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Reviews for Liar

By : mayfaire
  • From ANON - Brooke on October 10, 2006
    I thought it was a good story, I like the stories about itachi and sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Its me on October 04, 2006
    I think you need a beta. And no, I will not forgive you for misspelling a word. This is the Internet, it has LOTS AND LOTS of sources. Im sure you could find the correct way to spell it. If you want to write stories, then get off of your lazy ass and do some work. Its not about posting it in here and seeing how many review you get. Its about actually doing some quaility writing, and making people ENJOY it, and not making it as hard for them to read it. Either your writing sucks, or you just didnt go over it at all. That, or you need a beta to help you. But dont think its the latter. I think you were just too lazy to actually go over it and fix your errors. So in other words... This story angers me, because it could have been so much better.



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  • From ANON - Bekah on September 14, 2006
    This is great. Yeah he's still a liar. ^^ I hope to see more work from you.
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  • From ANON - Paradiseboy on December 23, 2005
    That last part about kites was pretty cool.Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 25, 2005
    I really love this story.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 28, 2005
    not boring (read again)
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on March 14, 2005
    awesomeness! too bad its a one-shot.... could you write more please? I thought it was interesting being written in Itachi's PoV and it was so... heartwarming and all that jazz! you really should continue it! theres so many different ways to go with it! it would be amazing!
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  • From ANON - irish on March 10, 2005
    Continue, plizzz...
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  • From ANON - ranoshi_ai on March 09, 2005
    Yes, Uchihacest ^O^! And good Uchihacest at that X< yay! This is a lovely one shot, I felt that it was in character enough, such a sweet memory. Does Sasuke remember kissing Itachi nii-san I wonder^^~ Anyways, are in the Live Journal community of The Church of Uchihacest^^? If not, you should really do so^__^. Here's the link, but I'm not sure if it will even show: http://www.livejournal.com/community/churchofuchiha/
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on March 09, 2005
    Very cute -- I liked it!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From kagaya on March 08, 2005
    "usotsuki" is the correct spelling. As for this fic, I like it. It's got this quiet, brooding, bitter-sweet quality that makes it full of angsty goodness... with a dash of nostalgia, marinated in sin. Yes, nii-san is a liar... I feel sorry for him and Sasuke. It's nice to read another fic from Itachi's POV, and you handled it well with delicate detail without spelling everything out. Whether their love is brotherly doesn't really matter to me. Had a bit of a problem with time/setting changes, but otherwise... ^_^V
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