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By : sumarfishy

From ANON - bara, bara-aoi on April 26, 2005
OMG Im loving this story so far, the whole smut scene was great, though i was a little disappointed Kiba inturupted Naruto's chance to be seme, and I am a little confused about the whole Kakashi and Kurenai (i'm a kaka/iruka fan myself, but i'm not opposed to alternet pairings) thing it just seems a little misplaced, *shrugs* perhaps its tied in better in the next chapter, and i also get this feeling that Kakashi and Sasuke had something *shrugs* future chapters shall tell, right ^__^

please continue as soon as humanly possible!!!
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From ANON - akuma_river on April 25, 2005
*Bows down* "I AM NOT WORTH!!! I AM NOT WORTH!! I AM NOT WORTHY!! I AM NOT WORTHY!!!
That is how I feel after reading this. That was unbelievable. Keep up the awesome work. COOLSA!!!!

Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy!!!
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From ANON - hogo-chan on April 23, 2005
that was amazing! You are totally forgiven for taking so long! I love your story so much! It's the greatest ever! Thank you for updating, I was so afriad you had discontinued it! This chapter was so awesome! Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - OMG! on April 23, 2005
YEAH! SASUKE FUCKED NARUTO! xDDD
(sorry for my use of language^^U)
BUT MAN THAT WAS GOOD xDDDD

OMG! KIBA FOUND OUT! IS HE GONG TO YELL IT TO THE ENTIRE WORLD AS WE EXPECT IT OF KIBA?
IS HE GOING TO TELL SAKURA! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....WEL IT'S YOUR CHOISE xD

I LOVE YOUR FIC!!! PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!!! NOW >O> XD

AND WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT LAST SCENE ABOUT? WITH KAKAKSHI, ASUME AND KURENAI? OO? HHMMM I WONDER...
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From ANON - mE on April 23, 2005
I hope that this is going to be all SasuNaru 'cause iI love that (Naruto is the uke all way through). It's so great..Naruto is so sure he can have it the other way around, but Sasuke's not gonna have it. It's just ment to be that way!!
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From ANON - mE on April 23, 2005

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From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2005

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From ANON - mE on April 23, 2005
I hope that this is going to be all SasuNaru 'cause iI love that (Naruto is the uke all way through). It's so great..Naruto is so sure he can have it the other way around, but Sasuke's not gonna have it. It's just ment to be that way!!
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From ANON - mE on April 23, 2005
I hope that this is going to be all SasuNaru 'cause iI love that (Naruto is the uke all way through). It's so great..Naruto is so sure he can have it the other way around, but Sasuke's not gonna have it. It's just ment to be that way!!
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From ANON - Puchu on April 23, 2005
myaaah~! I love this fic! please continue, nee? nee? *runs to the ofuro* yes, I'm very proud of the fact that I'm currently staying in Japan. ^___^

VERY curious about the way this'll go
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From ANON - ochiba on April 23, 2005
*There, Ochiba-sama: they fucked, happy now? :P*

::bounces around you:: Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy! Happy Happy Joy Joy Happy Happy Joy Joy! Come on, gals, sing along! Happy Happy Joy Joy...! You're damned right I'm happy. And it's about bloody time, you evil fic writer you! You had me thinking this was never gonna be finished (T______T) But now that three is out I forgive you and love you and want to bear a bunch of gay ninja babies with you... so umm... where's chapter four?! *wolfish grin*
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From ANON - Nina on April 23, 2005
I like the story so far!!^^ update soon!
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From ANON - jazzy on April 23, 2005
Memory Yeilds, it's sooo good! more please, and now with plot, I think there's a plot brewing in here somewhere. Reaally very awsome and Hot, really Hot.

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From ANON - Biokinetic on April 23, 2005
YES!!!YOU UPDATED!!YESYESYES!!*glomps and huggles and..takes breath and steps back, letting you have your personal space*
THANKYOU!!!THANKYOU SO MUCH!
*kicks the shit out of Sakura* I hated her so much! That chapter made me so upset I almost had the resolve not to read anymore..but this story is just too good. This chapter..omg. You did a wonderful job writing the smutness. I love it..and strangely I've been put in that situation too. -shifty eyes-.
Anywaaayyysss.. I hope you don't make Naruto seme, lol, its different and new, yes, but ...all the fics I've read where Naruto is seme...I dunno..the story just seems to focus waaayyy too much on Sasuke all the sudden, and the story just doesn't seem RIGHT anymore. Though I do love how Naruto suddenly took control and Sasuke went right along with it. I just hope there's no Naruto inside Sasuke penetration.^_^;;
I also loved the part where Kiba walked in on them, that was hillarious!! I love Kiba in this story, especially how he helped out Naruto earlier with his 'date' (kills Sakura all over again). I hope Kibakun isn't homophobic..plllleaaasee don't make him homophobic. O_O*idea drifts into brain* C-could...you..m-maybe...d-do...kibasasunaru THREESOME!!-dies drooling- ok..I know you probably won't, but..oh god..hawt..hawthawt.-drool-
Or maybe..Kiba likes Naruto too..and there's some mutual love goin' on there..and eventually a lemon scene..but Sasuke consents to it because maybe he's a closet perverts and wants to watch his Naruto make love with someone else?!
Yeah..ok..Im sorry, Im just really into your story and your such a great writer and Im just letting my fantasies take hold because I know you would make the story so wonderful.
Anyways, if I haven't scared you off by now, could you maybe, perhaps, please email me with any agreements on my suggestions or just little clues to what you're going to put in the next chapter? -puppy dog eyes of doom-
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From ANON - Ezj on April 23, 2005
You get no complaints from me ^_^
An abrupt change in the end there but
it's probably going to be explained in
the next chapter ^_^ must have
something to look forward on.
Great chappie and the smut were
good to =^_^= *tissue in nose*

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