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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Ketchup on September 05, 2005
    I'm glad to see the story continue after your vacation.
    I love this story with all its twists and the chasing around!
    I'm still wondering what Naruto's hiding from everyone...
    When you find your inspiration building again - please definitely continue writing CN.
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  • From ANON - Shez on September 05, 2005
    ... My entire message was cut off because I hearted the end of the first sentence. I feel sad. :( Well, I'm not typing the whole thing over again, so in summary: I luff this story to bits and pieces and this chapter was no exception. ^^
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  • From ANON - Shez on September 05, 2005
    If reviews are what you want, then review I shall.
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  • From ANON - pixiequeen on September 05, 2005
    I haven't been reveiwing because I'm terribly lazy. I'm sorry. I haven't been dissapointed at all with the updates what so ever, I think they are just as brilliant as usual. It's slow moving but I like that.
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  • From megladon129 on September 05, 2005
    So tired...Last bit of filler, I swear.
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  • From ANON - Tina on September 05, 2005
    Both of your stories were good. I really what to know what happens next. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on September 03, 2005
    I actually rather thought the first draft of your story was much better. I didn't think Sasuke was noticably out of character at all. And the rewrite cut off at such an inconclusive point....That's going to confuse a few people. Anyway, good work on this chapter, and I hope to see more in the near future. :)
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  • From ANON - MiyaJadecube on September 03, 2005
    Teehee...what a pair. XD Well first time reviewer...but thats becuase I only just found this little jem. Boy, where have I been? >< Anyway, great work here...I especially am enjoying your newest chappy...woot! Bring in the TenTen...kick-butt girls...well...kick butt...o_< I'm kinda wondering what role she will be playing in the future of this story...*coughloveinterest* And can I be a fangirl and say, 'Squeee! NaruxSasu! Kawaii no desu?!' ^_^ I'm glad you did the rewrite in this chappy as well, like others have said, although I agree that the 'ooc Sasuke' was just too darn funny. XD But...*sniffles* they were just too darn cute in bed. v_v I'm such a fangirl at heart....

    Keep up the glompable work Akai-san! *bows*

    ~MIYA
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  • From ANON - TeenBulma on September 01, 2005
    Haha chapter 17 is the best! Im SO glad you rewrote it because you thought sasuke was OOC, because i like the rewritten part ALOT :D I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Kali S. on September 01, 2005
    haHA! Tenten makes her appearance!!!!! ^_^ I just love that girl...she's the perfect match for Neji, in my opinion. And the perfect thing so that he leaves Naruto alone! God, Naruto and Sasuke are so cute together...Sasuke-kun's like a little kid when he's half asleep *giggle*.
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  • From ANON - Greenie (too lazy to log in) on August 29, 2005
    Hello!
    Another fine chapter!
    However, I must comment on something I've noticed continuously throughout this story.
    You are, I'm afraid, inadvertently calling Sasuke a girl. ^^;
    Allow me to clarify please!
    When you use the term 'brunette' to describe him, you are in fact using the feminine spelling.
    The masculin spelling is, 'brunet'. I know it's not much of a big difference, but it makes the whole world! ^^
    I know it's a small thing, but you said you wanted reviews that would help you! So I hope that made some kind of difference.
    Also, I noticed (I think I said this in my last review too) that you mentioned Sasuke had a job, but you've never once mentioned it again. I was just confused by what happened. Does he still have the job? Or does he simply opt to not go?
    It's not an overly good idea to mention something in your writing and then completely disregard it. Or did I simply miss it being mentioned again?
    And... I have one last question... The first part of this chapter, before you note, was the THE chapter right? Just checking! ^^
    Ne ways,
    I would like to know if you'd be able to e-mail me when you update, if that's at all possible and you can drop me an e-mail to if you'd like to comment on my review.
    Anyway, it was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one! ^^ great job!
    ~Greenie
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on August 29, 2005
    I agree. Your original draft *was* funny, but the revised version was better for the story line. ::grins:: And I love Ten-Ten's entrance into the plot. Another Great Chapter! Keep up the good work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Sammei on August 29, 2005
    I LOVED that chapter! I liked it better than your first draft, though that had it's moments, too.
    I'm glad you're putting TenTen into it, and I really like how you're doing her character. Are you eventually going to make them a pairing? She's sure got a lot of guts talking to him like that. O_o; I can't remember.. did you bring Shikamaru into this already? I can't wait to see what other people you put into this fic.
    I know you like constructive reviews but I honestly can't say there's anything I'd want you to change. It was just that good. Hehe. I wonder who you're going to pair Gaara off with, if everyone ends up being in a couple at the end. But anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Engelen on August 28, 2005
    Since I didn't see you go on AIM the whole week I was starting to think you might be dead ;3;
    I'm happy you're not D:

    See, I wrote a super long review on this, but it didn't get posted, and I'm too lazy to rewrite that again, so I'll just say that, as always, this roxxors.

    *sends you cookies and lots of love*
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  • From ANON - okami kaze on August 28, 2005
    yay, an update!!!! wootness. ok, so i think that was really awesome. now that i got THAT out of the way....*takes deep breath* WHENARETHEYGETTINGTOGETHERANDBEINGALLHAPPYBOUNCINGLIKEBUNNIES?????????? *gaspchokewheeze* actually, that's not wat i was going to say. i was going to say that i think you're doing a very good job of keeping everyone IC.


    ~okami

    PS. can't wait for an update
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