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Reviews for Homecoming

By : myth
  • From on June 26, 2009
    I sooooo love that story!! Please update soon! *many hugs*
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  • From sonicphotonic on June 25, 2009
    An excellent read, can't wait until you post more!~
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2009
    What!??!?!?! Sasuke doesn't want Naruto??!??!
    D:
    Can you please please please post more!!!
    I'm not going to be able to sleep with that kind ending!!!
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  • From GypsyReaper on June 24, 2009
    This is a absolutly amazing story i really love it. I am a devoted fanfiction reader an although i cannot write fanfiction (sad face) i love to read anything an everything so id like to say that i am really enjoying your story it makes up for every low quality or just plain bad one that i come across i implore you to keep writing and updating this story and would be pleased to read other stories that you care to right

    Thankfully,
    silverdragon0315(this is my friends screenname
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  • From tawanawelch on June 24, 2009
    Oh im so glad Kenji found out about team 7 and saw the pictures. Sasuke's right about having 2 reasons to exist. Im so happy to hear that he actually loves his sons and how they are so very different from one another. Cant wait for more!! X3
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  • From tawanawelch on June 23, 2009
    Ooooh so many good things happened in this chapter. This was a fun chapter. I loved how Naruto taught them about chakra control to walk up the wall to finish the job quicker. Kenji is just like Naruto i like that. He can especially understand what Kenji is going through with his brother and father. I also loved how Naruto handled Ryoichi's prider and his mean comments. I cant wait for the kids to find out how their parents grew up with Naruto.:D I especially loved the confrontation between Naruto and Sasuke. Sasuke's a bit delusional thinking his kids r ready for C ranked missions. He really ought to stalked the team to see how atrocious his pride and joy act with Naruto. Then he could kinda set him straight but it may not be the right time.:( Great chapter!! Cant wait for the next!! X3
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  • From tawanawelch on June 23, 2009
    OMG!! How awful!!! >.< Sasuke's jealous rage sent Naruto's only other beloved to her death.T__T Now Neji and im sure the rest of the Hyuga clan hold Naruto responsible.T__T
    If only Sasuke had sent her on a wild goose chase around the city or something. Damn it!!! He is a love scorned wreck.:( I wonder if he'll tell the Hyuga the truth or is that insignificant for the story. Oh well, this chapter was thrilling with the battle. o.o
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  • From tawanawelch on June 23, 2009
    OMG!!! I have to admit i like when someone wants me also but cant have me. hehe I feel so bad for Sasuke but like Naruto said u cant it both ways. I like that he and Hinata are together. I especially liked when Sasuke confronted Naruto on the mission and then turned 360 degrees back to business. Wow!! X3
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 23, 2009
    I really enjoyed reading this story so far and it would be a shame not to review it. I know there are a lot of Sasuke returning after forever/Naruto returning after forever fics out there but you definetly make this one special. I love how you have Sasuke's twins being like the former him and former Naruto. It was really cute their fights and how Naruto quickly sees his former team in his new team.

    I wish that Naruto can run into more of his friends. Though I guess Neji wouldn't want to talk to him much. But there is still Rock Lee and Kiba. I'm pretty sure they would be more than willing to see Naruto. And I can't until the others finally get a real mission. Maybe one of the team members can get kidnapped like Kenji or something and they have to go same him. Which might actually make his brother be willing to save him for once instead of killing him.

    But whatever you do will sure be great. E-mail me when you do update again... My e-mail is 'simplywandering@yahoo.com' Thanks.
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  • From tawanawelch on June 22, 2009
    Now we see why Naruto is so angry with Sasuke. Wow! That was a hard thing to do just walk away from Naruto like that. o.o
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  • From tawanawelch on June 22, 2009
    im so glad Sasuke still wants Naruto but it seems Naruto isnt ready to commit just yet.:(
    im also glad Kenji is getting training in with Kakashi.:D

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  • From arabuzumaki on June 22, 2009
    is there a reason that naru is avoiding konohamaru? i just get that feeling.
    and sasu's boys seem so much like naru and sasu lol.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 22, 2009
    Man I love it when you update!!! Great chapter!
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  • From tawanawelch on June 22, 2009
    Ahhh, I'm so glad Kenji thinks Naruto is cool and that he is excited about Naruto teaching him. I didnt expect that. He kinda reminds me of Naruto being excited about Kakashi potentially training him. Kenji is so eager if not for the motivation his brother indirectly gives him lol. I cant wait for the convo of Sasuke and Naruto.
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  • From tawanawelch on June 22, 2009
    I loved their important lesson on working together and how also they saw and understood the importance of their D-ranked mission. I cant wait to see how the relationship develops between the students and Naruto as they progress. I especially cant wait for the same between Naruto and Kenji.:D The flashbacks r great in how detailed they r about the way they used to be together. I especially loved Sasuke's explanation of why he is with Naruto and why he loves him.:D
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