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Reviews for Purple Cocaine Prison

By : Ebraheart
  • From FairyNiamh on February 10, 2008
    Very interesting, I'm surprised I haven't found this jewel before this as NejiNaru is one of my OTPs. :D I like what you have written so far and I am glad that you didn't make their relationship an extra smooth one. It's a little rockier than most, but in the same light very realistic for Naruto. Please keep up the great work and I hope you update soon. *hugs* Ja ne.
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  • From drivven on February 09, 2008
    Very very good. I stayed up all night reading and then dove back in again after I finally took a nap. I really hope you will have more for us soon.

    Thanks,
    Drivven
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  • From charmpit on February 08, 2008
    Wow.

    It took me 4.5 hours to read the fourteen chapters. I mention that because I can usually read fourteen chapters of a fanfic, even long chapters, in under two hours. That's not a boast; it's commentary on fanfiction in general, which can't help but be formulaic. Having said that, I could call your story formulaic as well, but not for the same, garden-variety reasons, which explains why it took me 4.5 hours to read the fourteen chapters. Your style of writing forces the reader to linger on the connection between each word of text and the one that follows. You use them, with consummate skill, to weave your story.

    I could see everything happening in my mind, like I was there in every scene. This was extremely angsty, too, which I don't normally go for. It was high school AU, for corn's sake, but didn't diminish the appeal of the story in any way. I want you to know four things:

    1. You write your bonds of friendship well. I was thinking that you might have had the experience of a friendship or two like that to draw from; if that is the case then you are fortunate.

    2. I love that Sasuke's character could easily have been Neji's and that Neji's character could easily have been Sasuke's. There are compelling arguments for both in this story.

    3. I am rooting for NejiNaru's happiness.

    4. I give you bonus points for adding Shino as a character to your story. I love Shino.

    I think I'm rambling now but the point I need to make is that you have, in my humble estimation, written a masterpiece.
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  • From DarkRavie on February 06, 2008
    Your fic is very good. I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
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  • From Vague on May 01, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=37. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From aliases101 on March 18, 2007
    i am in love with this story. my fav pairing is nejinaru and it's so hard to find especially with this many chapters. so please continue for this huge nejinaru fan. thanks
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  • From ANON - flcl_ffx_lovr on January 02, 2007
    for god sakes....UPDATE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chelzi on November 20, 2006
    grr!! i've been reading this for about three or four days now, and i'm on pins and needles now. WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN??!? i knew sasuke and itachi had fought when he had that bruise, but... GARHG!! and what the FUCK is up with gaara? what's wrong with him? why would they put him on, i dunno, TWELVE different medications!?!!?!? i agree with kankuro-- no WONDER he's got insomnia. i love gaara as a punk, it's kinda cute. OH!! and the whole cookie monster thing is great!! i've been a little confused off and on about things, like his classes. it seems the schedual isn't consistant, but maybe it's not. and it seemed like who was in the classes changed, but maybe i was wrong. i don't really remember anyway. please keep writing, and i hope you update soon!! i can't wait to see what happens!~
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 25, 2006
    i'm absolutely in love with this story. i've been reading it for the past few days... stupid school and need of sleep got in the way of me finishing it, but i'm kind of sad now that i don't have another chapter to read. i hope u update soon, cause this is one of the only things that makes me happy right now!

    -inc
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on October 24, 2006
    Sorry I took so long to review ^^ I re-read the entire story before I read your update chapter =P. I noticed something though... You have an awesome fashion sense XP!

    It's nice to know that deep down Naruto loves Sasuke too *eyes water* (SasuNaru fan XP). And it's even cooler that Neji is accepting of that (Neji is just too cool, period =3).

    This story is so amazing ^^. It's really sweet and I'm completely addicted to it. The way you write in first person is just x_O unbelievable. A lot of first-person stories I read aren't as well written as ones in third-person. I understand why though, I've tried writing first-person and almost every sentence seems to start with "I...". You're so talented... *tears up in admiration*.

    So, yeah, great fic, hope you update soon.

    I oughta demand that Sasuke be okay XP.
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  • From ANON - Donedin on October 23, 2006
    WOW tgis is a good story, I just started reading it, and after the first chappy I started a marathon to catch up! You have got me bugging out about the whole Sauske thing tho! WHAA I want more chappys! Can't wait for your next post!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on October 23, 2006
    Omg!! it just keeps getting better and better. awaiting next chap.
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  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on October 23, 2006
    I had to read the whole thing before I reviewed. I like AU fics. It's fun to see what kind of role they fit into in the real world. I like Gaara. He's funny in an odd kind of way. Keep on going^_^
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  • From ANON - Lici on October 22, 2006
    *deep breath . . . .* OMG! I Love this! it's interesting, deep enough to keep me hooked, and a bit crazy. Good job, hun!

    Please continue, I'm waiting patiently.
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on October 20, 2006
    What an awesome story! It's the first time i've seen it and i spent all afternoon reading it in fact, i thought it was so good. I'm really loving Sasuke's portrayal in this one and yeah, i don't think he's an asswhole at all, but smug, which is classic him. The thing bewteen Naruto and Neji is so sweet and yet at the same time i'm almost hoping something will happen with Sasuke and Naruto. What angst! Everyone else,Shika,Haku,Gaara and the others are perfct. At any rate, i hope you update real soon!
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