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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129

From ANON - Psylocke on October 19, 2005
First of all, i must say that i love this story. You're writing is so good, and i love your humor. But there is one thing that annoys the hell out of me (quite much, to be honest), and I'm sure I'm not alone. The fact that this is taking place in USA. *grits teeth* Other than THAT... *shudders* ....good job.
I loved the fact that you let them ride horses, this is the first time i've encountered this in a Naruto fanfic. Loved those chapters, even though most of the jokes makes no sense to most people (well it's their loss, innit?). God, don't i feel like Shikamaru... XD I'm the lazy one at my stable, lol. ^^;

Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - The Empress on October 15, 2005
OMG, I don't think I saw a disclaimer on this story, unless I totally missed it trying to hurry up and get to the story.^_^;; Just in case you didn't, Please put one up somewhere so they won't delete this awesome story. This story is just to good, no, too brilliant to delete. I don't want it to be deleted.=( Please Hurry.
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From ANON - Lell on October 15, 2005
Hee ^^ I read all of this in one long go and at the cliffhanger, I think my inner child died of frustration at not being able to read the next bit right away. You have an extremely interesting style for an AU, one that takes the subtle elements of the Naruto-verse and weaves them into your own story to make something unique, but true to the essence of canon (because, as ever Naruto fangirl knows, Sasuke/Naruto is soooo canon XD) Your characterisation of both the two main boys, plus Neji and Gaara is very precise, something I'm enjoying a lot, but in the odd habit I have of picking up on minor characters in the story, I'm very much intrigued by your TenTen. A lot of people make her overly feminine...but she's not. She has a rather manly spirit wrapped in a woman's body though manly's probably not the best word for it. Hmmm...anyway, I liked your portrayal of her. A lot. It's possibly the best TenTen I've seen for a long time ^^

So lovely story you have here. Do you mind putting me on your e-mail alert system?

Lell
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From ANON - chan on October 12, 2005
I love this story! Sasuke seems to take the lead in many NaruSasu fics so its a nice change to see Naruto in charge. Also, I really enjoy how Naruto maintains his cocky/boyish personality yet reveals a highly intelligent/thoughtful person underneath the jock mask. The way he manages the sticky situations with all the boys chasing him is something. I just love this fic. And chapter 19 is my favorite so far...just imagining Naruto in 'drag' with gyrating hips pulsing to "Take Me Out" was hot as hell.

There is a very realistic quality to the relationship btwn Naruto and Sasuke both being so vunerable beneath their masks. I mean, the story isn't littered with gay stereotypes and Naruto acknowledges that gender isn't so much the issue with him, which I feel as well. So even though this is a work of fanfic, I thoroughly enjoy being able to relate to the characters.

Also, as a 23 yr old Black woman, it is nice to read works by other Black women with an interest in writing, anime and yaoi because it is not often that I come across someone with those same likes.

I look forward to the next chapter. Poor Neji!! But I can't wait to see what Sasuke does when Naruto comes off the stage!

Chan
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From ANON - ladygizarme on October 12, 2005
aiyaaa, the one good thing about me not having time to read your updates right away is that when i do i have alot waiting for me, which i love... so, just read like.. 3 chapters i think, and it was awesome of course.. i can't even list everything i loved about them lol, you're awesome... i love every single thing that happened lol.. naruto staying at sasuke's after the movie, hearing sasuke say that and kissing him, but especially.. ESPECIALLY naruto in drag and dancing.. omtezukaryomaandfuji, that was fuckin hot,(lol i actually said out loud "omg dana i love you ^_^) i totally feel for sasuke heheh... but now i'm like gaahhhhh cuz i wish there was more to read already haha, i hope you have time again soon... i wanna know what happens next! and what's gonna happen to neji? what's the damn project naruto's workin on?? *shakes fist* damn you college exams :p
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From ANON - Kate on October 11, 2005
More. Now. Oh dear LORD. This is what keeps me sane. I love you.
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From ANON - okami kaze on October 08, 2005
*drool* lol. omg. i love the last chapter. please tell me you're writing more. omg. i can't wait!! i jsut love your writing style. and story. it's so wonderful.

~Okami
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From ANON - NarutoAndME on October 07, 2005
This is an awesome story. I especially loved the chapter with Naruto saying you're
a sucker for marvelous me. After reading it, I went and found the F.A.P.
(Feline American Princess) song. Listening to the song and remembering the story had
me laughing so hard I cried. It was great. I also loved the last chapter. Imagine
Naruto dancing around stage, I know it boosted his ego. Though you have to love Naruto's
personality. It's great. Looking forward to your next update.
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From on October 06, 2005
m'dear... I must say that I am awestruck with your writing.
Never have I laughed, laughed so hard I cried, or cried so hard I laughed (yes, I have cried during some parts, only to laugh when I realize that these were parts that need not have tears), when reading a fanfiction.
I commend you on your rapid updates, and would simply kill to have other authors update as quickly as you do.
Your most current chapter had me sinking my teeth into my hand to keep myself from screaming, either from the mental picture of Naruto strutting around in that outfit, or from well... Naruto strutting around in that outfit. That had to be, and most undoubtedly was, the best time I've had in the longest of times.
First off, I'd like to thank you for picking up the mood of a most horribly depressed person.
Secondly, I'd like to thank you for even writing such a freaking amazing fanfiction. (To say the truth, I would have skipped the story if I'd just read the summary, I've never been a fan of A.U. fics... but your's has taken the cake... the entire freaking bakery even!)
Thirdly, Keep up the awesome work. And good luck in your exams (If I'm too late for this... I hope you did well. If not... my wish remains standing).
~ Much fan-worship; Jen
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From kitana on October 02, 2005
Eee! Yay, you updated! I'm glad I decided to check today.

Hee, I thought this last chapter was hot. It so screams 'prelude to sex'. Not to mention that your Sasuke's so adorable. ^_^;; I love your writing style.
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From ANON - Dasu200 on October 02, 2005
hey what's taking you so long , I really like your story Chasing Naruto, beleave it or not , it the only good thing I have to read , or watch because fuller naruto's shows they are playing , please updata soon
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From ANON - Liliess on October 02, 2005
AHHH!! Neji! I don't even know or want to know whats going to happen next to him. >< AND DAMN! Did anybody notice Sasuke's thingie? O.O
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From ANON - Fan1 on October 01, 2005
I still say out of all off the stories I have read on aff [dot] net this IS the best one...all of the others...sorry...
have just been one of the best...but Chasing Naruto is officially my favorite story...I love Naruto's personality...
I could definitely fall for someone like that...I would get so excited when it was written that Sasuke and
Naruto were together...but I always knew it was a dream and it would make me sad when it finally said it was...
I can't wait till it becomes true...but the story is doing great even though they aren't "together"...
I'm dreading the moment Naruto finds out about the bet...please don't let him be mad at Sasuke...I would cry
if they didn't end up together...one of the best chapters is chapter 19...I loved the show with Naruto...
I can just imagine it...uh...so hot...*drools*...one final aspect of the writing...I love the whole "bloody
nose" thing...no one has used that in any of their writings before that I've read...I love that you included it...
well...greatly looking forward to the next chapter...keep up the excellent work...

Fan1

p.s. I love the story behind Neji and Gaara...maybe you could do two spin offs where each of them gets together with Naruto...I would like that...well talk to ya later...
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From ANON - Brittany on October 01, 2005
......im speachless...YOURE WRITING IS SOOOOO KICK BOOTY!!!you obviously show great creativity in your work and its a trait i COMPLETLY admire.PLEASE KEEP WRITING FOR THE SAKE OF YOUR FANS(which would be me and anonymous people) im working on a story myself and i hope i can make it as humorous and creative as your story.by the way, i luuuuuuv the NaruXSasu pairing.reading your chapters made me laugh and it made me cry at the sad parts.its soooooo funny when Naruto dresses in drag!LMAO!!i really look forward to the next chapter and dont give up!! WE PRAISE YOUR WONDERFUL WORK!!.......(turns out,im not as speachless as i claim)
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From ANON - Paradox Ink on September 28, 2005
This was great. I was cracking up throughout! I could totally picture Naruto being first reluctant, but then completely comfortable with being put in drag and Take Me Out is definetly his song. I can imagine him dancing to it. I thought the idea of Sasuke being dragged to a drag show was beyond funny. I can just imagine him sitting there, ramrod straight, getting hit on and feelingn completly uncomfortable (despite the fact that he's gay or bi or whatever himself). And that Neiji! I feel sorry for him, but did he have to be a crasher? Be kind to him and put him with someone who will be good to him, he deserves it; the poor dear. Are you going to continue to torture Sasuke? As amusing at it is, I think he deserves some releif. Naruto is being stupid about Sasuke. If he wants a confession he could just say so. I mean, he should know that's the sort of thing Sasuke would have trouble saying. Of course, you being the author, you know all this, but anyway.
I thought the chapter was very good. I don't really have any constructive critism at all for this chapter, since I know you asked for it. But really, this chapter was just so good, that I don't think it needs improvment. You saw my suggestions for the last post (which kinda covered the whole story)?
More please?
Your updates make me shout for joy.
-love and transmutation circles!
-PI
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