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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Kelly on August 28, 2005
    Hey, OMG! I love that scene, the scene Naruto kissed Sasuke while he was sleeping! OMG! Its so romantic!! >
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  • From ANON - dagget on August 28, 2005
    meh, never mind i'll assume it was the longer one. in which case nice job. me likey!
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  • From ANON - dagget on August 28, 2005
    wait now, which was the final version now? was it the first or second? i got a little confused. like the part with neji and tenten actually happen or did you change your mind?
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on August 28, 2005
    ah ha u're back again! an extended version of chapter 17 XD and HELL YES NARUTO KISSED SASUKE! Did sasuke even noticed?! XD now neji n gaara had to back off~ XD im sure naruto will b so pissed dat the three of them used him as a bet thingy; can't wait to see that arc coming around. motto onegaishimasu! m/
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 28, 2005
    To begin with: I definitely prefer the final version.
    Apart from that: I LOOOVE this chapter!!!
    That Sasu/Naru bedroom talk is so thrilling!
    And will Naruto finally take care of Sasuke, I mean "properly"? Like a kiss in a public place to begin with?? :)
    And Neji finding a possible new crush is a wonderful idea!! Especially lippy TenTen :)
    Update asap, at least soooner than last time, pleeeease!

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  • From ANON - ~aki~ on August 28, 2005
    uwaahhh.. II LLOOVVEE this CHATER!!! omg golly they are so kawaii!! ^^, this is what i'm waiting for!!! the pov of naruto!! wahehehe omg i hope that sasuke can say what he feels already.. but anywei irelly like naruto's thoughts!!! you really made my day!!! your story is so awesome.. i hope you keep it up!!Ü thanks!!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 28, 2005
    ^_________^ heh heh. Poor Naruto. Hee hee. Man, someone needs to slap Sasuke upside his freakin' head. He needs to just admit that he loves Naruto, and, boom, they'd be together. He's making it harder for himself. *sighs* oh well. Also, looks like Neiji found himself a friend, or sparring partner. *smirk* heh.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. Well, you know I have to wait anyway. ^_^; This story is freakin' awesome. ^_~
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 28, 2005
    Squeeeeee!!! *glomps you* You updated!!! Yippeeeeeeeee!!! ^^ Absolutely wonderful chapter, as always -- I can't wait to see where Neji's and Ten-Ten's "relationship" goes, as well as the Kiba/Hinata one and who you choose for Gaara........ Oh, and let's not forget about what will happen between Naruto and Sasuke when they wake up together... and hopefully in a compromising position of some sort, lol! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and thanks again for the update! *random chocolate giving* Ja ne!!!
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  • From on August 27, 2005
    I wish you best of luck with school starting and all. It's the same for me, actually, but I don't have a brilliant mind to write something [and thus continuously update XD]!

    Mm... I really liked this chapter ^^. It was cute and your humor never ceased to amuse me XD Wee! The appearance of Ten-Ten rocked; she's cool, made some Neji!action, and all that good stuff.

    Hm, whoa, I suck at reviews.
    Erm... anyway!

    I hope you update soon [and enjoy the last of your summer holidays], please and thank you ^^!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2005
    Oh, wow. I like Ten Ten a lot. It's so rare to find good, strong female characters in stories with yaoi. I love yaoi very much, but it does sadden me to see how badly the female population is represented sometimes. So I'm glad you rewrote the chapter with her in it. The first version was funny, but Naurto waking up in the night in Sasuke's bed was so cute. Jeez, I love your story, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lo on August 27, 2005
    Great chapter. Though it might not be a bad idea to start thinking of ending it. This is a great story, and I do not want to see it piddle out. Keep up the good work. I hope to see other ideas from you. I like the way your mind works.
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on August 27, 2005
    Ahh, another great chapter, as usual. I'm so glad you used the "I smell smoke" comment. I used that before (on icaf conf.) and no one got it. I'm glad there's someone else outside my family that gets it.
    This was a cute chapter. I like your Tenten, she's not so crazy for Neji. Yay! And when Naruto kissed Sasuke, I kept chanting, "He won the bet. He won the bet." BUT HE DOESN'T KNOW!!!! I keep thinking there will be a fight towards the end where either Neji or Gaara gets kissed by Naruto and Naruto finds out and bursts all their bubbles (except Sasuke's) by saying that he kissed Sasuke first. I could just see that coming.
    Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Lazuli on August 27, 2005
    GAH!

    So ... close.... soooo very very close. *thwaps both Sasuke and Naruto for their thick-headness and gives Sasuke an extra whap for his pride.

    ^_^ Loved the chapter, look forward to more. The way you capture humor and seriousness and just the way you write is simply fun. ^_^ Can't wait to see the next part!
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  • From ANON - nicole on August 27, 2005
    i'm glad you finally updated plz continue
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  • From ANON - Myuki-chan on August 27, 2005
    This chapter was so incredibly cute XD
    AND SASUKE WON HAHA ...only he doesn't know that, does he? XD Damn you Sasuke, why must you be so stubborn? Just say it already lol XD
    And I agree, that first draft is a bit ooc for Sasuke but too funny to get rid of XD
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