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By : skeyeta
  • From ANON - elusia on August 14, 2005
    omg i luv this! so crack-a-licious xD

    everyones perfect, i luv the roles u gave them all...maybe except for neji...'raven' scared me a bit (not that i didnt enjoy his 'lap dance' or anything hehe *shifty eyes*) besides that though, everyones surprsingly well-kept in character. luv the lil cameo by zabuza in the first chap too. and the person temari fucked...shikamaru right? ;)

    anyways, good job. im not usually into fanfiction but this is so addictive - not only is the plot great (man..gotta love all that crack xD), but its actually very well written too. cant wait to see more pimping itachi and angsty sasuke hehe ;D
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 01, 2005
    Well,I just have to find out more,where are you?I hope you are able soon.This has lots of ways to go and I wanna read the one you chose,its gonna be intence no doubt.Luck.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 16, 2005
    Cries-------------Why haven't you updated?! Oh what a crule world! I need more. What can I say, I'm addicted to this story!
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  • From ANON - Finality on July 16, 2005
    That was very interesting. I liked it a lot. The idea of Neji being a stripper puts a nice image into my head. XD Update soon.

    ~Finality.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 12, 2005
    ( cries out in fustration ) Why haven't you updated?! I'm going to die if I don't read more! (Throughs self into wall) Please update, pretty please with sugar ontop? I really want to know what happens.

    Your waiting fan,

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From ANON - Dragon01 on July 06, 2005
    LOL!!! I love this story you MUST continue!! I never would've thought Sasuke and Gaara have a hidden friendship (a funky hidden friendship *laughs*) I've been looking for more AU fics lately and this one is just GREAT!!!!! I do want more UCHIHACEST(Itachi being a pimp still gets me) Also that part with Sasuke and Naruto (lol) prieceless. To think they were lovers once, AND NARUTO THE DUMPER?!!! O_O Shocker.
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  • From ANON - haruko on July 02, 2005
    as well as the rest, please update/write more!!

    :)

    hehe

    wonderful! smut!

    -haruko

    have a night
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  • From ANON - Haruko on July 02, 2005
    hot. kickin'. awesome. bitchin'. smutty.

    i don't think more words could cover this wonderful story.

    except that this is EXCELENT writing.

    ^_^ have a cookie...and a lemon!

    -haruko!

    have a day :)
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 01, 2005
    WOW. Words fail me for this story. I must say that I was a little apprehensive about reading this story because of the pairing. I have never read a Itachi/Sasuke story before this. My opinion has changed drastically after reading what you have written so far. I LOVE THIS STORY! I hope Itachi and Sasuke get together ****gasps, I'm really reading a story where Naruto is one of the main pairing*** I hope you update this wonderful story soon. If it is not to much trouble, could you possibly send me an e-mail every time you update? I realy LOVE this story!!!

    I give it two thumbs up!!!

    your fan,

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From ANON - Horizont on July 01, 2005
    I might say that I'm voting for some ItaSasu!
    Now on with the review. XD
    I love this fic, a lot, so please update soon!
    I'm not a great fan of Neji, but seeing that he just served other pairings I gues sit is okay. ^_^x
    Keep it up!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 21, 2005
    Seeing Naruto was gonna be in this more and in Sasukes' face again was a real surprise.Sasuke must rebel from screaming boredom is the picture I am getting.This had a very different feel from the first chapter.I think I am Sadder than Sasuke that his parents came home.I do not know what else to say.I am taken aback.It is more than great to see you back in action.Thank you so much for updating.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on June 20, 2005
    nice! You updated! great chapter! I loved the friend ship between Gaara, Sasuke, and Temari! It was too funny! But... Naruto seems really bitchy! Is that just a misinterperatation on my part? Or is it Sasuke misinterperating the situation in the story? I hope you get the chance to update soon. I really am enjoying reading your fic!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 20, 2005
    Is there anything I can physically do to help you to help you with this and your other fics?I am very serious.My email is ryannesse@hotmail.com I have no yahoo/aim account going but I can get one going toute suite! I have a lj account I only started to leave reveiws ect. but I will put more info in my profile and figure out how to use the darn thing.I need a place to try out my fragmented fics anyway.Hope you are OK . Please be OK.
    blisblop
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 12, 2005
    I hope everything is alright with the author.This is such a well written story and I am mad with a desire to read the next chapter.I love the interplay between Itachi and Sasuke.Itachi seems so smooth and together except for his reactions to his little brother and they come across as more a force of nature,genetic more than any sort of sickness or automatic power play(do not know if Naruto would agree with that,I am thinking he did not break up with Sasuke on his own volition) and Sasuke doesn't seem grossed out by Itachi more insulted that he looks less then able around him,he repects Itachi's temper but isn't terrified of him,is not submissive and he seems to feel safe and trust him in spite of Itachi's possesiveness or perhaps because of it(?) he knows Itachi holds him in very high regard and doesn't seem too perturbed over "octopuss chans' " stylings or he would not drink around him or care if he looked bad or keep his secrets.What was most intreaging was when he blushed when Itachi claimed him as "his" whore( also he seemed to take Neji as one of Itachi's gifts..?.) He was moved when Itachi affirmed his driving abilities in the car ,he wants to measure up in Itachi's eyes and there was not even a hint of repulse -tion between them,he felt Itachi's hard on in the parking lot and payed it no heed,wanted Itachi not mad at him, he stayed in his arms, he trusted him with his defenceless body going to sleep.After all this we know Itachi said Sasuke would be "ready" for Itachi's ways by the end of the night so... you set up the tention most beautifully!The waiting is killing me but as long as you are continueing I feel the wait is worth it.The Neji blowjob was so well written I could see it.Thank You so much for that and this tale heh heh.I hope you are OK! I shall lay out some tobacco for you (native tradition) to ease any woes you might encounter,yeah.
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  • From ANON - update u evil person on May 25, 2005
    update evil author UPDATE
    i want to know what happens
    this is the best AU itachi/sasuke fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
    god damn you update...or evil things shall happen...you shall find spiders in ur food..insects in your bed..a gross smell in ur car....and more...^_^ soUPDATE
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