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Reviews for Purple Cocaine Prison

By : Ebraheart
  • From ANON - calpis on August 29, 2005
    I have no idea how to start this out. I kind of want to go, 'holy fscking hell your fic rocks hard,' but I don't think it'd do it justice. I love your take on the characters. I love their view points & catchy little come backs/quotes. As soon as I read the first chapter, I couldn't stop reading. You got me hook, line & sinker. I've honestly reread this fic more than 20 times & haven't gotten tired of it.

    I mean, there's always the chance that people can dive down to making everyone OOC when writing an AU fic, but you make it work. Their personalities don't seem off or anything. It's as if that's how they are & should be in the world you wrote them into. Even though there are some misspellings & off grammar, it doesn't affect the story in the slightest. I see it and move on, not caring, because I'm just digging where things are going, how people are reacting & speaking.

    BTW, I love the clothes they wear [especially Gaara's]. Your fic has this charm to it that I can't pinpoint or find, it's just there & it has me adding this to favorites & checking everyday to re-read. Also, most of the time I hate how Sasuke's characterized because a lot of people tend to stick him into the, 'i'm a prick who says 'usuratonkachi' or 'dobe' a lot,' without really expanding on his inner workings. But in your fic he's just awesome. He's a prick, but he's just- I can't explain it. He's just understandable in his prick-ish ways. & the relationship between him & Itachi? GOLDEN.

    Um, wow, I think I just rambled a lot in this review. But I can't wait till you come back from re-arranging.
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  • From ANON - samuriGirl on August 29, 2005
    WHAT!!!!..... you dont have to take some crap from a reviewer. A person that reviews gives there own idea of a fic just because they dont like something dosnt mean anything. I myself hate sasuke and most likly will forever (in anime,manga,drawing,dolls,fanfics and so on ) but thats my opion other people seem to love the guy.(chill goes up back) A FANFIC IS ALWAYS OOC out of character the fact that its in another world shows that not only that put in this new world they most likly had new exprences and met new people so the fact is the fact is the person was talking BS.
    PS.....i hope it wasnt one of my reviews >.
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  • From ANON - tsusami on August 29, 2005
    I didn't mean to bum you out ;___; But I think you have a lot of potential and just got . . sidetracked? It's hard to keep track of a story too if you spread it out over a long period of time. Maybe get a beta reader?
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  • From ANON - Skeith-sama on August 29, 2005
    I really love this story, it's one of my favorite, I really look forward to readfing more of it, I wish I could write this good.
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  • From on August 29, 2005
    Omg o-o Seriously, there is NOTHING wrong with your fic...Its progressing wonderfully and I think if you rewrote any of the previous chapters it wouldn't have NEARLY as much action and progression as the originals. Don't let other people tell you that your fic has gone full circle!! You write it and the plot works itself out in YOUR mind, not theirs. Seriously, I love this fic the way it is and I believe it would be really disappointing if it were edited...But then again..Im contradicting myself because it is your fic. I suppose its your choice, but just know that I think this story ROCKS and you shouldn't have to change it at all, trust me. Im sure a lot of others feel the same way ^^ *hugs* Alright then, I guess I'll just wait for your next update:XD
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  • From ANON - Trek on August 29, 2005
    I personnaly love your story. You've got a good writing. I particulary love your descritption, how the first person pov is not heavy, or stupid, but well done; and how this whole thing tend to develope itself. But, yeah, we haven't see Naruto draw in a few chapter, and it's a little sad. I don't know who the final pairing will be, but I vote for SasuNaru. I really like some GaaraNaru and NejiNaru, but I think it's a little too easy (especially the NejiNaru part in your story) I prefer see Naruto and Gaara's relationship in a brotherly sort of way and my second fav pairing is Gaara and Neji (I don't care in wich way as they are both cold sort of guy). But it's not my story and not my place to decide. So, well, whatever you choose, it'll still be a good story (exept if you make them die!) So, yeah, continue and good luck! *give you a Naru-chan plushy luky charm with a little ,otbock in one hand and a brush and a pen in the other* ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Lena on August 29, 2005
    I'ts a good story in of itself, like a novel i'd pick off the shelf, but if your point is to acuretly depict the characters from naruto you're probably right in thinking that everyone is OOC
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  • From ANON - tsusami on August 29, 2005
    I started off liking this fic. It was an interesting way to reprensent the characters, but i think you're losing them. with each chapter, Naruto is increasinly a 16 year old girl. Seriously. He lacks all of the things that make him lovable like his cluelessness, his loud mouthed, incorrigible behavior and his unwillingness to back down. Naruto isn't a diplomat, and really quite the opposite. Also, the way you have him flirt with everyone is the way a girl flirts with guys. Unless you want Naruto to have the appearance of a flamingly gay boy. You're giving him purely feminine qualities in both the way he speaks, and interacts. The story is cute, but it's like you're written an entirely different character and given him the name "naruto" It's so OOC that it's painful ;___; Take a look at your first chapter. He wasn't nearly this feminine in the beginning.
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  • From ANON - Ne-San on August 27, 2005
    Ne is loving this fic! I love Garaa's make up and Naruto's art thing and all that. There so cool. I love the Zabuza, Haku in the story as well. I'm awaiting your next chapter on the edge of my plastic lawn chair seat.
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 26, 2005
    I was reading some of your reveiws, so I want to say a few things all of a sudden.
    1) I am gung-ho Sasuke/Naruto. Hehe.
    2) I am pro-lemon. Eh heh heh... (evil, maniac laughter)
    3) I want Itachi to do something weird again. (Ahh. Plot bunnies.)
    4) I'm glad you stopped using Japanese dialouge for Boston people.
    5) "Aniki" = Sasuke and Itachi = Japanese?
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 26, 2005
    Oh, this really is fun! Especially this!
    "…besides, I might even be a bit of a masochist."

    XD
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 26, 2005
    An update, FINALLY!!!!!!!
    And a great one, too :)
    To unswer your question: I have no idea either, but I'm a HUGE SasuNaru lover, and just a tiny bit less huge GaaNaru lover, so... Poor Naruto :)
    But Gaara is so absolutely wonderful in your fic that I would'n mind him winning this competition :)
    Just update sooner than last time, pleeeease!
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  • From ANON - B on August 26, 2005
    After reading this chapter I have only one thing to say: "Go Gaara Go! Go Gaara Go!" (He's so adorable!
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  • From YaoiloverS on August 25, 2005
    yay!! another chapter!!! Naruto getting his tougne done is really brave to me (I'm deadly afraid of needles so I have no holes ^__^) Man, even when he's claimed he's getting kissed by everyone, poor Neji.....good luck Naruto and hopefully Itachi doesn't have a go!! (though I do have this feeling...lol) I can't wait until the next chapter!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - vashta on August 25, 2005
    Great chap, but I am still gungho Neji/Nar. Please don't put him with anyone else. There are not enough Ne/Nar fics out there. Maybe Gaara could hook up with Sas, or maybe not, they aren't very similar. Anyway, waiting for more Ne/Nar action, and Nar is being a little two timey, he could say no.
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