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Reviews for My Darling Naruto, My Sweet Kyuubi

By : Iku
  • From ANON - The Gandhara on February 02, 2005
    Very funny story. You're making a very cute plot. I liked chapter 3 a lot, and I liked how you made Hinata sound so professional in chapter 2. I just wish they were a bit older, because the idea of 12-years-old in NC-17 rated situations is a bit excessive. A question, what do DP and Gen mean?
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  • From ANON - Dementa on February 01, 2005
    Finally! More Naruto/Hinata! I can't wait for the actual third chapter! This story is very well written and believable. Please, do update soon.
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  • From ANON - narutofan on February 01, 2005
    not sure if you care about accuracy, but if you do-some things you might want to fix are- genjutsu is illusionary techniques, while ninjutsu is everything else that uses up chakra. Also, it's "kage bunshin no jutsu" not "kage no bunshin". Sorry, I know I'm a nag.
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  • From ANON - kyuubinokitsune9 on February 01, 2005
    your definitions are slightly off. genjutsu - illusion techniques, ninjutsu - ninja techniques, taijutsu - hand to hand combat techniques.
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  • From ANON - HakumeiDoragon on February 01, 2005
    Good so far

    And Gen-jutsu are the illusionary techniques, Nin-jutsu are all of the other Jutsus
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  • From ANON - Jaebin on February 01, 2005
    this is going to be a great fic. your writting is very well done, best iv seen in a long time. Keep up the good work, and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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