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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - Elk on December 25, 2005
    Another dramatic and awesome cliffhanger! Can't wait to see how everyone's expressions would be at the next chapter, youve really putting all of your best in the finale of this fic! Sou... Congratulations on receiving the award ^^, you definitely deserved them since it it one of the best orginal Naruto fics I've read from other websites.

    I'm surprised you'll allow Maruto to discover the bet from those three, but I guess he'll bound to discover it soon. Your way with words is amazing and I hope you'll continue to write Naruto fics in the future. I'll also definitely see you original male/male fanfic and review it too. ^^ Keep up the wonderful work and writing skills! Til then!

    -Elk
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  • From ANON - Kali S. on December 25, 2005
    Ooh. Burn.

    Why does Sasuke have to be like that? (at the end, I mean.) He was so perfect, so great...why would he sneer? Why would he say that again? *headdesk* So *headdesk* stupid *headdesk* Sasuke... *headdesk*
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  • From ANON - cateye91 on December 25, 2005
    ..........i hate you...no, seriously, i *really* do hate you...hooow caan uuu just leaave it theere!?!?!? waaaaah! i finally realize that u've added another awesome chapter and i get to the bottom of the screen and i'm bout to flip out cuz naru knows bout the bet and then i go 2 read some more...and there's nothing...i'm like 'what the fuck is wrong with this goddamned story?! there aren't supposed 2 be evil cliffies!!' i wonder how many ppl killed some1 cuz they saw that cliffy...that's just evil, man...it's just wrong...so! i command u 2 write another chapter! get off ur lazy ass (dunno if ur lazy but oh well...lol) and write another chapter!! go write till ur hand is so cramped that it's unable 2 move!!! lol...but i need another chapter! it's like...air to me! it's what i thrive on and when u leave cliffies like that i can't do anything but stare at the computer and think 'fuck...' lol...so write! WRITE DAMNIT! lol...^_^
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  • From ANON - Terry on December 25, 2005
    It's time to pay NARUTO up! Finally he finds out, so glad. Happy Holidays and thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - yoko on December 24, 2005
    Good story update soon and remember Sas still has to tell naruto he loves him
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  • From ANON - cibiboy on December 24, 2005
    This is such a great story iv been waiting for a moment like the one with all of them Gara+Nij+Sas+Naru i wonder if naruto going to be pissied like Sakura was about when her boyfr beted her well i cant wait till ur next update.
    Merry X-Mas
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  • From ANON - The Empress on December 24, 2005
    *vein pops out of head* How could you? How could you leave me hanging like that. I almost backhanded my brother for interrupting my reading of this chapter and you leave me hanging?! *sighs and calms down and then trembles with exitement* I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I bet Naruto's going to seriously blow the fuck up. *evil snicker* Oh Hell Yes! Whooo! I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Please update REAL soon. =)
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  • From ANON - Ryuko on December 23, 2005
    *bouncing with glee* W00t!!!!! ^___________^ I love it when you update. It makes my day so much better, really. Granted, I couldn't review on the same day as I read it, but I'm still feeling the after affects, so it still counts. :P
    I couldn't wait for this chap. I simply had to had to know how Naruto planned on dealing with the whole mess. And and and...o.o Suicidal Sasuke? (XD Sounds like a doll. "Hi, I'm Suicidal Saucegay Barbie!") I dunno why, but the image I had of him in my head made me wanna give him a hug. Figures he'd pick hara-kiri instead of something...less violent.
    I find it hilarious that even after all of that, Sasuke is still trying to make himself believe that Naruto isn't important to him. And the photo thing? That was just creepy. Really, really cool, but creepy.
    I'm still wondering about how you plan to have Naruto react to finding out about the bet. I hope Sasu-chan doesn't get punched again. One bruise is enough, ne? ^^
    P.S. I saw Franz Ferdinand's 'Take Me Out' video for only the second time last week. Despite having heard the song a couple times before I started reading this fic, I hadn't heard it since. It has now taken on a new significance. I couldn't stop grinning the entire time I watched the video, nor could I get the image of a gussed up Naruto dancing on stage out of my head. Fics like yours should come with warning labels, such as: READERS BE WARNED. THE FOLLOWING WILL AFFECT YOUR BRAIN IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. Yeah...something like that. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Aran Linvail on December 23, 2005
    Great chapter, you have sure have some talents... This was the best christmas present i could've hoped, thank you. I hope the last chapter won't take for month, hopefully? Can i make a suggestion? I would like to read some hot yaoi action between sasuke and naruto or otherwise i'll be a little disappointed. But it's your story, you decide, but if there would be yaoi at the end, it would be so cool, the best ending i'd say... Thank you, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Emmy on December 23, 2005
    The first thing that really interested me about this fic was the astounding amount of reviews. Now that i've read through to the latest chapter, i'm not even a little suprised to see all the positive responses. Each is well deserved, as this has to be the best naruxsasu fic i've read in a while. I love it, and I love how you added the other two as competition, eventhough it sometimes makes me angry that it's not clear what Naruto is thinking, I enjoy seeing things from the others point of view. It makes for the perfect amount of mystery, not laying everything out on the table, letting the readers come to our own mini-conclusions along the way about what each character is thinking at a particular moment, it makes reading that much more entertaining.

    Of course, I would just love to see a little more from Naruto's POV, but as long as someone shuts gaara the hell up, i'll be happy!
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  • From ANON - kit master on December 23, 2005
    1st: put me on the update list plz XD

    2nd:........ OMG I AM LIKE SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. i sat down to read it, and i've been stuck to my chair for the last two days. Its a FUCKING MASTERPIECE!!!! i haven't found any author that could possibly be better than you!! its like HOLY FUCKIN SHIT!!!

    (deep soothing breaths...) phew all better

    3rd: I love the neji/gar/sas interplay. And have had more squealing OMG moments though this story than i thought possible for a male (bi not gay.) I mean i fell like going over to my younger sister (16 and a huge yaoi fan!!!) and squealing along with her!!

    4th: FUCK yea! sasuke is in deep shit now and naru has every right to be pppppppiiiiiiissssseedddd!!! lol XD

    so any who MORE PLEASE ASAP!!!

    je ne

    kitsune master no hentai (kit master for short)

    PS: if ur wondering about my name, it's because i'm like soooooooooooo addicted to Shippo from Inuyasha, and Naruto, and the kyuubi!!! (An adult shippo is like the hottest thing...) *goes off onto perverted mental branch*
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  • From ANON - KimmehKimKim on December 23, 2005
    GAWWWWWWWWWWWWGH. I HATE YOU! HATE YOU! That was MEANEST CLIFFY. *cries in a corner*

    I've been following your story since chapter 3 and that by far has to be the WORSE thing you've done. Evil evil evil woman! *whine*
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  • From ANON - Keishiki-Dono on December 22, 2005
    Mrow. Yes, Finals are indeed a pain in the ass (Just took the last of mine today). Hope you did well on yours. I love how your fic is progessing. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Azana on December 22, 2005
    Ooooo busted! lol Yatta! you wrote a long chappie n_n great story. Can't wait for the next ch.
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  • From ANON - Ai on December 22, 2005
    *turns blue* tch! O_O HOLY CRAP!

    Good story, good story! And yeah, school.. x--x bleh.
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