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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Tricycle on July 07, 2005
    (chp.7 or so) Oh, my little Naruru's so wicked!!! I love it! :DDD The little bits of Kakashi/Naruto were very, very yummy. :) Sasuke still seems sort of... CRAZY, but that's cool.
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  • From ANON - Tricycle on July 07, 2005
    Wow, I don't usually read stuff like this but this is really intriguing! I liked that scene with Kakashi, and I agree with you that the part with the Tea Country where Naruto saves Sakura from drowning annoyed me a lot. Argh! What's wrong with that girl! I'm only on the sixth chapter so I don't know if this story is completed yet or what happens in the next couple of chapters, but I only have one complaint: I'm pretty sure the villagers' feelings aren't that strong after so many years, especially the younger generation. Naruto actually has gotten quite a bit of recognition for his deeds, and bringing back Sasuke had to give him some credit. Ack, sorry, one more thing-- Naruto really seems a little too OOC and self-pitying sometimes. He never does complain about his existence as a 'demon' and such, and that's part of his character, which was established in the series very early on. Sorry about that! I wouldn't normally be so nitpicky but it seems like you're a great writer and, judging from your review responses, you take criticism really well! This is a really great fic and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
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  • From ANON - bblisblop on June 28, 2005
    Oh you are gonna get it now Sasuke.Finally,hot stuff.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2005
    Noooooooooooo! You're abandoning this? Please at least end it? I wanna know what happens with the boys! Please? I also liked you new fic, but can't you finish this one first? Aaaaaah the horror of good fics being abandoned. Or waiting long for updates... Meh.
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  • From ANON - angel of darkness on June 24, 2005
    -drools- nice especially kyuubi/naru -huggles a hog tied and gagged furious kyuubi- you gotta luff him -sound of ropes snapping- ehhh shit..help? -runs away from kyuubi screaming- great story cant wait for more!! please send help befor im killed!!! lol --ducks kyuubis claws-
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  • From ANON - Tachibana, Yumiko on June 01, 2005
    Yes, finally update! I sort of lost your fic, I don't know why but I couldn't find it no matter how much I searched. I read through all the titles in the Naruto section, but I must have missed it somehow. Then I remembered I had it saved under favorites. So I found it again, and what do I find? Two new chapters! Wey!
    I must say, this fic just gets better and better. Naruto seems to be in complete control of Sasuke. I like! Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter! hehe...
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on May 15, 2005
    ahh...i nearly missed this update. not bad. no sex still, but i forgive you. don't feel like in a smutty mood lately. angst would be much better. you just know what to write to please me ne? heh, update soon.
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  • From ANON - PerriotLeFou on May 13, 2005
    hehehe....It's me again. Fabulous! I keep tellin you that everytime I review, but seriously ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!! Hoping for some smut, but would love anything!!! *grins like a maniac* Loves it!!! And btw love the way Naruto was 'standing' there!! Too hott! lol laters babe!! PerriotLeFou
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  • From ANON - Nicole on May 09, 2005
    HAHA I check on this fic at least twice a day...pathetisaddd. :( I can't wait for an update!

    I love how you control this story--you let it go wherever your mind takes it, and it's funnn.
    you do such creative characterizations, that I don't care about the lack-of-plot you speak of. even if
    I find the plot fun and engaging. :ppp
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  • From ANON - Nissie on May 04, 2005
    Hehe, I read this fic on Banana Oil and checked back 40 times, but it;s only up to ch 8 there, so I was so happy to stumble upon Control here! And then you went and left the hot and steamy part out! Meh, I loved it anyway! And I hope you'll update soon! Even though you say you have no plot, I feel like it's quite a deep story... But I also tried to see if that light inside the fridge stays on when you close the door, so I'm dumb. Guess I'll believe you about the plotness then, but I still think your writing is great! Forgive me for the high nonsense-factor of my review... Ja!
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  • From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on April 27, 2005
    Whew! Sorry my review was so late! My life is WAYYYYY too full of
    chaos! Anyway, on to the fic...

    OMFG! This was even better than I expected! Naruto is going to
    become the Hokage?! Really?! But how will the VILLAGERS feel
    about that? I loved the part where Tsunade threw the mug at
    Naruto! Butthat's what he gets for insulting her! I wonder how
    he will do as a jounin now, hmm? And that is true about
    Sakura - she seems like the only member of cell 7 without
    any REAL problems! And she always has the nerve to scold
    Naruto! GRAHHHHHHH! But I no longer HATE her 'cause she
    kinda redeemed herself in my eyes way back when she was
    brave enough to fight the sound ninjas. Anyway, moving on...

    When Naruto started eating the fruit I nearly fell out of my
    seat! He had to be doing that on purpose! A seductive Naruto!
    I'l bet Kyuubi was whispering in his ear the entire time too!
    Now if only he had added some whipped cream to that strawberry.

    Naruto: O_o

    But the banana scene! That knocked my scocks off! He really got
    Sasuke hot and horny! Then he was holding his cock trying to make
    Sasuke give him what he wanted! But Sasuke isn't too happy with
    that! Will he really make him scream? Can he teach Naruto his
    place or vice versa? I wonder if Itachi is that aggressive in bed?

    Itachi: Do you wish to find out? *Mange Sharingan flashes*

    Me: O_o

    Which brings me to my next point: HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT OFF
    AT A CLIFFHANGER? IT WAS JUST GETT'N GOOD! GRRRRR! You
    must update SOONNNNNNNNN!

    Oh, my story is nothing like your at all, trust me. Just Kyuubi's
    speech. Thanks for saying it's okay though!

    So, you've watched gay porn? Is that where you made the sex
    scences from, or is any of it from...experience? HMMMMM? See
    ya later!
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  • From ANON - twistedneko/Taylor-same person ^_^ on April 27, 2005
    Alright, your writing is brilliant! >_<

    I think you're some kind of prodigy or something because I find many different explanations as to what is going on. (does that make sense?) Anyway, I like the way Sasuke is, and I understand Naruto isnt trying to get payback, but, rather to reduce Sasuke's (ab-fucking-normally) big ego right...? at least I can deduct that much. >_>;;
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  • From ANON - Serafim on April 23, 2005
    OMFG! That is THE BEST fik I have EVER reat! Cont it pls! Kisses from Russia!
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 22, 2005
    You are such a tease!
    Please, please, write quickly!
    Anyway, this is an hell of a good story and I really enjoy it.
    Thank you.

    Diane.
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  • From ANON - Editor\'s Crawl on April 22, 2005
    Mwhwhwhwhwa.....I am a sadistic piece of (censered)....Gezz, what took you so long? I love this story! Update soon, and when I say soon I damn well mean it! Your updates take sooooo late...(or maybe I just too impatient!)

    Who will Naruto end up with in the end? I am still confused as to where this story is going....

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