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Reviews for Purple Cocaine Prison

By : Ebraheart
  • From bellemort on March 17, 2005
    i commend you for being able to write such an interesting chapter, one that makes me wanting more. the story is moving along nicely, and the dialogue is good. for some reason, i'm feeling that this fic cold go in so many different directions, as far as the pairing goes. i think that neji, sasuke and gaara all have a shot at getting naruto so far, and i honestly can't say for sure.

    this tird chapter also brings up questions about what exactly happened between naruto and sasuke in the past, and maybe the issue isn't as simple as naruto thinks. oh the possibility to that! *fangirls*

    well, i have to say that this chap is well written, and i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Bambi on March 17, 2005
    I love this story. I mean I really, really love this story. Your characterizations are amazing, and so intriguing. I also love the relationships between the characters, and I'm especially intrigued by this potential love triangle. I must admit that I am just as fascinated by Sasuske and Naruto's relationship as I am by Neiji's and Naruto's. I hope you explore both relationships equally, instead of just focusing predominantly on Neiji and Naruto. I am very much looking forward to your upcoming chapters, and let me just say that it is so refreshing to finally find someone capable of character developement! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - LtF on March 17, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooOOOOOo Sasuke's sooo jealous >o< XDDDD ...
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  • From ANON - lostlily on March 16, 2005
    i love your story. it's really awesome. i can't wait to read the next chappie. good luck writing it out. ganbatte!
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  • From ANON - clowangel on March 16, 2005
    Woohoo!! Another great chapter! I love how you wrote this. It's the best! ^^ Teeheehee. Write more soon okay? I'd read it right away!
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  • From YaoiloverS on March 16, 2005
    Soooo kool! I loved it when Sasuke Naruto and Gaara were making a cake! That was so cute! (in a odd way...) do I detect a hint of jealousy from Sasuke? Or maybe Gaara? Ohhhhhhhh I can't wait to see what will happen next! >O
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  • From ANON - fa1th on March 16, 2005
    Love this fic! Keep up the great work XD
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  • From on March 16, 2005
    OMG! I love it, and Sasuke's jealous!!! The pairing is good, but somehow I think Sasuke and Gaara are seeking Naruto's attention also. The way you said Gaara put his head on Naruto's shoulder was sweet, and I thought it showed that Gaara likes Naruto to. You may want to work on that, because it's going to be a booger later on in the chapters. Anyway good job, update soon, and if you have time check out my stories
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  • From YaoiloverS on March 11, 2005
    This chapter was funny as hell! I love when Haku and Naruto sang in the car, It reminds me of the time my sisters and I did that! It was sooooo funny! I wonder if Sasuke or Gaara likes Naruto too....either way I love the way you made the characters all kool and funny, now I pity Shikamaru!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2005
    I like it. I personally really like Sasuke and Itachi's relationship(the little you've shown us of it) because it seems natural that Sasuke wouldn't be close to anyone-even his brother. And car accident? Am I being blonde and don't remember that from the first chapter or have you not said anything yet? Either way, I really like how this might turn out. Few spelling mistakes and such, but I like your style. It's very easy to understand your writing and what you mean. Hope you do post this weekend, ciao!
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on March 11, 2005
    OMG! Update soon,...very. I can't believe Naruto called him, are they going to go out? I wish and again update really soon plz!!!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on March 11, 2005
    your amazing! I love you forever! this chapter was perfection! thank you for updating! wow! i really like that its neji/naru but now with this chapter i'm really rooting for sasu/naru! gah! so confoozed! but no matter what you choose, i'll still love you cuz your the most amazningest ever! ^_^ gawd i'm so lame...
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  • From ANON - DarkSeductress on March 11, 2005
    Your story is awesome. It's getting me to open up to some characters that I'd never think I'd like to read in a story. I really hope you update soon. You have me hooked. I would love to know the reason behind title. Remember, no matter how weird or out-there you think the explanation may be, as long as it has meaning to you nothing else should matter :).
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  • From ANON - The Evil Spastic Bitch on March 11, 2005
    This has a VERY promising premise, I'm excited to see what you do with it! NejiNaru, even! I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU! There just isn't enough NejiNaru in the world, and I think they have great chemistry. I really like how you have this going, too. So, is Sasuke starting to like Naruto? I really would love to know, because if he is, this is going to get really interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Jiro on March 10, 2005
    Well, firstly with the characterization... personally I felt that outside of Shika and Naruto they all sounded the same. That is, they all had similar speech patterns & whatnot. It was hard to hear any distinction between Neji's internal monologue and Sasuke's, for example. Secondly, I dunno... with Gaara... he's just too damn hard to get a grip on. I CAN'T reconcile a 1st person pov with him, so I'm not gonna make any judgements on that. He's just so... *difficult*. It's hard to read too because I just can't see him so intimately/personally. I've mostly stuck to reading 3rd person pov's of him, but this is a good story so I'll get over it. Anyway, good stuff. Can'w wait to read more & I like where you're going with this. Keep it up!

    P.S. I'm 90% certain that O- is the universal donor.
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