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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - RoseNightshade on March 31, 2007
    zomg wtf, it cut off alot of my comments! D: *hits aff.net with a big hard stick!* evil thing!!! D<

    since this site is being a loser, i'll just email the pic to you. XD
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  • From ANON - RoseNightshade on March 31, 2007
    i forgot this stupid thing hides the emails. >.>

    it's enforcertrunks at aol.com :3 if you can't see the pic. ^^
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  • From ANON - RoseNightshade on March 31, 2007
    so so so so much love for this fic. i can't wait to see how it ends!

    it makes the evil sadistic fangirl in me squee. and the kyuubi lover in me squee even more. this is the BEST ever portrayal of Kyuubi have ever read in a fic. hands down. :3 kyuubi is underappreciated! D: but you give him well deserved love and screen time and TALENT and sex appeal.
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  • From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on January 07, 2007
    Hey again, AmuseME(btw, I love your new pen-name)
    This is one of the best chapters, and that's
    saying something, trust me. Naruto is getting
    everything he wants: Sasuke, Kyuubi, becoming
    Hokage, complete Control!

    Kyuubi actually got fucked by Kyuubi! Wow,
    I never, ever saw that one coming! But I
    guess that if Kyuubi wanted Naruto to merge
    without hesitation he had no choice. Very
    well-done! Plus I loved Kyuubi's line:

    “Preparation, lubrication, nonsense,”

    So FUNNY! But one thing I was wondering,
    what form was Kyuubi in when he had sex
    with Naruto. Was he still a fox, or
    some human form? Bestiality would be
    quite the twist. Also, I liked the way
    he rode Naruto. You know a lot of sexual
    things, don't you... O__o

    Can't wait for the last chapter. Hope
    it comes out soon!

    P.S.~ can you read and review my fic for me please: http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544190338

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - harryhollow1 on December 19, 2006
    Please email i just gotta read more if you make a squel please update soon!!
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  • From Jackee on December 10, 2006
    YES!!! a new chapter, how I've waited for this moment!!! xD
    I'd love to give constructive critic, but shit....all i can say is that I love this fic so much and I can't wait for the next part!!

    I never could have imagined that Kyuubi being on the recieving end would be hot, but you really pulled it off! O.o

    Thank you for writing such an amazing fanfic! *builds you a shrine for worshipping*
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  • From ANON - Fuyahiko on December 10, 2006
    wow that was one of the best fanfics i ever read O_O
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 10, 2006
    OMFG YOU ARE SO GOOD!!! Usually I hate stories like this but the way you portray it and set naruto and everyones personality is just uncanny. I love this and your style please update A.S.A.P. and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on December 10, 2006
    *speechless*... MARRY MEEEE~!!!!

    That NaruKyuu scene was to die for *melt melt*. I never knew Kyuubi could be so hot *_*. Naruto is so awesome when he's seme XP.

    Kuku, awwwwesome fic. Hope you update soon ^^.
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  • From ANON - akiravadel on December 09, 2006
    No keep going! I actually started reading this back when you only had the first 4 chapters. I finally found it again!! Yay! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please don't kill Sasuke >.< I'll be very very sad!

    Thanks~
    Keep up the great work!
    ~Akira~
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  • From ANON - innerchild on December 09, 2006
    damn.... just holy fucking shit. fuck, i can't stop cussing. this was definitely worth the wait. i love this story. i kind of wanted naruto to turn back into himself and he and sasuke be all happy... but fuck that. this is so much better. i like naruto this way. and i love the way you portray kyuubi. the scene between them was hot and well... i've never read anything else where kyuubi was so fuck worthy. that doesn't make much sense, but whatever. just wanted to say that i loved it and can't wait for the next update.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Hitokiri_X_Shinobi on November 29, 2006
    XD that is such a wonderful story!!! I wish i could right like you, but sadly I can't T.T Is there any more tothis or was that indeed the end chapter?
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  • From ANON - beeku on October 27, 2006
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh sooo good i just refound this story recently.
    please update soon...although i'm more sasunaru then narusasu.. this is fine too.
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on October 04, 2006
    .......!! (yup that's all i can say at the moment, lol)

    i love this fic so much... Sad to see that your love for Naruto is going down-hill thanks to the fillers (i've stopped watching them, here's hoping that Part 2 will begin around 210). but man....this fic... The NaruSasu in this chapter was so....wow..

    lol sorry for my bad review, but it really has left me speachless! XD
    here's hoping for more NaruSasu before you end the fic. :)

    (and what's the deal with people acting like idiots when it comes to Seme!Naruto anyway?? gah, so annoying!)
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 04, 2006
    damn... that was some sick, twisted, sexy, unbeleiveable... fuck, i don't know. it was just so damn good, that i'm all tongue tied and sound like an idiot. but, that's all right. cause all i need to say is

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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