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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129

From ANON - joan on November 01, 2005
OH. MY. GOD. You are SO AWESOME - i HATE sasuke for being SO STUPID and i love you for making it so wonderfully dramatic and angst - YAY!!!! VERY well written - and recieved ;) Please write more sooooon!!!!
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From ANON - tsusami on November 01, 2005
my first reaction was NOOOOOOOOOOO ;__; But then, thinking about it. . it wouldn't be so bad if he chose Gaara >.>;; Please update. I don't normally beg, but please.. for the love of God (or whatever deity you worship), next chapter!
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From ANON - Jolin Kree on November 01, 2005
Oh. My. God. Oh. My. God......
O_o....
o_O....
I think I'm gonna cry....;_;....gaaaah!! Sasuke! you goddamn fucking little...GAAAAH!!! You screwed everything up you self absorbed bastard! NOOOOOO!!!! *gets slapped*

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hokay, I'm good now. My little NaruSasu fangirl mode taking over..sorry everyone....*cough* anyway, AWESOME addition to the story! The fight was just..wow, I was practically biting my nails off! And the nice little scene before that made me giggle like a mad school girl. XD Keep it up! I can't wait for the next addition to the story! >_
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From ANON - Cherelle Jones on November 01, 2005
(claps for about 5 mins.) That ending was awesome. Naruto and Sasuke had a fight. Awsome I couldn't sit still while reading it. (claps again). Bravo Bravo
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From ANON - Sam on November 01, 2005
Wow...I was like holding my breath while reading this ----- You did an absolutely AMAZING job!!! Such a rollercoaster of emotions, seriously... I'm so glad they finally kissed....But crap, what's going to happen now? I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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From ANON - sleepingzombe on November 01, 2005
NOOOOOO!!!! The chapter can't end there! They were soo close and then sasuke had to get all jealous and angry and ruin everything. Please up-date soon... I have to know if sasuke manages to win naruto back, or if you're planning on torturing them some more. Please! I've been following this story for a while and it truely is my favorite naru/sasu out there, and I'm just dying to know what will happen next. so if you can, please update soon. thanks
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From ANON - one_winged_angel on November 01, 2005
Oh my gosh im so addicted to Gaara and Naruto pairings right now *squeal* but Gaara doesnt get Naruto ..... yet. i love this story woot!!! and your art works. please update soon. and maybe do a small oneshot to Gaara/Naruto but you dont have to listen to me or whatever. oh and here have the chibi Naruto Gang plushie set with super light up action!!! Ja Ne
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From ANON - ShadyBoi on November 01, 2005
O.O;

Is that the end?! Is this some sort of Evil Cliffy that will never conclude?!?

And just when I thought I knew what was going to happen... I am now throughly confused, but I assume that was your intention
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From ANON - Michiru on November 01, 2005
*shakes head* They're BOTH idiots. I probably find myself siding with Naruto more than Sasuke, but I think they are both justified in their anger. I think Sasuke's right about Naruto 'stringing along' the three of them. In the incident with Gaara in Chapter 20, I can understand why he didn't want to push him away - regardless of whether he returns Gaara's feelings or not, he still thinks of him as a friend and doesn't want to humiliate him by rejecting him in front of everyone. However, there have been several incidents in previous chapters that Naruto could have avoided if he really wanted to - and because he didn't, he's leading Gaara and Neji to believe that if they try hard enough, they might have a chance. Even if he said that he wasn't interested in anything more than friendship, actions always speak louder than words.

However, I think that Naruto would have explained his actions to Sasuke had he had the chance, and assuming that they did get together, I also think that he would make it clear to Neji and Gaara that he wasn't available or interested. But Sasuke didn't give him that chance, and that's why I side with Naruto more than him. I know that he just 'snapped', but I still think he was wrong for not even allowing Naruto the chance to explain himself. I do feel sorry for him, though. Judging by how he acted after he said those things to Naruto, he really didn't mean to say them, or at the very least, he regretted saying them. He really screwed things up. I just wonder what it's going to take and how long it's going to be before Naruto gives him another chance. Don't torture us too much! ^-^;

Oh, and a note to other readers/reviewers: From what I understood, the last line was spoken by Naruto. Sasuke called his name, Naruto glanced back and "spoke his parting words". And it also makes more sense for Naruto to say that, since that's what Sasuke basically accused him of being. (When he said "Or is it simply a matter of who�s willing to pay more?")
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From ANON - TomorrowsNeverDie on November 01, 2005
Ahh how could you do that to us! I do hope you update quicker this time around instead of making us wait so very long for an update, I neeeed to find out what happens... Whaaa I really want to know really bad... Please hurry and update! I lurve this story soo much!
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From ANON - Lekai on November 01, 2005
Have to admit I don't like the ending to this, doesn't make enough sense with all the melodrama. I wouldn't mind so much so long as you update soon, but it just seemed the angst killed the story *shrug* I'm like that with angst fics though, I think it's easy to overdo it. Naruto seemed weak in this chapter and I didn't really see the consistency. Nonetheless, I love the rest of this fic. I hope you update soon.
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From ANON - lo on November 01, 2005
Wow, that ending was really intense!!! YOu are really building up the drama, great job. I can't wait to see where you take this. I can't believe you ended it that was. I 'm on the edg of my seat!!! It is soooooo exciting. Keep up the great work!!!!
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From ANON - shimomizu on November 01, 2005
chap 20~woah @_@' so angsty chapter ~!! that's going to make them start the whole narusasu romance from the beginning again *sob* they was sooo close to be together ;_; Sasuke you bloody bastard!?!! How dare you make naru-chan sound so cheap...he does everything just for you T.T.. all you HAVE to say is 'i love you' ...THREE words.... what so hard about it?$%&*(I think the real sasuke will always be im-a-stuck-up-ass-prince-of-ice-that-won't-confess~ ) @@" omg! i actually angsty over a fictional story tehehe X3 Ok i guess next chapter gonna tell us what's exactly sasuke work is right?? i mean the telephone conversation thingy with Mr. Orochimaru ~~cause by tomorrow it's gonna be saturday right?? I seriously hope that naruto and sasuke will be patch up soon or later...and yeah...ermm it's kindda true really... why is naruto acting such a 'whore' o_O'? I mean he could shoo off those guy that bugging him and only concentrate on sasuke....there again sorry for asking that. I guess readers just need to follow the author's plot bunnies hopping....around till the end~ X3 Lastly, ganbatte AkaiTsume-san with your school & work life too~
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From ANON - nekopooya on November 01, 2005
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! YOU STUPID PIECE OF CRAP SASUKE!!!! I nearly cried my eyes out of my head! That was so uncalled for, GAAAH!! WHYYY GOD WHYYY??!!

By the way, I just LOVE this fic ^__^
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From ANON - Vibribi the crack bunny on November 01, 2005
I think you broke everyones brains XD. Aaaah, poor both of them. Sasuke because I can understand where he's coming from! WTFNARUTO! Tell people you aren't interested because really, I'd be confused by the signals your giving off!

Naruto: I really like you Sasuk- oooh, hey Neiji. Why don't you get in a nice grope. Mmm hmm. I don't mind too much. Right, back to what I was saying Sasuke, oooh, and keep your distance. I don't wanna do anything ras- Gaara! Hey red, what's up? Oh, you wanna grope too and nearly make out! Yeah sure! Okay, where was I? Oh yeah, I really.... Gaara and then Neiji? That's cool! Geeet your lovings in. Awesome. Later. ::mixed signal mixed signal:: Right, so like I was saying, I totally... garsh I'm too shy to say it now X3!

Is what I imagine how Sasuke must have viewed the situation. Chasing a guy who seems to have two devoted followers, having him show interest in you and yet not telling the other two he's not interested is bad. But then I feel bad for Naruto too because, dude SASUKE... that was harsh. Harsher than he deserved especially since he might not have... meant to lead anyone on. AAAAAAAH. I will be a sad sad crack rabbit till this is updated and I can enjoy more healthy dosages of TWO BOYS BEING COMPLETE STUBBORN MORONS ::LOVES ON::.
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