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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Chris Jackson on September 14, 2005
    Ok, I should have done this a while ago, I love your work. This story has made me so happy its stupid. I look forward to reading it and love it when you up date. I know sometimes it must be hard to keep going or you want someone to really give you some good feed back. Well just know that I love what you write and I am always looking forward to your next post. I hope in some small way that makes you feel more enthusiastic about your writing.

    Peace
    Chris
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  • From ShadowsCall on September 13, 2005
    ^^; I'm usually too lazy to review (ironic, seeing as how I'm a review whore myself), but I wanted to at least remember to do so now. I love this story to pieces, it's honestly one of the few fan fictions I read anymore. It's funny but also developes a pretty interesting plot at the same time. Very well written too. ^^;; One of my favorite Naruto fan fiction quotes come from this, and I actually use it (and credit you of course) as a signature on y!hosting. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - greenbeans on September 13, 2005
    if you don't write right now, you will have a very ornery naruto x sasuke fan clawing at your door, fingernails scratching insistently at its surface and there it is do you hear that!?! please write more.
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  • From ANON - angel ran on September 13, 2005
    Nuu, sniff, i would have reviewed sooner but i was without internet for a week or so o_O i'll try to avoid lazyness ;D Veeery delighted to have the new chapter to read though!!!! Eee! It's sad that i can't last long without fanfics to feed me...O_O Especially this one..gaaah the tension is just getting better and better! Kyaaa~~!! It's the kind of fic that feeds my brain even when i'm not reading it....*replays tasty sasunaru fic snippets throughout the day*...@___@;; And now with Naruto and Sasuke teasing each other all the time since they've become better friends...makes me happyyyyyy! And that kiss!!!!!!!!! eeexcellent...Mwahaha, Naruto, you can't escape now!! You've been ensnared by Sasuke's tastyness! XDDDDD *happydance* Really really looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully you will find motivation to write it!! *^^* I will also try to be diligent with reviewing (bluthering about my addiction...), if that helps in any way O__O;; *bows and scrapes* (ooo, i sent my friend the linky to this fic and she also really loves it!!...hmm...i wonder if she knows there is a new chapter!!! X3) Thanks again for the update!!
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  • From ANON - KT Ryn on September 13, 2005
    WRITE MORE!!! Sorry, i will actually attempt to be constructive now. Well you certainly have a VERY nice handle on "romantic moments" - seriously. I love how you can describe exactly what's going on without overkilling the moment. I always get these perfect mental pictures in my mind which is really . . . uhhh . . . nice . . . . I'm bad! I do look forward, very much, to seeing some more "action" soon. Umm . . . I really don't have any complaints about it. I just want to know WHAT HAPPENS! Okay, you probably already have this all worked out in your mind, but for what it's worth, I think Naruto and Sasuke should get together (obviously), I have always been a BIG fan of Tenten with Neji so i was thrilled to see her in this story, and Gaara . . . i have to be honest - i don't like Gaara so you can do whatever you want to him (i'm a horrible person!). But even with the "minor" characters (Neji, Tenten, Gaara, etc.) it would still be nice to get to see what happens to them. you know . . . what they "do" after they realize Naruto is Sasuke's. well that's about it for now. I know this may sound silly but if you ever need any help just let me know ok? I know I have been using atrocious spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammer, etc. but I actually can write and do some writing myself so if you want . . . i dunno . . . i guess i could look it over or something. I can also draw ok so if you want a certain scene/pic i could sure try! all i'm trying to say is if you need something you can ask me and i'll do my best to help, okay? man that came out weird! oh well! keep up the amazing work! we all love you for it! (GO SASUKE!)(AND NEJI - but for tenten...not...naruto...)(GO FOR IT SASUKE!!!)
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  • From ANON - charsa on September 12, 2005
    i read the whole thing on one sitting ^_^ hehehe normally i come here for a dose of hard nc-17s but your story makes me all gooey inside ^_^ naruto is awfully foxxxxxy in this one *giggles*


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  • From ANON - Slippery Liz on September 12, 2005
    These last few chapters have been pretty good. They've fallen into a rythm that wasn't there before (the early teens were a bit choppy). I especially like that someone else has shown up to distract Neji a bit, and that Gaara is getting a bit serious. More, please?
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  • From ANON - Anon. on September 11, 2005
    Outstanding fic. Well written with good charactor development and a coherent plot. Slightly difficult to make the switch between charactors in the beginning and very unsure how Naruto feels about all the attention and whom his attention is directed at until pretty far into it. Really draws the reader in and makes them care about the charactors. Look forward to seeing more chapters on this one. Good Job!
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  • From ANON - kuro-musouka on September 10, 2005
    wow, this fic is amazing so far!!!! i've been keeping track of it for a few months, i just never got around to reviewing XD well, here's my review then! i love it so far, cant wait for your next update ^_________^!
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  • From WhiteLiger on September 10, 2005
    I know it's been a while since I reveiwed this fanfiction, but it's just so hard to think of something worth posting as a review when it's always good.
    Just thought I would let you know I'm still loyally following your fanfiction. It's so good. Man, it's like its on novel. I'm eager for the next chapters to come.
    And I know how writers block is, I've only updated my own account once in the last 2 months. I really need to be more consistant. But I'm not supposed to talk about me in a review to you.

    So just keep it up, you've definatly made me a fan of Naru/Sasu pairings when I never was one before so yay for your amazingness!
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  • From ANON - Ashe on September 10, 2005
    I can't believe I put off reviewing this, I feel horrible >.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on September 09, 2005
    Hey, this is the first time I've reviewed for you, but I've been following Chasing Naruto for a bit now (a month or so, maybe?). Just wanted to let you know I'm thoroughly enjoying it :3

    And since this is posted on AFF there will be smex, yes? Yeeees? ;D
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  • From ANON - Minako Ai on September 08, 2005
    Love it to death, as usual -- I enjoyed how Naruto was secretly checking out Sasuke's butt when he was wandering off. Give me another chapter, and I'll give you a full page review, full microsoft word size, lots of detail, delicate critiquing if requested. I'm dying to do that, really, I'm fond of your work. Let me do fan-art of it sometime.

    -Mina
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  • From ANON - viciouscallisto on September 08, 2005
    yay yay yay!!! another chapter!!!! the narusasu is progressing! today is a good day! oh, and there was a mention of orochimaru-sama! i can't help it...i love the guy. maybe it's 'cause he has some obession with sasuke-kun. anywho, i really really can't wait for when naruto and sasuke-kun go to the show....though i don't know what kind of show it is. i must say that i really liked the tenten and neji thing going on. i hope those two end up together. i'm looking forward to more narusasu and orochimaru-sama! update!!
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  • From ANON - limelikelemon on September 08, 2005
    I'm really impressed, that you manage to keep them all in character - that doesn't happen often in stories.
    Although I think that sometimes Naruto is praising himself a little too much here ;>
    I wouldn't have expected him to be so stubborn about his not-quite-relationship with Sasuke too - from time to time he imho appears too self-assure.

    Well, that's pretty much all the critique I have o.o
    I really like reading this story - I always have a grin on my visage, when you're embarassing Sasuke >:D
    Please keep on writing this one ^^

    ~lime

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