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Reviews for Konoha Garden

By : etacarinae
  • From ANON - rhynny-chan on March 05, 2005
    where? where? where? where's chapter 5? i wanna!

    wow i luv ur fic. i guess u get this a lot but its really good. the thing that got to me was that it captured my imagination so much that even tho it wasn't bogged down by too much description i could literally see the place, here the laughter and moans, smell the smoke, sake and exotic perfumes...i could pisture everything so vividly... and not many fics do that to me...certainly not a lot of fanfiction. u should try to get urself published....

    update soon pls!
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  • From ANON - Jady on March 05, 2005
    really very amusing and I hope there will be more chapters to come, though you had wanted it short it's turning into a good solid story. U have kept Naruto and Sasuke in character and in spirit and I hope you will continue to do so.

    (*-*;; please, please don't make it a pure naruto bottom story, he gets to be on top to, doesn't he?? When he's in a relationship with Sasuke? keep NAruto the way we love him strong and deeply caring but strong too. and not a girly wimp so many people seem to transfer him into)
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  • From ANON - jazzy on March 05, 2005
    At first I thought I wasn't going to like this story the whole premise was dealing with prostitution, and usually those stories are dark and not very pleasant let alone funny. This story was greatly amusing and I was glad to see that Naruto isn't a prostitue, he was tricked into playing a substitute, it was very amusing and I laughed, it has pretty spot on characterization for Naruto and Sasuke. I hope naruto won't lose any of his spirit with Sasuke and the same with Sasuke with Naruto. I believe this is one the better stories I have ever read, and I look forward to reading more.
    This is an excellent story and I'm glad it's not going to be as short as you wanted, though that's a bummer to you *-*; The fun's just beginning!

    P.S.
    (Please, please don't make Naruto the total "bottom"! or weak! 'Cause our boy is strong and that's just one of the reasons why we love our Naruto)
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  • From ANON - animegirl on March 03, 2005
    yaaaahh an update *does a happy dance* that was really good, lol i can't believe that old perv is actually the emporer. that was quite unexpected. this story is really starting to get intresting, i can't wait to see what happens next, i hope the princess doesn't chose sasuke, i'm wanting some sasnaru action soon, i also hope there's some kakairu action as well. keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Liliath on March 03, 2005
    cool story!!!!!!!!!really superb!!!!update soon!!!!!!!^^
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  • From ANON - Yugiko on March 03, 2005
    o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o
    Is Gaara gonna meet Naru-chan?
    >.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2005
    god...that was beutifull...*crys*...
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on March 02, 2005
    o.O Temari's the princess?! I thought.....TenTen was......>< if she is I bet she's gonna go for Sasuke....well it could take a turn for someone else...XD ARG! Please update as soon as you can!!!!
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on March 02, 2005
    Your diction is so big compared to mine! haha. Like always, good chaptrer! Hope Temari doesn't choose sasuke! It's sasunaru!! let tehm be together to do the naughties!! haha. jk jk (maybe?) This is very interesting. it's developing really well. update soon. PLEASE! ONEGAI!
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  • From ANON - PcBY on March 02, 2005
    I'm suprised that Sasuke's so eager to buy out Naruto without knowing what happened, and even be frustrated when he cannot by him out XD
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  • From questofdreams on March 02, 2005
    This was, over all, a very good chapter. However, I noticed that your inconsistency between past and present tense was a lot more apparent in this chapter than the last few. The last chapters there were some inconsistencies but nothing too distracting. I also felt that last few chapters were beautifully detailed and really well-written. This chapter was, of course, also well-written but I felt like you were really rushing things. I DID like the chapter, of course...and I adore your story. I just think you should have done a closer editting of the chapter before posting. I hope you don't take offense ^^; b/c I'm not trying to be rude or anything.

    In any case, I am excited about Temari getting her pick of the men XD...luck little *grumble* censor *grumble* hehe...And Jiraiya is emperor? that one made my eyes pop! But yeah, good twists building here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - dark mousey on March 02, 2005
    this chapter was interesting. are we going to see some kind of triangle between shika, ino, and temari now? hehe, update soon. and hmm, jiraiya as emperor... didn't see that coming ^_^ wonder what other surprises are in store.
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 02, 2005
    please please please update soon this is my one time all favrite fic i love your writing
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  • From ANON - kayoko on March 02, 2005
    yay, another chapter!~

    I still think it could be better, not that it's horribly bad right now.

    Anyways, thoughts on the story. I thought that Sasuke's "‘What happened last night anyway?’" was hilarious and a great end to that scene. As for Naruto's inability to keep a secret, I think it was a little overdone. I'd like to think of Naruto as dense, but not exactly stupid that he'd just blurt out a big secret like that. I just felt that it was going to be a big suspense where the other characters slowly get more and more suspicious of what happened between naruto and sasuke. Kind of like you took the straight forward approach to getting this over with.

    Though, the KakaIru bit in the story was cute. I think you have a nice portrayal of Kakashi in this story. The explaination of the dragon painting was interest and adds a new aspect to the story. The part where you slowly reveal that Jiraiya is the Emperor was played out really well.

    In my opinion, I think this story could be improved by adding a little more descript, but more importantly more humor and irony. Kind of like Sasuke repeatedly coming close to finding out, but doesn't find out exactly what happened between him and Naruto. That kind of thing.

    You're probably sick and tired of reading my reviews (I feel like I'm being mean sometimes, if i am, sorry.)

    Thank you for writing.

    kayoko
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 02, 2005
    Yay, another chapter of the story I've been following. I like it, but I am interested in why Shikamaru befriended Naruto. It seems a bit odd except to maybe pump him for information and get dirt on Sasuke. Which leads me to ask a question, is Sasuke going to 'visit' Naruto in the next chapter? I'm sure whenever that pops up it will be a fun scene to write because I can imagine Naruto going crazy and acting like a goofball. It's sad to hear Hinata's past but it's cool that you're moving the story line along. Well goodluck and I hope you update sometime soon!
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