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By : Kusachu

From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 20, 2005
I'm glad that you decided to continue this fic. Good luck!
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From ANON - fyredevyl on May 20, 2005
�The one that says �Sasuke� and has a kunai through it�s chest.� LMAO!!! HAHAHAHA! That's what I'd do too if I was Naruto. At least Sasuke still has a good sense of humor--for the time being. That was a good preview of the next chapter. Be sure to get it out, superfast, ok?
"Sand spook"--I've never heard him refered to in that way, and it's perfect! Random I know, but I really liked that.
Oh, and the Shino with sexy bugs...ewwwww... I try to figure out what to do with Shino, but I get freaked everytime I think of what Neji revealed to us. Bugs nesting in the body...yuck. I can't even stand them nesting in corners...
You have a very wonky sense of humor...makes the day more interesting.
I'm glad you decided to leave the chapter alone. Even if you didn't like it, it's still very good.
~Cheers~

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From ANON - Liliath on May 20, 2005
so thats the reason, eh? PMSing...I see...talking about PMS...I think Im about to have mine...MUAHAHA!!EVERYONE IN THE TOWN FUCKING BEWARE COZ IM GONNA TURN INTO A LUNATIC GONE GENIUS FOR 6 DAYS!!!!!!!!!!!AHHAHAHAHAHAAAAA...AAA...a..a XP anyways...about the pairings...MAKE OBITONARU PLS PLS OH PLS!!!!!!!!!!!! naruto needs a better teacher now doesnt he? and who better then obito? and also...what about the sand god sex gaara???EH??????WTF?????I hope you didnt forget about him OR IM GONNA JUMP ON YOU THROUGHT YOUR PC SCREEN WITH A PITCHFORK!!!!!!!!!!!!MUAHAHAHA!!HAHA...ha..ha....a...pitchfork????WTF???? O_o
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From ANON - GreenEyes52 on May 17, 2005
I will confess that I was bypassing this particular story for a while because Kakashi is my absolute favorite character and, being in a depressed mood anyway, I didn't want to read something that had my favorite jounin dead. However, after reading what you've written so far, I really like your development of Obito's character. He has Kakashi's strengths and also manages to not fall prey to Kakashi's weaknesses as an instructor. The end result is that he seems to be a bit of a "superman" and a bit too good to be true. I really like the story and hope that you've got it all planned out because I've had more than one very promising series die out recently because the authors wrote themselves into a corner and couldn't get out without compromising their work up to that point. Push on - your work is appreciated and best of luck with your studies (I work at a university so I know what the students are going through at this time of year).

GreenEyes52
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From ANON - april on May 16, 2005
hay in the first part of the notes you get this really weird typing going how do you do that?????
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From ANON - Stranj100 on May 15, 2005
First off, I would like to appologize for not reviewing sooner. I really have been enjoying this alternative take on Naruto. Personally I would like to see how Obito would interact with Iruka, he's the only person to really care for Naruto. I would like to see how Obito would take to the chuunin. Second, I'm a writer and sympathize with the lack of reviews, but all I can say is it happens. You should be writing for your own enjoyment because if you aren't enjoying it then why are you doing it. Reviews should be secondary. Also remeber for every one reviewer there are about twenty lurkers who will never review. One thing I suggest is if you want more reviews try posting in different forums like livejournal or on yahoo groups. I find some times that's the only way to get a decent amount of feedback.
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From ANON - ashez on May 15, 2005
Hmm.. interesting. Kakashi's death scene etc worked out fine in my opinion. I still hope this isn't NaruSasuke... Come on, be creative and do something not so common. Like... err.. I dunno, just something different? Maybe Gara/Naruto maybe? Or even Naruto/Sakura isn't as common as you would think. Or Naruhina (also oddly very very uncommon, especially on adultfanfiction.net)? Or Anko/Obito? lol Now there's a scary couple.
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From fyredevyl on May 15, 2005
One more thing...I forgot to add...
What are the pairings?! That's killing me! And you've done a good (annoying) job of hiding who it will be. Sometimes you think it's going to be SasuNaru, then you think it's NaruSaku, the SasuSaku....
ARGH!!! MAKE UP YOUR MIND! AND TELL US WHO IT WILL BE!!!
Please??????
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From fyredevyl on May 15, 2005
Very good chapter (ch. 10). Sorry I haven't reviewed lately, but I've been busy with my own story. I now know how much reviews mean to authors. But don't worry so much over not getting that many. You've still got a ton of hits.

As to the new manga chapter and your use of blackbirds?/ravens? That was fucking awesome. It suits the Uchihas. It looks like Sasuke is going to be summoning snakes though, which is EWWW....

Update as quickly as you can, without hurting your own studies of course. Cheers! ^_^
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From ANON - get over it on May 15, 2005
4322 is the number of hits you have. So get over the fact you do not get a lot of reviews. There are people who can not get to this site and read from here. They have to use ff.net try posting there. If your so jamed up about reviews. Thought you where a good writer. key word in that last part did you see it? No good writer as for reviews.
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From ANON - Liliath on May 15, 2005
you want it? ya sure? okay then, you got what you asked for ^^ BRING ON THE MOTHERFUCKING SASUNARU SNUFF, SOME GOOD ORGASMS, TELL THAT BITCH SAKURA TO FUCK OFF AND LET OBITO-SAMA JOIN THE SASUNARU HOT AND STEAMY SEX!!! AND DONT FUCKING FUCK WITH ME THAT YOU CANT COZ I WANT IT AND WHATEVER I WANT O GET SO MUAHAHA BRING IT ON AND LET THEM FUCK THERE WAS NO TOMORROW...enough thought they're only 12....XPP maybe Obito-sama should teach em and then watch em XDDDDDDD and dont worry, me aint angry for that shit of 10 chapter coz me understands your frustration and all so hey, YOU BETTER MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER FULL OF SEX AND SWEARING AND ORGASMS!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!! XD JA NE UNTIL THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^
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From ANON - Ghonchi on May 15, 2005
ehum...how in da name of thy Yaoigodess can you write that much in just one friggin' chappie!?
Can I pleeeeease have some of your stamina (not in a wierd way!)? please? *puppyeyes* 9_9

you are abit...um... In swidish, we call it 'flummig', but I don't think that it's the english word O_o
It means something like: talk alot about nothing and everything, likes to have fun and make a bunch of jokes every friggin' time, someone everybody likes.
or something like that...Flummig is easier to say tho' ^^b
i'm pretty screwd' myself...though of a conversation 'bout a hat for a couple of minutes...(65 to be exact)

Anygate, a big chokolate cake to you for those looooooooooong chappies! d~_^b
Hope you'll have great luck with chainin' thy allmighty soon to be ex creator of Naruto. can I have the Uchihas and Deidara if you succcsssesss (she likes 'C' and 'S'...don't ask...) ^^b
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From ANON - Liliath on May 15, 2005
shees, calm down, get drunk, beat someone to pulp and then return and this chapter, k?? ^^ but I still ike it...OBITO DRUNK AND IN MY BED!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!! XDDD
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 15, 2005
WTF?!? Gah, you suck!!! *whacks you upside the head* How dare you update without e-mailing me and letting me know about it!!! *glares at you with the the "cold bastard glare of death" TM -- courtesy of Sasuke* And what the hell was that??? You call that a chapter?!? It sure as hell wasn't a fu---

~~~insert random curses and struggle noises here, all of which are actually mental and can not be heard, but use your imagination~~~

^^ Gomen, gomen, once again I stayed up too late working on a project and "HE" got too much control over what I.....erm, make that what we..... said. *cue the longsuffering sigh* Gods, I hate projects.......this is the third one in a row, too, and I still have one more to do......... >.< Anywho, back to the review.....

Thanks for the update -- this chapter was...interesting, to say the least. ^___~ Not your best, but still good and understandably necessary for the following chapters. That, and I think that all of the would-be authors out there can relate when you want to get on with your story but need to add something first and not only dread doing so, but also have heaps of trouble writing it and are just plain bored with said chapter, too. *whew!* Sorry, that was a run-on sentence if there ever was one, but as I mentioned before, I'm reeeeeeally tired. (I hope you can make -some- sense out of it...) Therefore, I leave you with this: d(^-^)b Keep up the good work!!! (And e-mail me, dammit!!!) ^^ Ja ne!!!
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From ANON - josh on May 14, 2005
...The names are supposed to be last name first name like "uzumaki naruto" not "naruto uzumaki" but not counting that this is pretty good
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