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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Kim on September 06, 2005
    Gawds, you're an amazing writer! I love your plot and how the characters are developing.

    Will Neji and Tenten develop a closer relationship? I hope so. Their current relationship is funny, what with all the arguing and stuff. Don't stop writing!
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  • From ANON - mike on September 06, 2005
    awesome story so far. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on September 06, 2005
    I kinda like this chapter you know... I like that when Naruto said, "For one night, you belong to me, and Im taking advantage of that", I sense something happening smoothingly, lovable... sweet in the future~ Hahahahaha! What happen what happen next!?!?!?!????
    I WANNA KNOW!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION A LOT!!!!! >.
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 06, 2005
    I like this chapter, things usually are akward when a relationship transforms into something deeper and more intimate. It's like stepping on ice, you never know if it's thick enough, right?
    Right now I can't wait for the next chapter!! Will they finally get closer?! I hope so!!!!!
    And what about Gaara? Neji found himself a girl but our sweet, adorable, lonely Gaara, what will happen with him?
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Puchu on September 06, 2005
    mwaaaaaah~~! don't stoooopppp~~!!! TT__TT I want to read more~! more! more!!! soon!! please, please, more! gimme more!!! more droolable, lovely, lot, smexy, cute fic!

    amazing chapter, amazing fic. keep up the great work, and keep it up soon, ya hear!! ^^;
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  • From ANON - - on September 06, 2005
    well ;_; this is the reason i don't write reviews that often: cause aff.net hates my beautiful reviews.
    anyway ;_; i'm too sleepy to rewrite, so just know that naruto rules all ;D and i love the innocence that u gave naruto in this chapter - like when he said "it was hard not to" - that was just way sweet. increased sweetness and hotness factor 50 times over lol :P
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  • From ANON - - on September 06, 2005
    no breaks no breaks!!! now is when the actual narusasu will begin, man!!!!!! you can't break here ;_; I'd die!!! you know what we fans have to go thru to read NaruSasu ;_; it's veryyyy rare...and good ones are even rarerrrr :S so keep writing. actually, i liked the previous chapter and this chapter. i hope u are not offended by me saying this, but u shouldnt have posted ur previous version of the chapter along with it. because, in my head, that part left an impression ;_; and when compared to the actual chapter, it was very ooc. but, i lovedddd the chapter! i even loved this one
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  • From Sammei on September 06, 2005
    "You're freaking cute when you sleep, god damn you!" Love it. ^_^ And I seriously am having a memory lapse, cuz I don't remember what show he's talking about.. ahh, so confused. >_> I didn't really like this chapter as compared to the other ones, but it was still good. It felt a little shorter, somehow. I'm not complaining though.. whatever you feel like it. Hehe. Especially with damned classes starting up again.. anyhow, I'm really interested to see where the whole Neji and Tenten thing goes, and who you're going to (maybe?) pair Gaara up with, if anyone. And Orochimaru... :shudder: I was hoping he wouldn't be in this fic. Scary. I would quit if he was my boss. I hope he doesn't try to molest Sasuke. O_O

    Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - jess on September 06, 2005
    It was really good. This chapter was ONE of my favorites. I wonder where Naruto's taking Sasuke, I wonder whats going to happen *gets crazed look*. Update soon or else lol joking ^_^ But yea...update soon 0_0... or else
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  • From ANON - adri on September 06, 2005
    DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS FIC!!!!! Please continue it and update soon!!!! T-T
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on September 06, 2005
    Awwww, get that inspiration a-going. Mine is low too, so I must divert my attention to such wonderful stories like your own. You can't fail me!!!
    Great chapter though. And just b/c there's no smut, doesn't mean it's not a good chapter.
    Keep on writing.
    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Hao on September 06, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO if u will stop i will hunt u down and make you gimme all of the story!!!!! i love it, i read all the chapters i missed and this story is so great!!!!!!! i can;t wait for more!!! pleas dont stop!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2005
    I cracked up when I read Sasuke loved unsalted pretzels! It was great because I also have a soft spot for them. Naruto could buy Sasuke pretzels for Valentines, lol.

    Dare I say it, but is Neji moving on? I'm glad for him. I actually do feel sorry for him and Gaara because of how unrequited their feelings are. TenTen would be good for Neji and she already gets him into active (and really interesting) discussions. I wonder if Gaara will ever find someone. My inner fangirl wants him either in a lonely unsocial existence or a loving relationship with Naruto.

    And Naruto! For however smart he seems to be (I think of his journal), he is really in denial. I turned into a pile of mush when sleepy!adorable!Sasuke asked Naruto to kiss him. Awww. :>
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  • From ANON - jigglyjellosocks on September 06, 2005
    HUZZAH!! another fab chapter!I lurvey lurve this fic so much!!!!!Just makes my day!u know why? cus its so suspenseful and never bores me! So many events in one chappie!i wish i could give ya some ideas but i really cant think of nuthin! but yanno you's got some major talent there.you can make the story long and all yet exciting and i just wanna read more and more!Rock on!
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on September 05, 2005
    yeah! another chapter..i really like the blushing Naruto..he's sooooo cute..i like how Sasuke is teasing him. i like how Neiji is slowly being eased out of the picture with TenTen. keep up the great work!
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