too?! >_> It's really sad what happened to him. Way to make me sympathize with the underdog! ^_^
    ...and I hate scary movies, too. I can't wait to see how Sasuke torments him with that information. ^_^
    Looking forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on August 17, 2005
    FINALLY, I was able to sit down and read the entire thing! Whew....and still no action...although I haven't read the side story yet. But anyway, this is an awesome story. That dream sequence in ch. 12 was EVIL! I so thought that was real! And the trial ride was hilarious. I was rolling on the floor laughing. It brought back memories of my first time riding and just how sore I was. Although most of my soreness came the day after. Made me so happy. *sniff, wipes tear away*
    Moving on....I love your style of writing. It's great! There are like no spelling or grammatical errors in any of your chapters which is a feat in and of itself. Your characterization is great and I don't think any of them are too OOC. The only thing I would wish for would be for Sasuke to wake up and tell Naruto how he feels, but that would speed things up and end his torture and he's way too much of a prick in the anime to be given a reprieve. ;)
    I'm looking forward to your next chapter and feel free to add me to your mailing list or whatever. I forget if you wanted us to email u directly. Also I would love to hear about your time in Japan. I'm so jealous! I want to go!
    Great job!
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 17, 2005
    =) Everytime I see the emails you send me, I go like this: ^_____________________________________________^ YEAH!!!! You updated!!! Today when I checked my email and I smiled so big my face could've split in half. It makes me so happy to read this story. So very happy. You are the best! You totally rule! *bows to you*

    =) Heheehe. Naruto actually screamed. LMAO! That's hilarious. Sasuke will remember that night forever. Nyaahahahahahaha!
    Also, It seems Naruto is going to have lots of problems with Sasuke, Gaara, and Neji.....man. I can't wait some more. This story always makes my day.
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  • From ANON - Myuki-chan on August 16, 2005
    The joys of a horror movie. XD

    Aww... poor Gaara. *pats him*

    It was a lovely chapter, as always XD And how much longer do we have to wait before finding out what Naruto's little project is? :D
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on August 16, 2005
    Spiffy to have you back, indeed. And I adored The Amityville Horror's newest version very much myself. Carry on with the goods, ne?
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