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Reviews for Of Heaven and Hell

By : harukakatana
  • From ANON - Yugiko on March 03, 2005
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
    PLEASE!!!!!!
    >.
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  • From ANON - Sukara on February 28, 2005
    Waiii1 Keep up teh good job, ne?! ^_^


    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Rie on February 26, 2005
    Oh you had better update this. This was really good and I was wishing that it was more than one chaper so far.

    Please update very soon

    Luv Rie
    xx
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  • From ANON - darkangel on February 26, 2005
    wow.......dat was good. lol. sexy sasuke!!!!! i like it.
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  • From ANON - demonesse on February 26, 2005
    i like! great first chapter.. enough to whet the appetitie and leave me longing for more!

    totally wanna find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - phoenixdown7 on February 26, 2005
    that was simply gorgeous storytelling in every way. The incorporation of your special knowledge into the workings of heaven, made the story especially deep and inviting. I was entranced by Naruto and his fall through the skies, and by his thoughts pertaining to the other angels. Everyone was strangely in character, and when they weren't, it was excusable because their situation provided for the character change. I love how this story has begun and I can only wait impatiently for the next installment. I'm glad you've written this fic...it's simply amazing. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aurum on February 26, 2005
    Shame on me for almost never looking at the author before reading the fic... Though this time was some kind of exception, I guess, and when I saw your name I was like "Ohoho, this will be something good!". And I'm totally not disappointed. ^^ Delighted actually... Ah, sorry I can't say anything constructive, but that's me and my reviews... ._. I just hope I'll get to read more soon [is it just me or is it really like a drug?]. =)
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  • From ANON - Tsugath on February 26, 2005
    I don't think it's a wierd beginning, I love it. Totally new and different so far, which the Naruto fanfic fandom I'm afraid often needs lately. Can't wait to see what the updates like.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 25, 2005
    Reading the summery I was a little wary, but as I began to read the stroy I found my self very impressed in you aproach. And your writing flows very well. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - GW on February 25, 2005
    Wow! What a great plot-line!!
    I love the way Naruto was entranced...! That was so cool!!!! But I still hate Sasuke *glares at him*
    It's interesting though..I wonder if Sasuke "tripped on his long black coat" on purpose because he's protecting the waitress...I wonder if the waitress is Sakura... Hmmm whoever it is, great plot line. Please don't take too long in updating. Such great stories should be done quicker ;)
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  • From ANON - kayoko on February 25, 2005
    I liked the intro, especially the scene where Naruto jumped off the ledge and spread his wings. It was a simple and beautiful imagery.

    The idea of having Naruto try and piece his past life (if it could be called that) is very intriging, very different. I love the glimsps of his past that we see, especially the chained down Naruto who was probably with Sasuke. I thought the part where the mysterious person said "I love you." was really bitter-sweet.

    *laughs at the sentence* "Girls would be girls regardless of their state of existence."

    Gawd, you're such a good author, hinting at certain things, but never directly tell the reader. It was like "So. Lucifer had chosen a second in command."...and that just screamed..."SASUKE!" to me. *laughs*

    It surprised me that the angels just talked about Lucifer and The Desk without any code words. What if other people heard their conversation? (judging from the waitress thingy, they already have?)

    I thought it was rather funny that Chouji was the one that spoke up when Sasuke and Naruto were "stuck like tar". It felt more like a Shikamaru thing, maybe he had been hanging around Shikamaru too much.

    "I slipped on my coat?" Righhhhhhhht, sasuke..we know you just wanted to see Naru-chan up close and personal *purrs*

    Overall, I really liked this chapter. It eluded to a lot of things and certain hints were thrown in to confirm my suspicions. I think this is way to really grab a reader's attention and hold on to it (cause now i want to know all about Naruto's past). I wasn't a big fan of the intro notes in the beginning. Personally, I would have preferred them at the end of the chapter. I guess that's just a personal preference because if you asked me, it didn't really help me gain a further understanding of the different positions of angels. The explainations embedded in the story did a sufficient job, if you ask me.

    There was a little excessive imagery description describing Naruto in the beginning of the chapter, but it wasn't that bad (just something I felt). Once again, that might be a personal preference so don't take the comment to heart.

    Anyways, thank you for writing such an interesting piece. I think it'll do very well!

    kayoko
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  • From ANON - WaterBookLover on February 25, 2005
    Wow! This sounds so cool! I really like your first chappie! Let me guess, Satan is either Itachi or Gaara (red hair, ne?), and Sasuke is the second in command? Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see.... Please don't make me wait too long! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Koo-chan on February 25, 2005
    I love it love it love it love!! I've been waiting awhile to finally read this since you were talking about it in IRC, but my goodness, it's even better than I imagined! The experience of flying was perfect and totally understandable, and I love all the small details about Naruto that you created for his angelic character. His past sounds like something really interesting, and I can't wait to see more of it revealed. And Sasuke in a trench coat *drools* you just know how to pick them right don't you? lol I really look forward to reading more of this, and if the next chapters are anywhere near as good as this first one, you've got yourself a one-way ticket for getting recc'd to Collide quite quickly. Good luck with the writing! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Fifi on February 25, 2005
    I love it so much it hurts. :O *lovelovelove* write more.
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  • From mehmeh on February 25, 2005
    woot, look my promised review! *grins and waves* hola, tis AmuseMe from IRC.

    Well I would have reviewed anyways. What astounds me is your writing style... you make it so descriptive, so indepth and it flows so beautifully! I'm so jealous *pout*
    I'm eager to find out more abt the plot because you gave this nice mysterious background to Naruto, his death and the earrings. Of course, there's always Sasuke that sexy bastard and I'm eager for their proper meeting together. And then the whole Lucifer business in the background. Love the symbolism! *squees* really well thought out!

    Well... you'll update soon right? Or should I deprive you of those X episodes :P
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