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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Hawk on September 25, 2005
    Gar! I hate you! It makes me wish I had time to write more! I want so much to work on my story but I don't and I want to read more of this because it makes me want to write more, and the more I want to write the more willing I am to skip sleep to do it!!! And the cliffy! Why can't the just hop into bed already... wait they did that.... I mean hop into bed NAKED!! >.< I hate you... no, no... I'm sure I love your writting so I can't hate you. ANYWAY!! Write more. Then I'll write more... and we'll ALL be happy, ne?
    ~Hawk
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  • From ANON - vash281 on September 25, 2005
    holy mother of god. you DIDN'T just end it there! O.o

    i just have to tell you that your writing is BRILLIANT. i've read the past few chapters with a permanantly amused expression, and have laughed out loud *alot* (which is certainly hard to get me to do). this is one of the very very few stories that i am absolutely rivoted to.

    you make the characters all so believable. and not very OOC, even though that would be typical for an AU fic. you can poke the sexual tension with a stick, and it's done so sexily.

    at the end, i think:
    poor naruto: he's just now getting the clue that he has three infatuated guys after him
    poor sasuke: he's been a good sport for most of what naruto puts him through
    poor neji: ...poor about-to-be-molested neji. he's a bit of a prick in this fic but by damn, i'm afraid for his virtue!

    the 3 boys all have good reason to want to be with naruto, so i feel for them. it's just that he and sasuke have so much chemistry. and they are so sweet trying to hold back their emotions, as they don't realize it's all ok just to get together. (don't ignore the dreams, guys.)

    **on another note**
    if you need anything to help you along with your fic, just send along a mail.
    (such as how things look from a reader's perspective, more comments, etc.)

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  • From ANON - Hikari no Tenshi on September 25, 2005
    I love it please post the next chapter soon, i'm dying to know what happens
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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on September 25, 2005
    OH YES YOU WILL SASUKE! YOU WILL JUMP ONSTAGE AND FUCK NARUTO SENSELESS!

    I love your fic. So much FS but still in character. Good! Good!

    Is that....Roofies I see being put in Neji's drink or something? ^_^;;

    Well, good luck with school! Lucky you! I have WORK tomorrow. :D
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  • From ANON - dagget on September 25, 2005
    Oh My God That's Awsome! This is the most entertaining fic ever. Must have more! And now I'm dying to know what happens to Neji. Don't leave us hangin'.
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  • From ANON - Nidaba on September 25, 2005
    Amazing as usual. I thought that your Breaking Sasuke story was one of the best SasuNaru stories I had ever read, but you have really outdone yourself with this story. So damn sexy and there hasn't even been any real action yet! I must say that I do hope that Neji and Gaara have happy endings as well. And what a cliffie!!! Gah! :)
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 25, 2005
    OMFG!!! That's the hottest, most erotic scene!
    I've read it twice and I still can't find appropriate words to express my utter amazement!!!
    All coherent thought in my mind are:
    Primo: HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!! *drools madly*
    Secundo: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!
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  • From kaze on September 25, 2005
    W00T! The visuals in this were so yummy! I'm so glad you posted a new chapter...I think this is one of my favorite fics right now...you have no idea how much I want them to get together!! I mean, as a NaruSasu fan, you always want them to get together, but this fic...the NEED for them to be together just drives me batty ^_^ I love it. Great work...I love your characterizations and the suspense (even though it drives me nuts). I'll be (not so patiently) waiting for the next chapter ^_~
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  • From ANON - angel on September 25, 2005
    wow...I love this story...
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on September 25, 2005
    Oh god! Please... I hope nothing evil happens to Neji, that would suck massively. Probably Naruto would get involved. SIGH. Good cliffhanger though, really good.

    I laughed really loud when I read the first line of the song, I freaking love Franz Ferdinand so I was like AHHHHHH!! COOL!! I can just imagine Naruto dancing suggestively to Sasuke during that song. It was really read the scenes in this chapter. I wish the kids luck.

    Neji!! Take care of yourself!
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  • From ANON - egg on September 25, 2005
    Hmmm...interesting ending. I assume that these guys are going to take advantage of Neji later...not cool...I can see Naruto beating the pulp out of them before they get to try anything...and they end up sharing a "special moment"...which will piss Sasuke (and maybe in turn piss Naruto off because Sasuke is being jealous in that kind of situation, but lets all hope he (sasu) has more character than that) off. Or things take a funny turn and Sasuke ends up being the one who saves him. Which would be cool. (and was I just squinting too hard, or were Sasuke and Neji actually sharing a moment of something like friendship before Naruto comes out in all his glory? Because if they were, that would be great.)

    Or both of them are too late, which would be really really bad for Neji. And then we have Gaara floating around somewhere (wonder if he saw Naruto's little show)...

    Ohhh...very steamy chapter, IMO. Absolutely loving the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke during the dance.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 25, 2005
    I'm not really in the mood to be coherent so I'm just going to say two things:
    1) NOOOOOOOOO NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't let anything happen to Neji, Go Naruto save the day!!!!
    2) I would LOVE to see a picture of Naruto dressed in drag:D

    Great new chapter, hope to see a new update soon especially with that cliffhanger
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  • From ANON - lo on September 25, 2005
    Wow. You really took the reader for a ride with this chapter, but it was great. You made the whole drag thing work, and made it some what sexy. I am truley impressed. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - animegirl on September 24, 2005
    OH MY GOD! THAT WAS AMAZING, i've never laughed so much at one time in all my freakin life. that was soooooo funny, man i love your story. i could just picture sasuke's face when he found out that they were at a drag show, hehe and neji too! Naruto in leather, You are my goddess! well, i must say though, it's nice to see things heating up, i can't wait entill naruto and sasuke have, and i quote, "wilde monkey sex" please make it soon, i can't take anymore teasing! and you'd better update soon cause i wanna see what's gona happen to our poor neji, he's not gona get gang banged is he? UPADTE SOON
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on September 24, 2005
    Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!! Another great chapter! I hope nothing bad happens to Neji. I wish the drag show was real and I could see Naruto grinding. Of course, I'd probably have the same problem as Sasuke. ;)
    Keep up the good work! Good luck with finals!
    ^_^
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