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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Allison on January 25, 2006
    Omgee! >w<

    If you don't update soon, I'll probably spaz and fall dead, foaming from the mouth! D:

    ;_;

    (Anyways, besides that...great story! Slightly shorter then your other chapters though, but hey. :/ that's okay)

    Update soon! :D

    -Allison
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  • From ANON - Omena on January 23, 2006
    Ahh, no..I shouldn't be reading this, it's just too sad for me ;P But I doubt that Sasuke and Naruto relationship would be all sunshine and flowers but Sasuke's being an real ass here! *sniff* gaah, Naruto, get over him and find soméone better! (please ;P)
    OH goody, I think Kyuubi won't be letting Sasuke off the hook too easily :D
    I really liked those conversations between Naruto and Kyuubi ^___^ I could actually imagine Kyuubi giving Naruto "good" advices in love life in the manga too ;P *mwah*
    sorry, can't think of anything good to say at the moment.. ^^
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  • From ANON - Nissie on January 22, 2006
    Oh wow, I didn't notice you updated twice! Thanks so much! I thought you weren't going to continue this story, so you just made my day ^____^ Chapter 10 was really hot (hehe, sometimes it reminded me of Sensitive Pornograph, only hotter! _< I suck at waiting... But knowing there'll more makes me happy ^^

    Have a great day/week/month (I hope it's not going to be a year before you update ^^; but in case it is, have a great year!)

    Nissie
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  • From ANON - Sophade on January 21, 2006
    Wowowowow!! XD what will happen??

    He scared me with those last words! XD

    well anyway, I like your fanfic, even if I don't like the beginning, but, I want to know : Tell me! There will be a happy ending, okay?? I don't want ALL that to finishing badly! XD (sorry my english isn't that good)

    so, please tell me, if my precious Naruto will be loved in return or if Sasuke will be a fucking-bastard and hate him because of this stupid Kyuubi! (sorry, I hate him in your story! XD)

    well, tell me! ^^

    Sayounara! ^^
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  • From ANON - Ghonchi (2 lazy 2 sign in) on January 16, 2006
    Waaaah! Marry me! or let Kyuubi have my children! I love him!

    Really hot story this one, i can clearly see the scenes infront of me *drools*

    *Waiting for another update with twiching hands, much like a (drug) addict O_o*
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  • From ANON - Uchiha Serina on January 15, 2006
    This story is great! Sasuke is really an ass! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. Such an evil stopping point!
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  • From ANON - claire on January 15, 2006
    update soon!!!! This is really good! Well done, i'll say that this is one of the better NAruto fics i've read.
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  • From ANON - macy on January 13, 2006
    honyoo~~~ i have no idea where this will lead to, but no matter, i can't wait to see what happens next! the lemon in chapter 10 was super duper unbelievably hot by the way.
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  • From ANON - liankitty on January 13, 2006
    Wow. What a cool ending sentence, it almost makes the fact that this is another cliffhanger worth it.
    I definately enjoy this fic, I'm usually not attracted to the dark fics but this has more to it than that and really, I'm just wondering how far Naruto will go and how long Sasuke can hold out.

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  • From Cindyip on January 12, 2006
    It's a little short this chapter. But I luv it;)
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  • From ANON - ki-ka on January 12, 2006
    0-0 Sasuke-teme you did it now, you when and broke Naru-kuns heart....hey hey Naru-kun show Sasuke-chan just how much you love him in pain...after all that ice icicle that shoved up his ass has to though out some day....AmuseMe i wish you the best on the next chappie the storie so far..^^__^^ love love ...please get Sasuke-teme back for Naru-kun...teme is in need of a world of hurt...O_~
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  • From ANON - Rachael on January 12, 2006
    Oh, hoorah! I did think perhaps this had become an abandoned story. I think my heart spasmed whne I saw the update when I was browsing. It's bizarre, but in a way, Naruto seems to be maintaining his innocence, like with the part how he looks guilty when Sasuke exclaims "You talk to it!" and how Naruto babbled afterward trying to explain. I really don't know if I see Sasuke saying "you monster." I doesn't fit for me, though the whole transformation thing is looking very very interesting. This story has haunted the backs of my mind since i read it for the first time in November 2005. Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 12, 2006
    Nooo! Evil cliffie! Must. have. my. monthly. dose. of. kyuubi-san. Lol. Yes, girlie. (Sorry, if I'm wrong) You deserve all that praise and more. *try to butter you up some more in hopes of getting faster updates* but seriously, I so want naruto (or kyuubi) to , so, tear sasuke a new one for that f-ing comment! The nerve of that revenge-seeking-bastard. *is very protective of her naru-chan* anyway, nice preview. You got my attention. (When did you ever lose it?) so until next time, ja. *steals a french kiss from kyuubi-san then locks herself away in the safety of her room*

    °Devious Lil Devil
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 12, 2006
    *jaw drops* ...How could you just leave it like that?! *makes random noises of frustration* damn it... now I have to wait for the next update which could take foreveeeeeeeeer! (at least, forever to me! ^_^) please update fast! Your story is just too good!
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  • From ANON - medicninM on January 12, 2006
    *bites nails* @_@ eek!
    *growls* how could sasuke-teme call Naru-chan a monster!?! that wasn't very nice!
    Yeah... I love your story! I can't wait to read s'more!!!!!!
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