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Reviews for Control

By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Juli on April 22, 2005
    Ohohoho. You're SO evil! I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter, that's for sure! Loved that seductive, cunning Naruto there toward the end, also. I've never pictured him that exceedingly sexy... until now. Phew. Wonderful work, as per usual!
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  • From ANON - JadeTiger on April 21, 2005
    your right, i am pissed! Man now i know how my readers feel when i leave them hanging! GRRR!!
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  • From ANON - Suicidal Skies on April 21, 2005
    Amazing, you're getting better and better ^___^ Keep it up m'dear
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on April 21, 2005
    Damn, that was an interesting chapter. Poor Naruto, torn between his conscience and the Kyuubi. I wonder who will win in the end? I think Naruto might have to force himself away from the influence of the Kyuubi but I wonder how given how difficult things are with Sasuke.

    Sasuke has gone from rejecting Naruto to just wanting him in a very dominating manner. I guess he is also confused on how to react to Naruto's attraction (but he seems to have accepted it albeit grudgingly). There is still so much going on and it will be fun to find out what it is.

    Ohhh the banana scene XD. I wonder if that was done on purpose??? Good going, can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on April 21, 2005
    Wheee and Sasuke finally gives in! Love this chapter, everything is starting to look up for Naruto.
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  • From ANON - Rika-Chan on April 21, 2005
    I wash Rika... until I decided Rika-Chan wash better.
    Yup a whole flock of fans!
    Like the ones that already reviewed and my Yaoi crazy sister....
    She loves it a lot... a lot a lot a lot like I do!
    The ol' teaase em with the strawberry. I love doing that! umm... right
    GO YOU! I can't wait for the rest of the story, don't make me wait too much okie?
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  • From ANON - Maya on April 21, 2005
    Yoo! It's Maya again. And you're right, I do hate you for that delicious cliffhanger. I generally don't read SasuNaruSasu. It's not my thing. I prefer ItaSasu. But your fic is a big exception. I love how you explore a darker side to Naruto, I love how you make him as manipulative (even if it's with Kyuubi's help) that most fanfic writers make him. He's so much more interesting that way. And Sasuke... BUAHAHAHAHAH! He was always easily manipulated, just look at Itachi-kun. XDD
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 21, 2005
    *blink* O.O Gah!!! You evil, evil person!!! You finally update, and for what? A cliffhanger!!! -.- That is sooooooo not fair......... ^^ Thanks for updating, I really do appreciate it. No, really, I do! *gives you some more chocolates* See??? ^___~ Glad my explanation for my name made sense... Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Vermillion Spiral on April 21, 2005
    You had me drooling then you ended it! You sadistic creep! I'm just kidding, I love you, we all love you, you're the bestest author in the world. Yes, no one compares to you. :Strokes and caresses your ego loveingly: There's nothing like a good ego jerking to make an author give us the goods! ^_^ And after that we need it!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 21, 2005
    omg ........that was sexual manipulation at it's best right there. the whole time i was reading it i was thinking "the boy is good" then we got to the part with naruto showing off the goods...:drool:... my brain just stopped working ^__^ man, oh man. i can't wait for the next chapter. and not just for the sex *vaguely hears somebody screams "you liar!" in the background* , but also to find out why naruto is doing this now and etc. so update soon, kay? now excuse me while i go back and read chap. 9 again
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  • From ANON - Ezj on April 21, 2005
    An evil cliffie but those are the greatest
    Hmm will be waiting somewhat impatiently
    to see were all this is heading ^_^

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  • From ANON - roriko on April 21, 2005
    OMFG you HAVE to update soon. PLEASE! *throws self at your feet* TT-TT The suspense is killing me! (and my hormones too, maybe)
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  • From ANON - kai on April 21, 2005
    you're right, i do hate you for leaving it there!!! right before the lemony goodness!!! how could you!?!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - macy on April 21, 2005
    reply to you review reply first : uhh..don't worry, i'm almost always late for school XD

    I liked this chapter, although... a smut cliffy!!!! honyo~~~ the next chapter's possible events has got me all excited, heeheee... thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on April 21, 2005
    Oooo... what a crule place to leave off. that was just mean!
    so is the hokage necklace starting to reject naruto? it seems that it is.
    i really am interested in what you have planned for this fic. i can really feel the plot developing.
    i wonder just how much of an influence the kyuuby will be to naruto. and if sasuke will ever realize just what a jerk he really is to naruto.
    update soon! i sooo want to read more of this wonderful fic. cant wait for more smut!!XD
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