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By : megladon129

From ANON - dark_Angel on November 01, 2005
WAHHHH~ the last chapter was evil.....but i dont really get how they end up getting all pissed off n crap.....=S
sighhh that took u so long to update...T.T" hope ur schedule allows more time for writing soon......can't wait to see what will happen to Neji...xP
ganbatte! ^^
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From ANON - fnw on November 01, 2005
Ahhh...I knew that kissing scene was too good to be true. It's funny, reading this chapter made me realize how I envisioned this story ending already. But surprise me, will ya? :)

Great work, as usual.
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From ANON - 123 on October 31, 2005
Oh...dear...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*reminds self that you said this will eventually be Naru/Sasu*

...

*cries*

Ouch...I have no clue how they'll recover from this.

Actually...when I think about it, to me Naruto's "never wanna see you again" bit seemed a bit of an overreaction. After all, Sasuke's words did hold a bit of truth to them. Although they were a bit...harsh. Naruto's whore comment seemed a bit out of place too. More fitting to what Sasuke was saying to him.

Hmmm...*has flashbacks of a certain Naruto chapter in which a certain character "dies"* I loved that chapter (it pissed me off to no end, I thought he really did die) and I wonder if we'll see something like it later from you? It went to show the depth of caring they had for each other too *sniffs at the memory* Sasuke always brings out the best/worst reactions in Naruto doesn't he?

And since I adore your use of songs, try Sway or Fever by Michael Buble. He has a reeeeeallly nice voice
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From ANON - Jem on October 31, 2005
Wow. Just... wow. I didnt see that comming at all D: you practically had me CRYING just then at how sad that was T_T Sasukeeee~ Stop being such a bastard. Please update soon >>; i just have to know what happens.
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From ANON - ai-chan on October 31, 2005
nooooooo *shakies* i want mooore (>_
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From ANON - Vampire Ifurita on October 31, 2005
OMG! *Dies* Sasuke is an idiot! I quote the old adage "Open mouth insert foot" here. How stupid was that? Gahhh... *wants to hurt Sasuke, stalks off finds him and hits him repeditively, Naruto, still being extremely mad does nothing but watches* Idiot! I mean, I can almost understand him getting mad... but not that much. He went to far and he knows that now *glares at now unconcious Sasuke*... Gaara in drag? *laughs and tries to imagine it before getting squished by sand* And what the heck was in Neji's drink? He went freaking crazy OOC in there... wow-ness.

Anyway, small rant aside, I ADORE this fic! Though right now I'm not liking what happened in there in that last chapter, oh the Angst! But I deal. With any luck it'll all turn out alright *pleading eyes* Oh please let it turn out alright. This is just so beautifully written and I can't stop reading it once I've started. The proverbial "getting sucked into what you are reading, being transported into the world that the author has created" and all that. But man, gorgeous. Love it! Can't wait for more! And I will impatiently wait for more and then greatly rejoice when more comes. Beautiful job! Love it!
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From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2005
As much as I love each and every chapter you do and I was thrilled when you updated, I was confused by the last sentence.... was that Naruto or Sasuke that said, "Find yourself another whore"?
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From ANON - lime_one (again) on October 31, 2005
Oh sorry. One more point. May you never cave and keep your "tease the readers" style. It's awesome and, really, it mirrors how the actual series works too. Things are always better if you're denied them forever right? ^_^

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From ANON - lime_one on October 31, 2005
Hi. Longtime reader, firsttime reviewer.....(whee. I finally got off my @$$ and wrote a review...)

First of all, I'd like to thank you for all the work you've put into this fic. It's shows. Really. I love your writing style. Like most of the top-of-the-line authoresses out there, you paint a great picture of the universe you created...but I think one thing that is distinctly YOU is that you utilize shorter paragraphs, which allows for an easier, smoother pace. Nice. ^_^

Another thing that's awesome about CN is some of the lines....Naruto's "ego" bit...or the "arrow" line....or in the last chapter about tape and hard-ons. Awesome stuff.

Ah. Chapter 20, the long awaited everythinggoestohellandsetsuptheclimax chapter. ^_^ You brought back all the foreshadowing from the past chapters: Sasuke's jealousy, finally putting Naruto in Sasuke's position, and so on. It'll be interesting to read the reviews, I'd imagine...both Naruto and Sasuke are at fault in a way...Sasuke for acting on his jealousy even though he is never willing to speak his feelings...and Naruto for stringing Sasuke along to try to get Sasuke to confess. I was a little disappointed that Neji didn't get a huge role in the big blowup chapter....it's mostly Gaara, Sasuke, and Naruto....I guess that's because the last chapter ended with Neji's drink, so I was expecting him to play a bigger role than comic relief or "moment" interrupter.

Speaking the the "down" chapter....I guess this means it's almost over, ne? It'll be a happy/sad day when that comes. I hope you start another fic soon.

Stay Frosty,
~Chrissy

P.S: (Gotta get my actual reactions to the chapter down now- 0_o *twitch* *spasm*....there we go.)

P.S.S: Say...looking up at the other reviews, I noticed that you go to MSU. Kirei (also a Spartan, and fellow kick-ass writer) hopped to your defense too. ^_^ ....Do you girls know each other?
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From ANON - kasumi-chan on October 31, 2005
see, i knew that bastard would skrew up some time.....so like are they gonna make up?
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From ANON - Okii_tako on October 31, 2005
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!

I'm soooooooo happy you updated, I screamed when I saw there was a new e-mail in my in-box, you don't know how happy you made me!

I hope you can get a chance to update again, it was great. Try not to let school bring you down to much, 'cause I know how much it can suck!
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From ANON - Kero-chan on October 31, 2005
OMG!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *weep* that's a terrible ending to a great chapter!!!! ;-; please hurry updating! i can't believe sasuke would insinuate that about naruto.. >
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From ANON - fyredevyl on October 31, 2005
YOU ARE EVIL! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE??????
I must say, I do agree with Sasuke a little though. Naruto has been stringing all three of them along, whether intentional or not. The fact that Neji and Gaara are still vying for his attention proves that. Oooohhhhh, I'm dreading the next chapter, but I want to read it!
And I totally empathize with evil exams and professors. My math teacher is more than willing to flunk 1/3 of the class. Yikes!
I eagerly await the next installment of Chasing Naruto. ^_^ BTW, how many more chapters do we have to go?
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From ANON - Fan1 on October 31, 2005
No!!!!!! Don't let them seperate. PLEASE!!!! :( :( :( :( :( :(

Great story so far. It's sad they don't state what they're feeling right then and there. It makes things much more complicated, like now. Well at least Naruto and Sasuke finally "made out." I hope their relationship is fixed real soon. I wonder how it will work out? I see a lot of hurt and anger between the two.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cya,
Fan1
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From ANON - samiam on October 31, 2005
I haven't reviewed since I first stumbled upon this story, but don't think it's because I've stopped loving it. I find it utterly impossible to actually get a feel for a story if I'm only reviewing a small portion of it. So, sorry about the delay. Now, with that stated, I just hope this review doesn't turn into a rant like my first one, but if it does, well...

I'm just in awe of chapter 20. Not only have you managed to single-handedly make me want to cry, scream, and otherwise act like a complete lovestruck fool, I'm floored at how realistically the last scene played out. It absolutely shattered a piece of my heart.

Throughout this chapter, there was that sense of foreboding that just left my stomach twisted in knots. I kept thinking, 'when will it happen? when will it happen?'. I knew SOMETHING was bound to go wrong; I just didn't think that it would end so cruelly. I know most people will be writing something along the lines of 'SASUKE IS SUCH A BITCH! HOW COULD HE TREAT POOR NARUTO LIKE THAT?!', but I happen to think Sasuke's argument held weight. I don't like the way he handled things. Quite frankly, he deserved to get punched (and probably much more). But, is it not true that Naruto has been stringing all three of them along? Out of everything, the fact that Naruto has even allowed the other two to keep interfering has always bugged me. I know in the beginning he wasn't sure of Sasuke's feelings for him, or his own feelings for Sasuke. But once he discovered that he truly was attracted to the Uchiha (and wanted something with HIM and not the others), he should have made it a point to address Gaara and Neji. I do feel for the other men. They each hold very strong feelings for Naruto. That's not something that can be easily overlooked. And I also understand that Naruto doesn't want anyone to come out of this hurt, but he also has to know that it's bound to happen. When there are three people vying for one's affections, obviously two people are going to be let down. So why, oh why, didn't Naruto address this issue long ago?

But...like I've mentioned in my first review, I'm not doing this to rant. I'm just giving you my honest opinion. I will say that I have truly enjoyed the chapters you've produced since you came back from Japan. (Hope you had fun during your stay by the way.) It finally seemed like Naruto and Sasuke might be getting somewhere. They were doing things together. Their teasing and flirting seemed to have been turned up a notched. And oh, my! Naruto actually showed some jealousy! =D All in all, reading their steady (but sloooooow) progression into any semblance of an actual couple has been a complete wild ride, never knowing quite what situation the two will land in next, or how the two will react to their ever-increasing attraction to the other. I think you have showcased their relationship brilliantly, and I really am glad I started reading your story.

But, man, for you to come back and pull something like chapter 20...whoo. That's just harsh, though I will admit that this one is one of my absolute favorite chapters so far. Everything, from Sasuke going into a jealous rage (or rages...there were so many times), to Neji's drunken antics, Naruto "saving" Sasuke, to their first (consentual) heated kiss, it was wonderful. But, alas, I knew there wouldn't be a happy ending. I think my heart actually bled when Naruto told Sasuke to get out of his life. But, his reaction, just like Sasuke's, is understandle. When you feel so strongly about someone, and you're always having to share that person's affections with other people, it's bound to cause problems. For Sasuke, never knowing for sure if Naruto truly cares about him the way he does, always seeing the others hovering around, ruining moments between them, I can completely understand why he finally snapped and let Naruto have it. But then again, to be so utterly betrayed by the person he thought he knew, his best friend...I really don't see how Naruto and Sasuke will be able to repair their damaged relationship now. I know Sasuke was ultimately in the wrong for what he said, but I just don't want him to turn into some grovelling fool, always apologizing, always asking for forgiveness. He NEEDS to apologize, to do whatever it takes for Naruto and him to get back on steady ground. But I also think that Naruto needs to come to understand that he can't just decide he's attracted to Sasuke and let that be it. If he wants Sasuke in his life (as more than just a friend), he's going to have to solve the situation regarding the other two men. He needs to tell Sasuke what he wants from him, and not just flirt endlessly. Though, I will admit, I really did get pissed when Naruto was trying to talk to Sasuke and the Uchiha just blew up. Tsk, tsk. That situation could have been avoided, huh evil authoress? But, Sasuke needs to be able to open up to Naruto more. Being able to kiss someone doesn't mean anything. (Though, I did have an extremely fan girl moment when they finally kissed.) I just wish he'd tell him he loves him and get it over with. Damn...

Well, I'm annoying, eh? I thought this wouldn't turn out so long like the first time, but I guess it did. If it put you to sleep, my apologies.

I am so excited for the next chapter (whenever that may be)!
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By the way, do you know how much longer this story will be? And also, I know I've asked you this before, but I'm still curious as to Sasuke's background. You mentioned before that Sasuke's parents are dead, because he won't use the insurance money (I think that's right), but I'm just wondering how that happened, and does Naruto know?

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