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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Paradox Ink on September 24, 2005
    No way! When I first started reading this fic, I though I was reading a completed story! Now I finally get to the "end" and find out it's not finished! NOOOOOOO!!! *Pout* I feel sad now. This story kicks large proportions of ass, though! Seriously, I'm a very picky reader, and absolutly HATE having to slog through shitty fic when I'm first getting into a fandom, before I can find some good authors. But I was lucky with Naruto! I mean, holy shit, the second fic I ever read of the fandom is GREAT! I love AU fics, particularly high school and college fics, and this one is SO well done. I'm a freshman (and a half- since I took a summer semester before my first formal year) and I can totally relate to a) evil washing machine, b) late profs (who are only late when you rushed to be on time but reem you out when YOU'RE late), c) loud people in dorms when your trying to study, d) roomates knowing far to much about the inner working of your mind, and e) shitty cafiteria food, f) bad weather when you have to walk everywhere. This list could do on, but you get the point. I always like fics I can identify with. I don't think your characters ever get too occ either, or if they do, you do it gradually, and with careful explanation. That just rocks. I coined a phrase for a rpg signiture once, "Good writing will send you to another world. Bad writing will send you to the toilet." This is definetly the former. Harah for good writing! Good writing give my a warm and fuzzy feel inside ^_^.
    Anyway, sorry to rant, but I think it's reallly good, and you DID say you didnt' want one liners. So there you are. I'd just add that the stuff with the horses got a little endless, but the rest of the fic was so good I didn't mind. I'm really getting ready for a conclusion though. This endless backand forth, nothing-ever-happens thing is getting frustrating. And I admit, I want my lemon scene already!
    Great job! MORE MORE MORE!!!
    -Love and transmutation circles!
    -PI
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  • From ANON - kelly on September 22, 2005
    Heya.. dun you ever stop at this rate... IM LIKE WAITING EVERYDAY... CHECKING THE UPDATES.. AND SAW NONE... DUN STOP>
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  • From ANON - Amber on September 22, 2005
    Ne ne, Dana it took me forever to find your fics but they really are really good. It's amber from JCMU, I tried to write you before but you didn't respond. Anyway I read through this fic, it is awsome!! It's confusing, and frustrating, and really really hot =^^= I'm not a huge NaruSasu fan but I make an exception for really well done fics ^_- But Sasuke afraid of horses? ^o^ I could not stop giggling! Wow, awsome. Anyway, you still thinking about doing that fantasy fic you were talking about thats fairy tale like? I think you could really have fun with that. Hope school isn't killing you too badly. Write me if you ever get some time.
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  • From ANON - Queenphoenix on September 21, 2005
    I've read hundreds of fanfictions and this is the only one that I've read 3 times. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - pasc55 on September 21, 2005
    good very good!!!!!!!!! you know how to keep suspens !!!!! ; )
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  • From ANON - Azana on September 21, 2005
    hmm very interesting. the storyline is really good so far...but must you keep Naruto so mysterious??? I'm looking foward to to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2005
    write!!!!!!!!!!!iloveyou but write!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - jigglyjellosocks on September 20, 2005
    you sonofawitch!!!!update pls?wait...no i bet ur busy so wen u get the chap done itll be good. its okie take ur time dear. but u do write really great yknow...*my idol* ^_____________^
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  • From ANON - Blackdragondiva on September 20, 2005
    Your story is coming on great! I really can't wait for Naruto to take Sasuke out on a date Friday night, its going to be so much fun. LOL, I adore Sasuke's love for unsalted pretzels! that's comical! personally, I always saw him as a pocky kinda guy, but i think that unsalted pretzels could so totally be his thing. you've kept this story so interesting too! its not getting boring or repetative or unoriginal, you're keeping it upbeat and questioning. its going to be fun finding out about Sasuke's past in this AU, and I keep wondering if Naruto's going to tell him about the kiss! will Sasuke be forced to ask for a kiss -shudder- :P or will something tip the tables and Neji or Gaara jump in on the Naruto action?!
    Also, the way you convayed Hinata was wonderful and so totally like her. Kiba being a nervous bundle of energy was priceless, especially the tie part :P.
    this fic is turning out wonderful and I can't wait for you to come back and update! Thanks for the entertainment! its irreplacable!
    +J+
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Myst on September 20, 2005
    I just love it when Sasuke gets all snuggly. For chapter 18, the version you decided to go with was way better than the first one you posted at the end. It was a bit more realistic, I think.

    I also loved the part about Sasuke's weakness being pretzels. Too cute!

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - valanthe on September 19, 2005
    I can't wait what will happen "tomorrow"
    I beg ya update soon :)

    Your story is just great :)
    I love when Sasuke is uke :)

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  • From ANON - naru-sasu on September 16, 2005
    OMG I HAVE MISSED YOU! (look what you have done! You have turn a very very lame fan, into SUPERPOWER FAN!) BUT STILL I WOULD LIKE TO YOU TO UPDATE MORE QUICKLY SO THAT I CAN READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND I DON'T HAVE TO BUY A NEW SCREEN, CAUSE THE ANOTHER ONE WAS DESTROYED BY BLOOD AND DROOL... *w*
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  • From ANON - Crystal on September 16, 2005
    I've been reading this for a while, had to catch up with all that was written. I finally got to the end and was like, NO, there must be more! but there wasn't.... Anyway, I love your story. you do the characters so well! I love it so much. hmm, helpful comments? I really can't think of anything that i don't like. I mean, i do feel like i'm being teased every chapter, but that's part of the fun. the characters are done well, your style is very nice, i haven't found any distracting errors, your plot and problems move very smoothly and not unnatural at all. it's just overall very good. Please email me with and update if it wouldn't be too much trouble. THanks
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on September 15, 2005
    Transition chapter? My ass... Even your "transition" chapters are more than enjoyable. Didn't know what else to say because there isn't one thing I dislike. Okay, you could double the length but if you were going to do so I would propose the same again and again.

    I'm longing for more so please give us more of your stuff :)
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - Okii_tako on September 14, 2005
    ah, no! I hope you find some insperation soon! I love this story so much, and as sad as it is, it makes my day when I find out that you've updated!!!!

    so please update soon!
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