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Reviews for My Little Matchmaker

By : OssiaChan
  • From ANON - Alie on February 10, 2005
    this story rocks! I absolutely love it ^^ I'm dying to know what happens to our main characters... I sense they're close to something fun... please please continue this excellent story!! Your writing is fun to read although sometimes the spacing makes it hard to go through large chunks of dialogue all at once. But that's really not very important, is it? ^^
    Anyway, loooove the story, can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - macy on February 10, 2005
    hehe interesting start (i've only read the first chapter ^^). It was witty, and fun to read. Just one comment though, if Sakura's 22 then that means Sasuke's 22 also right? I thought Itachi was only a few years older than Sasuke, like 4-5 years. If Shina's 14, then that meant Itachi had a kid when he was only 12 or something? Wouldn't that be before he actually murdered his whole clan? The numbers just don't seem to add up ^^;;; Oh well...I'll go read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 10, 2005
    (Ch. 1-3) A little too random, and slightly beating around the bush.
    You need to add a glossary when ever using any added romanji-ed Japanese; suffix, words, sentences, etc.
    Antoher thing; you tend to add a lot of question marks in places that do not require one. It cuts the flow of the story, and that is NOT a good thing. Also, try and create more spaces between paragrhaps; it strains the eyes, seeing it all jumbled up as it is.
    Also, go over the story before posting it, please. You tend to have confused words, switched letters. (i.e. 'for' written 'fro'.)Which also gets in the way of the "flow" of the story.

    Besides all my previous comments, I like the idea and hope to see you improuve in later chapters.
    Oh, and the Nirvana refrence ["Just because you’re paranoid, doesn’t mean they’re not out to get you"] had me giggling. Though you might want to add a disclaimer to that. And to the story in overall. It's illegal to write a fanfiction without a disclaimer. Seriosuly.

    Anyway, until the next time you update,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - EMINA on February 10, 2005
    omg...
    This is DEFFINETLY one of the BEST SasuNaru stories I've read in awhile!
    Its halariously funny, its nicely written, details and everything, and everyones' in character!!
    What more could a fangirl like me want?!?!
    Well... I DO want something else, but I'm pretty sure you'll take care of it eventually ^^ (some SasuNaru loving!XD)
    I had SO much fun reading this...
    I was constantly laughing my ass off at Shina's antics. I love her ^^ She seems alittle like me...
    Man~,If I had a uncle like Sasuke and a friend like Naruto and they seemingly liked each other, hell yeah, I'll become a certified match-maker! XD

    I REALLY love this ides, you have my props!

    Keep up the awesomely good work ^_~*

    -(Emina)
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  • From ANON - Ezj on February 10, 2005
    Yepp this is definitly going to be fun.
    It's so funny^^
    Absolutely Shina's and NAruto's last talk... =^_^=
    YAY more of this funny good story^^
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on February 10, 2005
    LMAO. Awesome. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 09, 2005
    So you did put it up!! Yeah!! Shina's such a great character! Have you finished the other one yet?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2005

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  • From ANON - koolanimefreek on February 09, 2005
    who would have thought that Itachi would have a kid as wonderful and mischevious as shina????? i find it soo amusing when sakura mentioned that shina is like a combination of naruto and sasuke hehehe.... anyways the idea of giant ants and termites invading the uchiha mansion is so fun knowing that sasuke is so neat and for him is kinda difficult to actually believe such a blatant lie... so sasu-chan actually has feelings for the dobe, but how does naru feel??? hehehe is gonna be so much fun to read the next chappies!!! please update soon!!! this story is great!!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Ezj on February 09, 2005
    Great^^
    A good beginning.
    The only thing was that it's a little to few spaces in the text.
    Makes it a little hard to read. ^_^
    But I'm waiting for an continue
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on February 09, 2005
    I really like Shina as she solves the problem of the reviving the clan part and someone else is more mischievious than Naruto. I hope you continue with your story. I think Sasuke still needs a little more darkness cuz it gives him that sexy air, don't ya think? He can't be totally happy now can he? Great Job for a first fan fiction.
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