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Reviews for Konoha Garden

By : etacarinae
  • From ANON - kayoko on February 16, 2005
    hm...i liked this chapter better than the last one

    the beginning scene where sasuke wakes up with Naruto was great, it was interesting to see sasuke check if his arse hurt or not (i guess he bottomed for someone before?)

    i think the really enjoyable part of this chapter is the fact that naruto made the others believe that he had sex with sasuke. you have a different way of approaching the plot from the authors that i usually read. they usually like the tease the readers a lot with unresolved suspense, but you like to resolve the suspense within the chapter while they go on for multiple chapters. It's different in the sense that the suspense doesn't really build up, but it's good that the same time because the plot actually moves at a decent pace. I'm not saying that there's no suspense, just less.

    In my opinion, Hisashi at the end was a little ooc. When Neji asked him about Hinata, I can understand that he was shocked and dropped his chopsticks and bowl. But I really can't see him as someone who would immediately make a silly excuse to check out the situation or whatever. Ah, maybe he didn't know Hinata was alive. oh wells.

    The rest of the chapter was great and thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - anon-sama on February 16, 2005
    golly, a fic I can get into! it's really cute so far. I can tell you're a fan of Memoirs of a Geisha ^^
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  • From ANON - Tallest Purple on February 16, 2005
    omg! i absolutly love it!...i can't wait to see what happens next, and what sasuke will say and 'do' when he wakes up! -squeel-....but seriously, its a very good story...very well done. i may be a little bias considering naruxsasu is the best, but i've read alot...and yours is one of the best. i really hope that you update soon. i'll check every day! do your best! byyeee! ;3
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  • From ANON - Youmahime on February 15, 2005
    This fic, for some reason I can't figure out, makes me giggle like a mad woman. It's not because it's bad or anything, it just does that. :Shrugs: Anyway, keep writing because this is amusing.
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  • From on February 14, 2005
    I love this story!! i think it's really good. chapter 3 is so fun to read and i almost laughed out loud in my office reading the story. keep it up!! when will the next chapter be out? Can't wait to read it!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 13, 2005
    This story would be very easy to screw up but you are using a fairly light hand.I think it is charming.I do wish the chapters where longer...winges a bit...please update soon.I have to remark on Shika's treatment of Ino...Oh yah,my hero!Now that is a man.
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  • From PatoSan on February 13, 2005
    This fic is tons of fun and one of the best I've read so far. I am really enjoying the het part as well, my fave being how you wrote Shikamaru and Ino. For some reason that really stuck with me, it was very IC. I hope you keep the great pace and build up you've had up to know. It's very enjoyable, good luck!
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  • From ANON - nabi on February 13, 2005
    wahahahahhahaha that was so funny............... ^O^ nice job...plaese continue
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  • From ANON - izumi on February 13, 2005
    heheheehee.. i cant wait to know sasuke's reaction when he wake up.. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Charis on February 12, 2005
    This is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it, I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From ANON - Hi-chan on February 12, 2005
    Wow, diz chapter was great!! Shikamaru was reeally sweet! ^^ (on his own way, of course XD)
    And I
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  • From ANON - Shi Tiger on February 12, 2005
    Sasuke and Naruto are so good together in this fic. Please update soon! I hope Sasuke wakes up first.
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on February 11, 2005
    GREAT STORY!! u would be my fav. author if you updated sooner, but still i love your stories plz. update in the near future!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 10, 2005
    Well, i can even say how i feel after reading your fic. Please continue, i'm dying to know what happens, your writing is very good and i loved the last chapter!!! You are amazing!!
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  • From ANON - <(\'\'<)(>\'\')><(\'\'<) on February 10, 2005
    (DANCE KIRBY DANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)Ive fallen in love with this story....so contiue...(please =[.............)
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