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Reviews for If It Went This Way

By : Kusachu
  • From ANON - silent laugh on March 10, 2005
    muahahah this is fun

    I didn't know that Obito was that evil
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on March 10, 2005
    WOAH...that was damn good. wow...woah...i don't like suckara none either. but i hope that we all meet up soon or the boy's might kill each other^_^V
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 10, 2005
    Uh, keep up the good work. Btw the switching from English to Japanese is confusing as hell, not to mention they don't have correct translations. Japanese is multi language there are 3 ways of writing, and many words have different meanings dependent on what type of writing form is used. Btw Dead Last just doesn't compare to dobe. Something about it I guess. Anyways you can find the Japanese words and somewhat of English translations of them at Narutofan.com Also it has character list and etc.

    I like the fic. Keep up the good work. It's just the English translations of the Japanese terms and titles don't work. Like how Hokage a title that means they are the strongest in the village doesn't match up to fire shadow. Kage is in all the 5 leader's titles of the 5 hidden villages in 5 countries. Like how Konohahagakure (sp) basically means Hidden Village in the Leaves? Anyways just thought you should know, since some diehard Naruto fans can be picky about the terms and titles, epecially Sasuke calling Naruto dobe, while it can mean Dead Last it doesn't really have a meaning at all, just a type of insulting term that only Sasuke uses and he only calls Naruto that.

    There are SO many shounen-ai hints in this series.

    Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Kiri on March 10, 2005
    Well the story looks good so far, but I'm getting bored of Naru/Sas or Sas/Naru. Maybe Kiba/Naru or Haku/Naru, anything other then Naruto with a Sharigan user.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2005
    wow..great story..i cant wait to see the next chappy! goodwork
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  • From ANON - Ghostninja85 on March 10, 2005
    OK. So Sasuke knows about Itachi right now, and I guess that that means for an interesting first meeting with Obito. I'm looking forward to the next chapter dealing with that.

    Oh, I forgot last review, but its Sandaime not Sondaime. San = 3 aka the third Hokage.

    Update as soon as you can! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

    btw, where is this cross posted?
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 10, 2005
    Wow, so Kakashi is dead. Damn, I liked the old eche. Anyways good start. Since this is the very beginning of everything they haven't formed their bonds. So it is interesting in seeing this "What If" scenero. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on March 09, 2005
    Nice to see this fic here too! Looking forward to more.
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  • From Ghostninja85 on March 09, 2005
    This is good enough to motivate me into actually signing in to review.

    I love it. It's a extremely original idea and you write very well. I'm looking forward top Sasuke's interaction with Obito and Team 7's test.

    I assume Obito received the Mangekyu Sharingan when he was responsible for Kakashi's death? Hopefully we'll learn more in the future.

    As to the KakaIru, while I'm not opposed to that pairing, it really has no basis with in canon. SasuNaru NaruSasu on the other hand is a resounding yes.

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on March 09, 2005
    I like this Obito! This was actually very interesting. Good work.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 09, 2005
    So does Kakashi die instead, or do they all live, those of Yondaime's old team? Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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