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Reviews for Wilting Blossoms

By : Tremalkinger
  • From ANON - animevivverz on February 20, 2005
    oh that was amazing.
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  • From ANON - Silverwing on February 19, 2005
    I really liked it, it's pretty well written and this couple SO needs more love. (Not as much as Itachi/Sakura fics need but love but still) I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good work dude! Write on!
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  • From ANON - tsuakshi on February 17, 2005
    Heya! Liked the new chapter, I look forward to more, and also 'nudge nudge' the hotel stay. hehe.
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  • From ANON - animevivverz on February 13, 2005
    ooh, well that makes sense. =] Can't wait to read all of the chapter.
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on February 12, 2005
    heya! ty! honestly I was a bit of an airhead last night, cuz I wasn't feeling well, but I do try to offer something helpful in each of my reviews, although the gushing reviews are cool too, I like the ones that say, "I really like your story, you might want to try this to improve." So I try to do that for other writers too. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapter, thanks for taking the time out to respond!
    huggles!
    Tsukashi
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on February 12, 2005
    I really like what you have here. I do like the fact that Sasuke is opening up to Sakura, but I am thinking that Sasuke gave in just a little too easily to Sakura's kiss, you could have drug that scene out a bit more, and made him pull away, to dwell on it for awhile, maybe think about how nice it was, albiet shocking, and give in to it in a later chapter. Really play on both character's doubts and thoughts etc and draw out the readers emotions on this. (Do not think I am complaining, I am just offering suggestions. You can take what you like, and leave what you don't.)

    You have done an excellent job of keeping Naruto in character, and I can't wait to see the fight that will happen between him and Sasuke. I am not feeling well today, so didn't really pay attention to grammar and such, I was being a bad girl, and only read for the enjoyment factor. (you have permission to whip me with a soggy ramen noodle) So I can't really comment on that for you. Geez, I can't even remember if I saw any spelling errors or anything, well, I suppose that could be a good thing, ne? hehe. Ok, well I will watch for further updates, and I agree with you on the age thing, if I feel that the characters are acting older than they should, I just mentally tack on a few years.
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  • From ANON - animevivverz on February 11, 2005
    nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - animevivverz on February 08, 2005
    Short chapter, but it was nice. Yeah...I didn't think Sasuke would actaully stab Naruto's face (in the picture) with a kunai..I would have thought it'd be Sakura. =] Continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on February 08, 2005
    Ooooo interesting...I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From animevivverz on February 07, 2005
    very nice ending
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  • From ANON - Emina on February 05, 2005
    *looks around quickly*

    *whispers*
    I can't be here, I'm supposed to be *strictly* SasuNaru nothing else....but somehow your fanfic caught my attention and drew me in.

    I liked it ^^.... but you didn't hear that from me...


    Even though, I highly disagree with SasuSaku, this fic was cute... filled with emotions and decently written ^^

    Keep up the good work ^_^

    -Emina

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  • From ANON - Chelsey on February 02, 2005
    Once again I like it! Keep it up, good start.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on February 01, 2005
    NICE! Update soon!
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