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Reviews for The Oni

By : onika
  • From abigailpa on June 20, 2007
    this is good, continue please :)
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  • From ANON - mel on December 10, 2006
    I like what you've written so far. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - AnnaBelle on January 15, 2006
    I'll do it. I'll be your beta reader if you want.
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  • From ANON - Kiri on August 25, 2005
    Lee, Gaara, Hinata, and Iruka?!?!?!?!?!!? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

    -calms down-

    I am soooo sorry -giggle- that I laughed that hard..but -giggle- that was the best team that was put together...-giggle-
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  • From ANON - Ehwinn on July 23, 2005
    Hello!... So what? Where is the next chapter you promise to us? T-T Buhuuu... I hope you will not forget your readers (I like your fanfic very much, and i spent a good time reading it... funny and cute... and really "in characters"!!!)
    So I can take the 'nice guy' pose of Gai and tell you: "you're sensass'" Hé hé!!! Pleaaaaase I'm waiting for the next chapter!!!
    (and it's a french reviewer who tell you that... See, you even have some fan of a really far foreign country!!! hé hé ^_^ )
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  • From ANON - chibi-kaitou on May 30, 2005
    Hmmm...gaara and hinata pairing? I hope so...I think that pairing. I like the story so far. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 27, 2005
    Actually, I noticed fewer typos in this chapter than the first one.

    I like where you're going with this story. Although I don't think that Lee would ever become separated from Gai-sensei, I can see how it fits into your future pairings. As for Gaara, I hope that you show the developing friendship between him and Naruto. They share a connection with each other because of their earlier fight.

    Finally, although I don't normally go for KakaIru, I like how you've actually made it plausible in this fic (the main reason why I don't really like it. They hardly ever talk in canon).

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 27, 2005
    This is an interesting story, but you should edit it a bit more. There are plenty of typos in this story e.g. "wether" instead of "whether", "do" for "due" and I'm pretty sure even Kakashi's name was spelled wrong on one occaision. If at all possible, please use a program with a spell check.

    Besides that, I like this story. I'm going to read chapter 2 now.
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  • From ANON - Elisa Ardell on April 04, 2005
    Ohhh Please write more. I like where this is going!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - snow887 on March 10, 2005
    WOOT!! please update this fic very soon i'm dying to know what happens next ^__^
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 10, 2005
    Good start. Big time au spilt. Love it so far. Give me more chapters. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on March 10, 2005
    nice! update fast! I loves it! ^_^
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