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Reviews for Konoha Garden

By : etacarinae
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 07, 2005
    Yay!!!!! OMG, that was AWESOME!!!!! Totally kewl idea...and very well done, too!!! Congrats!!! *gives you chocolates* ^___^ I can't -wait- to find out what happens!!! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Crystal Child on February 07, 2005
    hehe, I squeal every time I see this is updated...I love this soooooooo much! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - kayoko on February 07, 2005
    Yay, you updated!~ *is happy*

    The first two scenes with Neji and Shikamaru were great. I loved how you wove in a little bit of mystery about the background behind these girls into this chapter. Shikamaru is such a sweetie. ^_^ Kiba..well, he wasn't funny in this chapter so no comment on him except that he's lusting..not loving.

    Sakura and Lee, poor Lee (now how does it make sense the the client has to do work for the lady he bought for the night?) It would have been funny if Lee and Sakura played a bit of tag before Lee went unconscious. Man....just imagine dear Sakura running for her dear life around the room while trying to be nice ^_^; ah..i have rambled, sorry.

    *nods* Well, it was cool that Sakura went around checking up on everyone..well except for Naru-chan. That was very much in her personality, I believe.


    As for Sasuke and Naruto interaction, to be honest I was a little disappointed. I enjoyed it dearly, but I was expecting something more (?) It feels like all this suspense from the previous two chapters and we end up with Naruto running to Shizune for help. I was expecting a lot more teasing from Sasuke before he reveals that he knows that Naruto's a guy. Something like a game where the loser has to strip and Naru-chan has all this confidence in winning the game but he loses to Sasuke ..and Sasuke starts coming on to him or something. Oh wells, drinking contest minus the stripping is cool too.

    The line " ‘must be the drug’" was hilarious and very Naruto-like and funny how it looked like they had sex, but they didn't.

    ah..sorry about my rambles. thank you for writing.

    can't wait til the next morning XD
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  • From ANON - peachblossom on February 07, 2005
    very very hot, m'dear! can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on February 07, 2005
    That is absolutely great^^
    But an evil cliffie... but thats just want me to read
    more... YAY a great story... more more more^^;
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 07, 2005
    (Ch. 1-3)
    Such a wonderful and original idea!!!!!
    Update soon, please!!!



    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2005
    wonderful story, just wanted to make a quick comment on some grammar/style. This line -

    "Sasuke grabbed Naruto’s hands and flopping down onto the bed from the weight of the said boy"

    1 - flopped instead of flopping
    2 - well... i'm not sure you can really flop if the weight of someone else is pressing you down, flopping is more light. you know like you flop on the bed when you get home and want to think about your crush.

    Completely incidental to the rest of the story, doesn't really detract anything from it at all, just so hard to find things to improve in this story the one thing you find ends up being pretty small.
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  • From ANON - Ly on February 07, 2005
    It was funny! XD Damn, I want to know what will happen next T_T
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  • From ANON - Liliath on February 07, 2005
    WONDERFUL!! I had so much fun reading this chapter and boy oh boy, that lemony part with shikamaru with ino and sasuke with naruto...whoa, that was really COOL!!!!!!!^^ keep going!
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  • From ANON - Yum on February 07, 2005
    Interesting!!! Especially Sakura spying on the other to know where her Sasuke-sama is, the idea of the drug in the Sake was good too... and Sasuke kissing Naruto just too good!!! Update soon^^
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  • From ANON - demonesse on February 07, 2005
    this chapter was AMAZING!! *wants to draw a fanart just for you!*

    ok, i'll get around to it, and will send it to you in the coming week or so...

    heheh... so sweet, sasunaru! and the way you write smut. OMG! *massive nosebleed*

    happy that you updated, didn't realise you were on the lj sasunaru community too..

    definitely look forward to reading more soon!
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  • From ANON - Maelik on February 06, 2005
    You so got to continue this! I wanna see what's going to happen next, please!
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  • From ANON - chibi_yumi on February 03, 2005
    wahhhhhhhhh you gotta update!!! you can't cannot update!! this story is simply too good!!!! plz? pretty please? naruto is just too cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee! can't wait till you update!
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on February 01, 2005
    Haha what are you going to do now Naruto? =P Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on January 31, 2005
    GREAT AU! This is the best of the brothel themed stories I have read. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the next update. Ja!
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