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Reviews for My Darling Naruto, My Sweet Kyuubi

By : Iku
  • From ANON - Chris on March 02, 2005
    Awesome Chapter!! Plez Update Soon!!
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  • From ANON - Tasku on March 01, 2005
    Ahhh!!! Another marvelous chapter and yet another heart-wrenching cliffhanger!! T.T
    This is truely one of the best fanfics I have read. And definantly, the best NarutoxHinata fanfic I've read. Maybe Kyuubi will accept Hinata, or maybe Hinata might try to make the Kyuubi obey her? Well, how ever it happens, it'll be no doubt, excellent.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on March 01, 2005
    This is a change from many other fics out there. IT shows the real trials that Hinata and Naruto would face in a retaionship. It shows them facingthe troubles and admit their feelings.

    So Kyuubi comes back out hmmm? I have to wonder if Hinata accepted the Kuuybi, would it be so ....hateful towards Naruto and her? Maybe Kyubbi would accept them...not ohter people, that would be asking too much of the hateful creature, but to have someone accept you can make you you fond of them.
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  • From ANON - Chris on February 25, 2005
    Your Fanfic is soooo awesome!!! Great Job!!! UpdatE SOON PLEASE! HEHE!
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  • From ANON - Dementa on February 23, 2005
    Oh, that was so depressing... but cute! I can't wait for the next chapter! *sends Sizzle an e-mail telling her you updated*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2005
    awww so sweet :) I like where this is going ^_^
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  • From ANON - Parapsychic Psycho on February 16, 2005
    P.S.

    I forgot to add that you still need to fix the paragraphs. It's hard for my eyes read it like that. Other than that, I WUV YOUR STORY!!
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  • From ANON - Parapsychic Psycho on February 16, 2005
    Iku, THANK YOU for fulling my dream of reading a Kyuubi x Hinata lemon. I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU for this. Now don't have to destroy adultfanfiction.net with my pet horny panda Chin-Chin. THANK YOU!! ^___^

    -Parapsychic Psycho
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  • From Iku on February 16, 2005
    Thank you for your comments keeperofknowlege and Dementa, I have corrected the mistake of which Hokage did what.

    Sorry about that, I have no beta readers, and rushed to finnish this chapter and proceed onto the next two. As well as work keeping me too busy to get much time to work on this story.
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  • From ANON - keeperofknowlege on February 16, 2005
    it was not the 3rd hokage that died sealing the kyuubi, it was the 4th hokage.
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  • From ANON - Dementa on February 15, 2005
    Awesome as usual! But one itty bitty thing irked me, it was the 4th hokage who defeated Kyuubi, the 3rd died while fighting Orochimaru when the chuunin exams were supposed to be taking place. That's all, I wanted to say, but other than that, I loved it! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Botan-kun on February 15, 2005
    Poor Poor Naruto. I feel sorry for both af them that must have been very painful on both their parts. Well I'm enjoying your story very much it is nice. I hope that Hinata doesn't still feel like she can't go around him. That would be very painful. Well I'm enjoying your story and I hope you keep up the good work. Well Buh-Bye. :)
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on February 11, 2005
    Really great, can't wait for more ^^
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  • From Iku on February 11, 2005
    First prize goes to Katzztar who saw that it was a one-up on Naruto, in a "I pleased her and you failed" way, as well as to scare her off.

    Also how would Kyuubi act in that situation?
    Would he just want to kill some scared, weak, Hinata - my take on how he'd look at her as he hates humans and thinks their pathetic and pitiful.
    Or
    Would he want to satiate his lust and hurt the Naruto/Hinata relationship in one move - probably the more damaging and evil of the two, if not
    in a violent way then at least on an emotional level.

    You can see which one I picked as my theme.

    There was also another reason - time and time again fanfics chuck everything into one scene and then all the sex scenes just seem to be a repeat.
    Well by not doing everything possible I've left a lot to be used later on by either Naruto, Kyuubi or Hinata.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on February 10, 2005
    You're right,it could be a lot worse! Kyuubi seemed to just want to enjoy the sex and if it annoyed naruto then it's a plus for the demon. However if Kyuuki wanted to REALLY devaste thme he could have been a lot rougher, even slashing Hinata and killing her. Of course if he could have ran off too, but he didn't. He made sure Hinata got some pleaseure too, although it wasn't for her own sake.... more of the male ego thing, so he can say "I fucked her better than you' sort of thing
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