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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - scarecrowqueen on October 04, 2006
    omFUCKINGg! I seriously had the female equivalent of a hard on the entire time I read this. Was that the end or is there more to come?
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  • From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on September 30, 2006
    Its ME! I'm BAAACK! Did you miss me? No
    need to worry though - I'd never give up on
    this fic. NEVER! Anyway...

    I simply love the way you did your latest
    chapters, from Sasuke fucking Naruto to
    learning about Kyuubi to Naruto semi-raping
    Sasuke! So much dark, evilness! I couldn't
    believe that Naruto actually gave into his
    demon. But, as you said, that bitch Sasuke
    deserved it.

    Your skills for description are so...perfect!
    Sasuke's blowjob was very...tasty. Then I loved
    the way he tried to hurt Naruto when he fucked
    him but Naruto wouldn't show any pain. Not to
    mention the semi-rape chapter. Naruto made some
    very good points about Itachi to that idiot-loser.
    He just doesn't think! ARGGGGH! At least he got
    what was coming to him. Really, really hot chapters.

    I agree with you so much: I want those damn fillers
    to end! GOD! At least the Bleach fillers are good,
    but Naruto fillers suck! At least the manga is getting
    good. On, and on a side note, why did you delete your
    other story, "Pet"? I know you said that you might stop
    writing on Naruto, but that fic seemed so promising. Oh
    well, great job.

    Later
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 06, 2006
    whoa~
    ..loves ur story!
    took me more than 2 hours to read it! hehe.. ;p

    i wanted to review every chapter,
    but unfortunately, my head hurts,
    so i kinda rush-read it..
    ..still loves it though~

    hmm..
    wonder why more people prefer the sasunaru thingy..
    not that i have anything against it..
    gad, i love it!
    but im more of a narusasu fan..
    y'know a boy with that demon inside can never be an uke..
    hahaha~
    and oh, did i mention he was trained by the perverted duo?
    kkkk.. ;p

    so, anyway, my point is..
    i love ur story, i hope you continue it..
    ..and i love this chapter~
    t'was hot.

    ..for more hotness to come~
    *cheers*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2006
    This chapter was truely amazing. Good work.
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on August 09, 2006
    omg! u updated! ty!ty!ty!ty!TY! woot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    Who needs a beta when you write as well as that! This chapter just blew me away in every sense, the description was superb and how the entire scene was played out was fantastic.

    I get the feeling that naruto may be getting another visit from the kyuubi soon...
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 05, 2006
    OMG.....YOU'RE ALIVE!!! *glomps you* what's up? how ya been? yeah, fillers suck ass. but the one that had ino, naruto and shino on a mission together was pretty funny. ((((SPOILER))))) seeing shino laugh was freaky as hell. you have no idea how bad this fic was haunting me especially after that evil cliffie you left us with. and then to come back with such a beautiful chapter. *glomps again* but what do you mean you're ending this soon? *starts to tear up* but i love this story.....*shrugs* oh well, do what you gotta do. *smiles*

    i just adore naursasu. i wonder if sasuke was paying any attention to what naruto was saying. i know i wouldn't have if naruto was banging me but sasuke's a frickin' uchiha so he should have caught some of it, at least. i sure hope that 'talk' of theirs took sasuke's friggin' ego down a notch or 3. did i mention how awesome the chapter was? ^__^ i loved the way kyuubi thanked sasuke after naruto was done with his ass. that sexy beast. and the way naruto was using itachi to control sasuke! *drools* gods, i love that way he and kyuubi thinks. there should so be a threesome between naruto,kyuubi and sasuke. *kage bunshin no jutsu would be very useful for that* i'm sure sasuke would enjoy that little session very much *evil grin* thank you so much for *ahem* cumming back to us. it was well worth the wait. looking foward to your next update whenever that may be. *quickly molests kyuubi-san then runs away*

    ~Devious Lil Devil
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on August 03, 2006
    Ah... you know, I was surprised to see this fiction continued. A pleasant surprise, all the same. So rare to find one that isn't so... disgustingly warm-hearted and sappy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu (again!) on August 01, 2006
    ^I meant 'NOT BEING DEAD!'

    Sorry for the stupid typo!! ^^;;;
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 01, 2006
    What took you so long?! Evil!Naruto has so been worth it...THANK YOU FOR BEING DEAD!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2006
    Do not tell me you have forgotten about this! We wanna know what happens next! but this looks fantastic so far.
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  • From ANON - Evol on July 12, 2006
    WHY! WHY WONT U UPDATE!? WHY!?!
    geez, youd think with all the reviews u get you'd be quicker to update. what, dont you love us anymore!?
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  • From ANON - kyouteki on June 25, 2006
    Hehe I've read this like a million times! But I still lvoe it!! I can't wait for him to show the world and sasuke how much of a demon he is!
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on May 23, 2006
    omg i fucking love this fucking story so fucking much! i usually dont swear this much but thats how much i fucking love it!
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  • From ANON - Wing on February 13, 2006
    ...O.O!!

    I love your fic--it's like one of its kind; it's awesome. And you've made Kyuubi part of the story! ^^; Buuuut...

    Your major-cliffie has made me mad.

    Wait... if I kill the author, the major-cliffie desease will not be cured. D: You'd better update or I'll make history repeat...!
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