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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Kali S. on September 05, 2005
    Heh heh heh...^_^ I agree, it's not my favorite chapter...but Sasuke is just oh-so-keyoote with his pretzels...and Tenten totally rocks!!! ^_~ You better make her and Neji end up together! Of course you will! How can we leave poor Neji alone? Adding to the fact, Tenten is the perfect girl for him! Naruto shouldn't be his type...too much drama. Tenten is much more cut-to-the-chase, in a typical, perfect lawyer fashion.

    Now, Gaara...*sigh* -_-;; He will unfortunatelly grow old alone. That is, if he doesn't die at a young age. I can see him dying in a freak scuba trip, though...he got chomped on by a shark...that'd be his perfect death. Or crushed by waves while surfing. I can't see him getting in a car accident or falling out of a plane or committing suicide.

    Damn, I'm morbid! ^_~ and don't I like it! Anywhoo, I don't think this chappy was half-bad...so don't feel down-in-the-dumpster! Just remember, a frown is a smile upside down, and Naruto spelt backwards is Oturan! ^___^
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  • From ANON - vashta on September 05, 2005
    Just wondering, how much longer is this going to be? I really like it and am thouroughly happy for new chaps, but I am ready to move ahead. Ok, I don't want to be a complainer. I am enjoying this and think that you are a very good Author.
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  • From ANON - Cereal on September 05, 2005
    Um, my review got cut off. Sorry! Basically, I wanted to say was that it was interesting how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship grew, and how Tenten entered. Pre-law suits her so well. Anyways, keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Cereal on September 05, 2005
    I've been following this for some time, and I LOVE it
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  • From ANON - lo on September 05, 2005
    I enjoyed that chapter, but I ahev enjoyed all of the chapteres. I love the interaction between the characters, I love it how thier personalities come out and just mesh so well. This story is great!!! I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of it. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Myuki-chan on September 05, 2005
    D: What is Naruto doing with all the gardening stuff~? XD Will we find out soon?
    And what show?! XD
    It seems Neji just /might/ be out of the running after that quote from Tenten but... Gaara still seems to be determined.
    I love your story~ There's no way I'm ditching it because I have to know how it ends. O___O And it always makes me so happy to read your fics XD
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on September 05, 2005
    *sniggers* ......Sasuke........pretzles............. *dies laughing* OMG!!! How awesome is that??? XDDDD I wonder if he'd like dark chocolate covered pretzles, hm? Dark chocolate isn't TOO sweet, and with the salt on the pretzle.......... ^___~ Very cute/intriguing chapter, even it it was only a transition. I can't wait for the "show" "tomorrow night", lol. Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on September 05, 2005
    Ohh, nice transition chapter. There are so many things that I am curious about...what is Naruto doing? I know he is working for Tsunade but what, it is going to be very interesting when you uncover it.

    Sasuke has won the bet and the poor thing doesn't even know it XD, I like that. I like the slow dance they perform as their relationship evolves. All the teasing, all the feelings will pay off later as long as people don't get in the way (and we know how interesting misunderstandings make everything).

    If you need a break from writing the fic, you should take it, even if it will make us readers sad (I know I will be) but burning out is never good and if you need the time, take it. Usually a fresh eye to a work works well.

    Good luck and as usual, I can't wait to see the rest.
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  • From ANON - Kero-chan on September 05, 2005
    OMG!! Please write more!!! *weep* I really like reading this story since it's so good and I wanna know what happens! XD It's great!
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on September 05, 2005
    Okay. I am still impressed by the way you have managed to create an atmosphere of reality. The characters seem to have grown up 'in character'. Authors who overdo their work and then blame it on growth always frustrate me. Some things just don't fit, no matter how you grow up.
    Now, I only found one thing that bothered me, and I doubt anyone else will care. But, as I currently derive my income from a job at the aforementioned SuperWal*Mart. I find it necessary to inform you that the call over the P.A. would have been for "An associate to the Lawn and Garden department for Customer assistance". See what I mean? I doubt it is worth editing.
    Great job and keep it up. I look forward to the next chapter with relish, and mustard too.

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  • From ANON - Elk on September 05, 2005
    Excellent! As always ^^ The chapter really got me curious about what Naruto really is doing and it gets me so damn frustrated to know when both guys are gonna spill their feelings for each other! (In a good way of frustration! ^^;;) But yet, even though I want to know when they'll confess, I bet that's the time when the fic finishes and ends, ne? So...keep making more chapters! lol The more teasing, the better! This chapter is really great, it's still good! I hope you'll get your inspiration back, til next time!

    -Elk
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  • From ANON - aimee on September 05, 2005
    NOO!! dont give up... this is my favourite story!! i check for updates all the time even thou i have alerts from ff so i know that im wasting my time but i get so excited that i want to know whats going to happen!! i know what lack of inspiration is like though, but CN has so many little things that keep cropping up that really anything could happen next so you can include ANYTHING and arent stuck to a strict story plan. thats what i always do - over detail each part of my story so that when it comes to actually writing it, ive got bored and move onto a new idea but i am going to try to stick to one thing now as im attempting my first naruto fic.

    still, even if you do leave CN for a bit and write some other stuff to clear your head, im sure it'll still be just as good and i'll be reading it, as long as you dont abandon CN, as then i might cry!!
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  • From ANON - ck on September 05, 2005
    NO! Whatever I can do to keep you interested in this fic I WILL DO! I had to wait for months for more! Please don't deprive me of it again! You have one of the best characterizations of all the characters. I love how you keep them the way they are, but you don't try to transpose everything that happens in the real storyline into this time and world. Plus I am a HUGE narusasu fan, but I find more sasunaru fics out there. You have always kept me interested in the story and with this number of long chapters, that is hard to do. This is my FAVORITE fic on adultfan right now! Granted, reading more from you is good, but I'd really like to continue reading this one on a fairly regular basis until it is done. However, if you think it is a choice of not very good chapters or a break, then I vote for the break. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on September 05, 2005
    Hee heee hee. I wish I was standing next to Sasuke to see the look on Gaara's face. LOL. I wonder what Naruto's working on...hmmm. I'm also wonder what Naruto's going to do to Sasuke on their date. Hee hee. I can't wait to find out. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ravyn on September 05, 2005
    God I love this story. I can't see what happens. Update soon I'm on the edge of my seat.

    luv
    Ravyn

    ps. Sorry about the super short review. I just got off work and I frickn tired. I leave a nice long review next chapter K? So update asap. ;P
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