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Reviews for Chasing Naruto

By : megladon129
  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on January 08, 2006
    omfg.. I dont even know what to say.. this has to be the best fic ever... and might i con gradulate you on your writing.... Gaara and orochimaru are jsut about my favorite characters... and you.. are a god.. you wrote Orochimaru PERFECTLY.. and gaara is quite godly as well.. you write him perfectly too.. thank you for pwning XD... wow.. this fic is getting good .. the horribly sad!! ... oh and the part with kiba and naruto talking about dacning.. yeah i died laughing.. and started to read it aloud.. my parents thought i was weird XDD .. well your amazing.. please have my children XO
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 07, 2006
    Oh crap there all dumed!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry run away befor it's to late!!!!!!!!!! *Laughs ass of* Well I really would like to know what's going on so please update soon!!!!!!!!! And please make this fic as long as posible!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! XD

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - Andi on January 06, 2006
    Oh my god... You completely tore my heart out with this fic. And the end of this last chapter... I already wanted to cry, halfway through, but at the end, it was just... *headdesk* Wow. Just wow.

    You completely and utterly have a way with words. I can't quite place what it is, but I love it... Everything flows so well. You give vivid descriptions without being too flowery, and your dialogue makes me envious. *sucks at writing dialogue* And your characters are so ALIVE - I felt like you could have been talking about people at my school. (In fact, at times, I was even thinking, 'hey, that sounds a lot like my campus...' Heh.) I think my favorite thing must be the fact that I feel completely involved with the story. Like - maybe it's because I'm overly emotional, but in this chapter when you were talking about the pain in Naruto's chest, I was like, 'I feel it too!' ;_;

    It's taken me a few days to read the whole thing, but it was very much worth it. Extreme kudos to you. ^__^

    (But ugh, I do not have a good feeling about the next chapter... I dunno, my head hurts trying to think about it. *waits in suspense - but patiently, becuase she knows rl = arghbrainexplosions* XD)
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  • From ANON - sha on January 04, 2006
    bloody fantastic fic! HELL! when are those two gonna get together? bloody damn frustating i tell u! dammit. please continue ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on January 04, 2006
    Oh, shit. O.o You'se ALL dead men, boys. Not even the "I was weak, desperate, and in love" excuse is going to help this one. At the very least, all three are going to get the verbal beating of their lives. However, I would very much like to see Naruto realize WHY Sasuke called him a slut. He's not completely innocent in this, though I doubt they'd let him get away with thinking so.

    Excellent chapter; I was TOTALLY not expecting what you revealed in that flashback! O.o Sasuke trying to commit ritual suicide... wow. Though, it's not like incanon where he can become a awesome ninja to try and hunt Itachi down. He has no outlet for his grief and loneliness until Naruto comes in and becomes his friend.

    Sasuke's realization of his unconscious obsession made me giggle. ^.^ Silly Uchiha.

    In the end... damn you and your evil cliff hangers! At least it's almost over. That makesme both sad and happy. Happy to know that they torture will be at an end, sad to see such and awesome story come to a close. It's been a wonderful rollercoaster ride. ^_^
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  • From on January 03, 2006
    After staying up till practically 2 in the morning to finish this fiction I thought I had to review your story. It would be criminal not too. I had been contemplating making an account of here anyways so now is as good a time as any. Anyways, to the point. First I must praise your writting style. It has to be my favourite, I've never read something so completely captivating in my life. Not even joking you. I can't remember when I started this fiction earlier today but I've hardly left the computer all day since I finally had a day off work and could.

    Every chapter drew me along until this last one where I have been forced to stop and have finally realized I am feeling more tired then I realized. This is the best Naruto/ Sasuke fanfiction I have read and look foreward to reading the final chapters of your epic adventure here. You've deserved every hit, and every reveiw.

    ~Morbid Emo
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  • From ANON - Pixiequeen on January 02, 2006
    Oh, that was a nasty cliffhanger there!
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  • From ANON - arynna on January 01, 2006
    great! update!


    alright, j/k i would never do that to a poor author ^^. however, other than grammatical errors & slight OOc-ness here & there (of course it -is- an AU with yaoi, thats to be expected) i see virtually no flaws. other than driving poor readers insane by not telling us what naruto is growing...or whatever he's doing...& cliffhangers. i dont like cliffhangers much myself, but if i dont get one the story often doesnt hold my interest (not that it'd be possible for me to lose interest in this anyway).
    i love AU stories, and what you've done with the characters to keep them true to the storyline, but it seems neji's gonna be alright in the end, but what about gaara? the only person he seems to like at all is naruto... please dont leave poor gaara all alone! *gives cookies for good story & promises more if gaara gets a happy ending too*
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on January 01, 2006
    *grins evilly* Oooh, now that's a good ending. You go get 'em, Naruto. Make 'em sweat.

    Kepp up the great work and good luck on the nomination!
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  • From ANON - Darksilk on December 29, 2005
    YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST F***ING BRILLANT WRITER EVER. Talk about sending a person through a loop. Every chapter I'm biting my nail off
    wondering if your going to change ur mind and have Naruto end up with some one else. Yeah you keep saying it's NxS but come
    of the interaction between N and the others is so hot that it makes you wonder. Anyways update soon before I drive myself crazy
    And if you haven't figured it out yet I FRIGING LOVE THIS STORY.
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  • From Sammei on December 28, 2005
    Yarr, the inevitable has happened! Naruto found out about the bet! What's going to happen to our hero(es) next?! :dies:

    That being said, I love this chapter. ^_^ Naruto's journal writing epiphany, Sasuke's photo album, the memory from Sasuke trying to kill himself, and Tenten and Neji's little exchange.. Great stuff. ^_^ I cannot wait until your next update! I want to see what happens, and where Naruto was going for a few hours.. and how the hell DID Gaara get Sasuke's cell number? O_o
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  • From ANON - lilredevildragon on December 28, 2005
    plz hurry and write...this is one of the best stories i have read. you are a beautiful writing so plz keep on writing and hurry.
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  • From ANON - Shinori-chan on December 26, 2005
    That was so sweet! I loved it! Poor Sasuke and Naruto! I have this strange eerie feeling they will be getting back together but Orochimaru will play some part in that. Oh well. It was quite good and I enjoyed it very much. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Myuki-chan on December 26, 2005
    AH. AHHHH.
    Naruto's had an epiphany? :D Oooh I can't wait to find out what happens now. The bet is finally revealed. XD

    Oh, and Merry Christmas!
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  • From ANON - kuroi-saukrapetals on December 25, 2005
    Jesus Christ! Suspense!! Lord have mercy on my soul. I'm happy that Naruto figured out his feelings but to find out that your the subject of a bet, thats not really great is it! I'm so happy to see an update from you and reading it on Chrisymas day...its like you sent me a present! Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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