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Reviews for Of Heaven and Hell

By : harukakatana

From on September 05, 2008
What the heck! This story is amazing, so far. O_o It's very.......Unique, with how it's developing so far. :X You plan to every continue it?
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From oohshiny on November 19, 2007
DUUUUUUDE YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN WHAT, 2, 3 YRS??? UPDATE!!!! EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE!!! MY EMAIL IS DEANNATHX@COMCAST.NET WHEN YOU UPDATE!!
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From venia on July 28, 2007
argh, I thought it was sasuke who killed Orochimaru XD
Anyways, very nice story! I can't help but adore naruto and sasuke and their attraction that came out of nowhere XDXD (and naruto being pervert when he's supposed to behave like an angel) But you left him alone now ;_; i hope in next chapters things will be fixed. Also nice descriptions and the character's addapting to heaven and hell has been interesting and succesful.
^_~ keep up the good work and update soon!!
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From ANON - elict on March 14, 2006
Wow... I mean, really wow. Your story is simply amazing,
it's great...! i've never seen anything like it before, the
plot, the settings, it's all completely new, and so unique...
i't very well-done, how you managed to keep the different
realtions between the original-characters, and yet keep
the story so different.

...i bow for you, and i lift my hat (or at least i would if i
used a hat ^^), thanking you for this super-good story,
humbly asking for more of your strange, and delicate
poison... :D

hugs /elict
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From ANON - TwlightDreamz on February 04, 2006
...You know the only type of person that can write such a damn good story.... is one tha can relate to it....so I have come to the conclusion that you are the apitimy of evilness... And within this insinustion, is a damn question; How the bloody hell can you leave us hang for so long?????!!!!! jeez, I've honestly never read a story that put me on the edge so much. I'm in love with this story, it's veryveryvery ORIGINAL!!!! And your a damn good author by the way. I feel so smart, I figured out who the devil and second in command was before I finished reading the first paragraph in the pov switch... but then again it dosen't really take a genoius to figure that out...-_-; can you please put more SasuNaru in the next chapter? whats going on with thoes two and their scars? Whats up with Naruto's earings and his lack of memory? can you at least drop us a few hint's in the next chapter, even if it is only to one of these questions? OOHH my dear god Itachi's gona be so pissin mad when he finds out that Sasu kun fell in love with Naru chan ..hhmmm I guess the real question here though, is can you update soon, please? It's okay if you don't though...I hope your feeling alright and that everything is as it should be in your life...(not askin for details thats really none of my busness..just expressing some genuine concern) when you feel upto it you can post up another chapter, but seriously I'm begging you please don't drop this story, I really dont care if it takes you ten years to finish this story take all the time you want but maybe a little something here and there every few months will satate your reviiewers thurst for more...lol( That includes your other story) anyway I've bugged you enough time for me to go...pouts...oh well..sigh... If you've got writer's block, don't be a stranger...I'll be more than happy to try to jog your creativity juices flowin, if you want, Ja Ne till the next chapter
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From ANON - TwlightDreams on December 20, 2005
Wow, im falling in love with this fic....scratch that I am in love with this fic ^_^ anyway when you update do you think that you could gimie a quick e-mail? If it's not to much trouble that is.. If not it's okay I'll just keep an eye out for it!...I'm sorry this review suck's but it's three'oclock in the morning making it tuesday(oh joy -_-) But I promise tomorrow I will give you a propper review...umm I mean later on today (right?)...ack.. I confuse myslf I'm not the brighest of people...how sad. Ja Ne for now but...I will be backO_o
(now would be a good time to run and hide from this phycopathic, SasuNaru obsesive fan)
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From ANON - stas on July 27, 2005
oh man.. I was thinking i could click onto the next chap when i reach the bottom of the page
but no!!! Ya story was damn fantastic and the idea was really great !!!!!!! It's really really original
and i have never read any stories along the lines of yours.. I was really all perked up and curious abt
how naruto and sasuke died and how each of their supposedly earings end up the wrong side... and
ya haven update for ages so not sure if ya are ever going to put up a new one.. but anyway the
story was great~! i hope ya are reading this and know how much i will love to read a new chap..

=) Stas

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From ANON - Leasan on July 06, 2005
Well, what an interesting fic!
I was a bit sceptical about the devil/angel idea but woha!!! it turns out to be simply irresistible!
I have my suspitions about the scars that Naruto and sasuke have but I know you won't tell anything, so I'll patiently wait for the revelation :)
...But it's about theirs past lives, isn't it?...( I wouldn't be myself if I didn't try, heh:)
Anyway, I love your story so far, and Naruto is just a natura born angel, sooo sweet!
I love the idea of beings torn between two contradicting fates, it makes them so very human.
After all none of us is purly good or evil, right?
Great fic, I hope you'll update really soon!
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From ANON - nacht kind on July 05, 2005
Thrilling, spell-binding, witty, and depraved... every syllable oozed with a strange mixture of charm, humor, and sexual tension. The suspense worked, by the way. I think the best part, just might be Naruto and Sasuke's byplay. The dialogue is to die for!!! Anxiously awaiting the next installment.

p.s. Who wouldn't be obsessed with Sasuke's ass? Honestly
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From ANON - LizD Kai on May 19, 2005
I'd hate to ruin the whole 69 review things, *nudge* eh? (laugh) but anyhow, I feel I need to comment on the stories I believe to be really great. Which leads me to my point, this fic was fantastic... scratch that, IS fantastic! I can't wait for another update. I agree with what some of the other reviewers said, lemoness is goodness but don't rush the plot. I don't think you intend to but I'm here to back you up anyway!

One of the main reasons your fic stands out more than the others is because you're a GOOD Writer! You've saved me from another few-month fic hiatus because I'll slap my forehead and say "where have all the good authors gone?" Well, to AFF.net apparently. (I love this site.) Excellent imagery, minor errors, and thank god there weren't any "WTF is going on" random thihngs thrown into the plot.

Anyhow, I just wanted to express to you how much I've enjoyed it and would keep loving it if you updateeddddd! ~ Keep up the excellent work, SasuNaru is my favorite no matter what they say! :D

~LizD Kai
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From ANON - Yami-Hikari on May 07, 2005
I love it I love it I love it!!!
I love it so much I had to do a fanart, The imagery in your story is just so amazing.
Here's the fanart!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18069610/
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From ANON - AmuseMe on May 02, 2005
yar I've been waiting for so long for this chapter. What can I say, I love it. I loved how you gave each character that "hint" that they've got an interesting past and Itachi... *dies* he was so sexy. Actually speaking about him, I don't care what other people say - you should have had Itachi have his way with Sasuke *drools some more* and have his way with Naruto *grabs the drool bucket*

Seriously, your style of writing is wonderful as always. I have no idea where you manage to draw all this discriptive genius from. I highly enjoyed the description of Itachi's walk towards Orochimaru's chambers, such nice imagery.

*sniggers at the thought of Sasuke and high-heels*
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From ANON - lalala on May 01, 2005
argh! If it was Itachi, then who was the "he" in their conversation.
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From ANON - chem chick on April 28, 2005
Wow! This is really great. Really original, and I love the attention to detail and the way you describe everything! Kudos to you! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - Rowan on April 28, 2005
Wonderful story, i loved everything that you've written so far. If you can please E-mail me when the next chapter is up, i cant wait! I can't help but think "are sasuke and naruto going to be back together again?" ..is this going to be a happy ending?, or a sad one >>;; anyways, i somehow knew it was gunna be Orochimaru or Itachi as the devil, i just knew it!
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