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By : Ebraheart

From ANON - Laewyn on October 09, 2006
AN UPDATE!! Woohoo :D Truly made me feel much better than these days..Really, most of the fics I've read nowadays end up really boring at the middle..But Your fic just seems to be getting better :D I don't know why but I really like the way it goes on, especially that this fic isn't specificly about SasuNaru/NaruSasu. Heh, I think I'll be sad for Neji or pretty much anyone Naruto doesn't get together with xD
Darn, Why is it that I never have anything interesting to say..
Don't let them get away too easily, I want lots of drama/angst whateva, especially fights with Sasuke and Naruto.. (ohh, poor Sasuke for not been good at expressing himself :D) and really, I like your Naruto..I always get frustrated when in almost every fic Naruto just gives in too easily, and the anonoying self thoughts that really isn't Naruto..Gomen, I know my review isn't the best of best but what I'm trying to say here that PLEASE don't make me wait too long for the next chappie, yeah? :)
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From ANON - frizzy197 on September 25, 2006
i love this fanfic!!!! write more.
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From ANON - chris on August 20, 2006
omfg i love it you have to keep it going
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on August 03, 2006
*Huggles* Don't get so down. I don't that you were going overboard. You have a nice plot that makes your story more believable. And in that way, I havent' even noticed any OOC characters. So if their were, it's not that I didn't have attention.

You have Neji as a prefectionist who fonds over Naruto. You still have the Sasuke who enjoys taunting others. And Gaara who only seems to like Naruto. All in check for all I know. And besides, they're supposed to fawning over the blond. Trying to court his love and all. Shouldn't they be acting the way they are?

Well w/e. I love the story, like I told you. And all the other activites that you invite Naruto into gives the atmosphere a more realistic feel. Like that chapter before with Naruto descriving the rain. I LOVE rain. It's when I get my best thoughts down. And throughout that chapter I could literally hear the rain coming down, giving me that feeling that I was in the story.

Kudos,

~Ria
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on August 03, 2006
Sitcom Duck Central. A very creative title, a very cute chapter. Sasuke finally kissed Naruto. About freaken time, jeesh. And Gaara....man, telling you that I was surprised is an understatement. But I truthfully didn't see that coming at all. Not that it wasn't welcome. Kami.....it is as welcoming as a snow bath in this freaken hot weather.

Naruto has a tongue piercing. *Acts girly* OH. MY. GOSH. I bet it's going to be hot to use that in kissing sessions. *massive drooling* Can't wait to hear our Beloved Neji's opinion on it. He doesn't sound like the type of guy that'd dissapprove. It's more of an art anyway, right? O.o I want an eyebrow piercing. That'd be cool.

I can't wait till Sasuke hooks up with Naruto again. I was almost hoping that he'd take advantage of him while they were asleep. It would have satiated me for a bit. ^^

As for trying to figure out where you are going with this story..... *thinks* Even though you have many chapters after this, I wanna take a guess.

Firstly, Naruto might start having actual feelings for Neji and can't stop his self from thinking about him. Maybe Naruto goest to visit Sasuke at his huge mansion of an apartment and comes across Itachi. And since Kisame so nicely proclaimed that Itachi talks so much about our blue-eyed blond, maybe Itachi will try and molest him O.o *shrugs* It'd seem like something that he'd do. And maybe then Sasuke will come to rescue.

Overall, the story is going to be menacing for Naruto. He's going to be falling for all three guys and not be able to tell the other about what's going on. He'll feel really guilty and probably try and breake things off with his actual boyfriend. Or maybe Neji will catch one of the guys hitting on Naruto. I don't know, give me a break. It's like 9:15 p.m. and I haven't had any dinner yet. My fingers are typing for the half hell of it. I'm really lucky, ya know. To be able to get through at least two chapters. If lucks on my side, and let's not jinx it please, then I'll meet you in your next wonderful chapter.

You're doing such great work, can't wait till I'm actually in level with all that's been going on. I feel so behind, but heh, who cares. Continue the great work, I'm so addicted it's scary.

Take Care ^^

Ria ^.~
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on August 03, 2006
Alright, I need to comment this chapter really fast b/c I'm dying to read chapter.....8, is it? Anyways, This one was so awesome. I love it. And the way you're making Naruto and Sasuke relax with one another is incredible. I absolutely love it. =^-^=

About that dish washer scene... �I�ll get you one for Christmas� That line literally had me falling out of my chair laughing. It was like . . .he's so rich and serious and he wanted to do something nice so he decides to get one for Naruto. Cute. that's the only way that I can describe it. Of course Naruto ruined it by laughing his ass off.

They are sleeping in the same bed. *squeals* Now I'm actually happy that Sasuke got into a fight with his brother. Though what Itachi did to Sasuke's hand had me screaming through my teeth. That is so painful. All bruisy. Poor baby.

Thank you for the great humour read. That beginning part with Gaara 'accidently' pushing Kiba into Zabuza cracked me up. You've gotta love Gaara. And I can only imagine Kiba's expression.

I'm sorry that this comment is very short. But I'm expecting my brothers back soon and I really want to try and get another chapter down. I /would/ print the story out, but we're running out of paper and ink. Also, I read that top part about you asking for a beta. I can just assume that you probably already have one. But incase soemthing happens to your beta-er and you need someone to proofread over a chapter, then feel free to message me. I would love to, especially b/c this story has me as hooked as a pacifier in my baby sisters' mouth.

Much love,

Ria ^W^
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on August 03, 2006
It's almost 3 in the morning and I'm bushed. I can't type too loudly b/c I have three sleeping brother's surrounding me, so I apologize if this comment is not as long as the others. I've been very busy, I almost had to force myself to read that 5th chapter. It was incredible. and I can't believe it. Now I'm starting to want Sasuke and Naruto hook up. =slams forehead against the wall= I mean, he's being kinda sweet and not really an ass. Neji is a great boyfriend. He didn't even take it far with Naruto, and we all know that he wanted to. But no, he wanted to give Naruto some room to think about it and he has a very nice resistance to temptation. THIS is what love is about. Caring about others and flicking off lustfull needs. Though in this stories case I have nothing in particular running in my crazed mind.

I think it would be cute if Gaara has a crush on Naruto. Something tells me he is? I am really so lucky to find such a great story. Have I told you how addicted I am to this fanfic? So many wonderful stories have gone abandoned since AFF's incident last year. I'm so thoroughly psyched to have come across this story. *squeals like a lunatic* I know you already know I like this story, but I can't seem to thank you enough for how wonderful everything is. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Too bad that won't happen till a few hours. I need some sleep.

=secretly starts hoping for some more SasuNaru action, even though I'm strongly supporting Neji ^^=

So again, take Care, and happy writing,

~Ria ^.~
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From Redwitch05 on July 31, 2006
That was w/o a doubt a VERY long chapter. *stretches and rolls shoulders* I'm going to need a massage after being on the computer for so long. There were so many great parts that I can't even recall which one was in THIS chapter. Firstly, there was that picture that Naruto had in his sketchbook of Neji smiling. And he could never remember sketching a picture w/ that smile. Perhaps Neji knew that he was being drawn and was blushing? The beginning part with Neji showing poor Naruto how to throw the volleyball was awesome and adorable. And then there was that kiss. =^-^= KYAAAAAA *Big glomp attack* That was so cute. I love you. I can't wait for their date. It's going to be HOTT.

Hey, you keep talking about Naruto never being able to write anything the teacher seems to understand. That small story w/ the Dracula(?)/Vampire/mindreader ...was that a story that he had wrote? or was working on? B/c I really liked it. Especially after reading what happened once Naruto was at Sasuke's place.

*smiles knowingly*

So~, does Itachi have a thang for our Kitsune? *bats eyes* Sasuke seemed protective, if his actions were any indication. And speaking of actions, that kiss scene was a definite surprise, and although I was craving for a NejiNaru fanfic, I loved the idea of Sasuke being possessive and trying to claim our delectable blond. It was hot and erotic. And it added to the bonus that Naruto found it pleasant, even if it wasn't gentle. Now for Neji to find this out will be ....interesting, may I add. I love you writing so much. Can't wait to read the 5th chapter. But I've got a cramp in my back and I haven't worked out all day. So I'll try tomorrow. Much safer.

You are on my Favorite Author's List. Right up there with AkaiTsume, Arora, Ruby Lips, and Leafygirl ^^

Take Care

~Ria ^.~
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From Redwitch05 on July 31, 2006
Third chapter was beautiful. At first, in Naruto's cooking class, when Sasuke and Gaara were situated as his group and you had mentioned that the groups held 3 to 4 ppl, I was expecting a fourth party by the name of Neji. I wasn't dissapointed that he wasn't in his class though. Atleast you have Gaara and Sasuke. When it actually came time to eating the cake, and Naruto saw Neji, I was all like 'YAY'. And when Neji entwined his fingers with Naruto, I was like 'KYAA ^^' so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute. ^.^ I loved it. It was one of my favey moments where I couldn't stop the goofy smile from leaving my face. And Sasuke's attitude afterwards was priceless. He can be such an ass. I can't believe him. And in Spanish class, when Naruto tried to make peace, I just felt like throttling Sasuke. ....that idiot.

lol. But I loved it when Naruto tried to get his way out of having to go to Sasukes' place. And to say that he had a date made me go 'GAH. Naruto-kun you knucklehead.'

Overall, Wonderderful work, Keep at it,

~Ria ^.~
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From Redwitch05 on July 31, 2006
It took forEVER to read that second chapter. I was having to hold my baby sis and she wouldn't stop grabbing all the things off the desk. Like the earplugs for the speakers or my brother's paperwork, my water bottle, and the remote. And she kept stuffing EVERYTHING in her mouth. *stifles a frustrated screech*

Moving on, I'm liking the way you had everyone's POV. It was a great chapter, and I didn't think the ending was corny at all. It was great. And so now we know why Naruto flinches. It's b/c Sasuke used to beat him all the time? that's so sad. Stupid sasuke *punches him* It was sad though, the way he was thinking about it and how Sasuke didn't realize that it was his fault.

So Shika works at a cafe as a waitress? I think that's awesome. Especially b/c he voices his opinions so openly w/o caring what anyone has to say about it. unlike what happened to this waitress in NY just the other day. My cousin's NewYork roomate, Hannah, went to this Restaurant owned by a very well known man. She said that she was sitting when someone had made a comment about what was happening in the middle east. The waitress said, "The Israelis can go screw themselves." Her boss slapped her RIGHT in front of Hannah. The waitress spilled her drink in his face as a retaliation. When the police came, the boss said that he thought she was going to break the glass in his face so he had to defend his self. *rolls eyes* ....liar BTW, there was this big protest about it in NY. All kinds of ppl participated. I think it's great.

ANYWA~YS-

I like your plot a lot. But I'm somewhat perplexed. This story IS a NejiNaru, ne? O.o I love Naruto's job. I would LOVE to work at an Arts store. I too, am obsessed with the wonderful world of Art.

Off to read the third chapter, Good luck with your story.

Later ^^

Ria
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From Redwitch05 on July 31, 2006
I just started reading your story and I'm hooked. I love you. Ever since I watched that episode with Neji fighting one of Orochimaru's men and nearly dying from it, I've been in love with him. Throughout that episode, he keeps thinking about how Naruto is a great person and how he can save Sasuke from the Darkness b/c he had saved him in the past. I really hope this is a NaruNeji/NejiNaru story. I have NEVER read that kind of coupling before and I am most intrigued to find one. I really loved this chapter (Chapter 1) Amazing and cute and everyone is in character. And have I mentioned I love you? The chapter is very lengthy and I appreciate your hard work in producing it.

I'm off to read the next chapter,

Ja

~Ria =^-^=
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From ANON - killjoevolume1 on February 01, 2006
I beg of you, pleeassse update, the concept is freakisly amazing and the characters are nearly flawless, if you ever take the time to read your much deserved reviews please at least E-Mail me as to when you might be updating.
Sincerily, Joseph AKA johona
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From godofcontradiction on January 03, 2006
I'm going to review everyday if i have to... (grins) but i really, really, DO adore this, and i wish you'd have the next chapter up soon... so i'm here to inspire you!! nyahahaha... oh well... I read, and re read that part about Naruto confessing to Neji that he let Sasuke kiss him, and oh god, oh god... i still cant over the butterflies in my stomach. damn. ^_^
I will faithfully follow this story through so please DO continue!!
Cheers.
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From godofcontradiction on January 02, 2006
First off, I love this. I absolutely love this and i adore your writing style. Your characters are well rounded and its just so damn good! ^_^ I'm mostly a SasuxNaru fan, but now im starting to really adore Nejixnaru.. GO NEJI!! He's so sweet!!! I now worship his toes!! haha... you have great crack pot sense of humor, with just the right amount of sweet old sarcasm among other things.. Wow, i'm so overwhelmed i cant even make proper sense anymore! Just please update... you MUST know how desperate i'm feeling right now... Neji and Naruto cant break up! They cant! (sobs hysterically) I will die if they did... haha. No complaints whatsoever... but... well... its not that im against sasuxgaara, but with how your story is going? Sasuke somewhat having this attraction to Naruto and all and suddenly ending up with Gaara who's supposed to be Naruto's 'brother'? Its just.. i dunno.... not right. But hey, that's all me and my weirdness. Its all up to you of course.. I'd be happy reading whatever you come up with with your uber uber great mind!! See, now im showering you with much, much compliment which is not exactly me, so please update! ^_^
Keep rocking.
Cheers.
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From ANON - beeku on December 30, 2005
please oh PLEASE don't make this a gaasasu or a sasugaa fic. Please.... because I love this rectangle of emotions all directed at one corner... (naruo). so PLEASE don't make it a gaara/sasuke or a sasuke/gaara fic.
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