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Reviews for Of Heaven and Hell

By : harukakatana
  • From ANON - KuraiKage on April 27, 2005
    Nope, this chapter didn't lose my interest :D

    I keep finding myself getting more and more attached to the way you write. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, ne?
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  • From ANON - ochiba on April 27, 2005
    Beautiful. Your description of hell (esp. the carpet of snakes) was wonderful. I seriously hope this is the scratchwork and prelude to original fiction from you, as with a bit of refining, you'll be quite a delight in paperpack. Until that time comes... I think I'll be quite happy following your fanfiction.

    I only have one request: please finish this amazing story (long fics usually are never finished ^_^;;)
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  • From ANON - kayoko on April 26, 2005
    this chapter was really good.

    glad you added the little explanation at the end, it really helped with things.

    don't really have much to say, sorry. but thank you for writing and i look forward to the next part when it is ready ^_^
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on April 26, 2005
    Wow i'm slow....just got through chapter two...anyway...

    "If demons had been able to transform into red, rubber spheres, Naruto would have known where the demon lay."

    This is a really great line! Haha! It made me smile!

    "He wondered if Adam and Eve had undergone the same feeling and thoughts in the Garden of Eden. But Sasuke was no snake. Just a demon."

    I'd say that everything else in this fic was absolutely worth it just to get the opportunity to see that sentance...or three...whatever... oh yeah...and everything that followed it of course..*grin*

    As far as i've read, this story is awesome! It was a little slow at the begining, but it's getting better and better at a frenzied pace! Yay! I'm kinda glad i waited a while to read it, because now i get to read a whole other chapter before i have to be like "WTF?" and wait again for you to update.

    I wonder what will happen in next??? d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - Yami-Hikari on April 26, 2005
    I was halfway throught the second chapter, and the amazing imagry got to me. I'm already working on a fanart of this.
    The imagry you put into your writing amazes me, I can see every little detail as if I was there. It's like being transported to that world. Amazing is the only word I can come up with to describe this ...amazing.. work.
    And you're saying *sorry* for the long chapters?! They're one of the best aspects of this stroy. I love the long chapters!!!
    I shiver everytime I realise that I very nearly didn't look at this story becasue I don't usually go for AU Naruto stories. This story has opened up a whole new world of fics. I think I've gotta go see if you've done any other stroies. I'll cry if you haven't.
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  • From ANON - Pantaloon on April 26, 2005
    I like it! Very interesting plot. I thought it had been Itachi while reading, only because the way you had intially portayed Sasuke had been /much/ different. The only thing I'm really hoping for is that the pairing will turn out to be a NaruSasu/SasuNaru, instead of just strictly SasuNaru. But either way, I'm glad you updated, and you have beautiful writing.
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  • From ANON - WolfPilot06 on April 26, 2005
    I'll admit I was a little confused by the interlude with Kiniiri overthrowing Orochimaru, but I think you were deliberately going for a bit of deception, eh? Anyways, another beautiful chapter. Your descriptions are quite beautiful and eloquent (I, uh, actually forgot I reviewed your fic before. I'm a spastic reviewer at best, lazy to say the least), and I love your characterizations. I'm quite intrigued by your heaven/hell universe and can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. Again, the prerequisite plea for you to continue (although, doubtless, whether you will or won't is wholly up to you and is not affected in the least by my urges for you to do so). =)

    **Wolf**
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  • From ANON - WolfPilot06 on April 17, 2005
    Wow, I was poking around the site looking for good fiction, and boy, did I ever find good fiction. This is really - well, how can I describe this best? - it's really pretty! Beautifully written, with gorgeous descriptions and interesting characterizations. Please continue sometime soon! =)

    **Wolf**
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  • From ANON - kitsune on April 08, 2005
    ..........where's Sasuke? HE CAN'T JUST LEAVE!!!! DIDN'T THEY COME TO AN AGREEMENT ALREADY?! MAKE HIM COME BACK YOU EVIL, EVIL AUTHOR!! ...oh, and did I mention that I really like your story? Anyway, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Riyo-sama on April 08, 2005
    This is very well written, and I look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter. This is the first time I've reviewed on this site. I have my account on fanfiction.net.
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  • From ANON - laintrigger01 on April 05, 2005
    hey! haha, did you know that there's a sasunaru, narusasu pic somewhere entitled The marriage of heaven and hell? haha, just a passing comment, completely unrelated to the fic itself. Well, goodluck with the fic! Ja!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on April 05, 2005
    This is a great story. I'm glad that we got a glimpse of Sasuke in this chapter, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to him.

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Kusachu on April 05, 2005
    WOw! O-O this is beautiful! Nice job! I love the mental picture you give of Naruto! He really does seem angelic d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 05, 2005
    Funny,its Sasuke who sounds divine.
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  • From ANON - WaterBookLover on April 04, 2005
    Wah! Another chappie! Yeah! Please write more quickly! I really love this story!
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