Click Here!

Reviews for Control

By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Stranj100 on January 17, 2005
    Woh, that was heavy. Some much to think about and explore. This deserves a sequel. I really wonder what was going through Sasuke's head through this especially at the end before he disapeared.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Saki on January 17, 2005
    Aww, poor Naruto kun! The story though is really good and I can't wait to read another chapter of it. I just hope that Sasuke will drop the bastard act later on otherwise Naruto will do something he might regret.Just an opinion but I really love this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michiru on January 17, 2005
    I know, I should probably be thinking something along the lines of, 'like, _OMG_ that was _SOO_ terrible, how could you do that to my poor Naru-chan!!' but really... my only thought after reading that was, 'Shit, that was hot.' o.o; I guess I'm just sick and twisted like that. *shrug* Oh, wait. Yeah. There was a second thought. 'SEQUEL!!! ;-;' I guess this could pass off as a good one-shot, but I would really love it if you could continue this story. I would like to see more from Sasuke's point of view, what he's thinking, and his reaction to how Naruto acted after he tormented him. You seem to get very small glimpses into what he's thinking, but I would like to see a chapter more from his perspective. That would be very interesting. And of course, the idealist in me wants Sasuke to realize that he also feels something for Naruto, emotionally or physically - preferably both - but I have no idea whether you would even consider something like that, considering how dark and angsty this story is. I'm actually much more of a fluffy-romance person. I don't often get into the dark, angsty fics. But sometimes I do. Like this one, obviously, I like. But I think the perfect story contains both. A story that is entirely fluff can be cute, but can get boring really fast. Angst can also become rather dull after a while, and it has the additional downside of being depressing. I don't like depressing things. They make me feel... depressed. o.o; (Imagine that.) But in a story that has it both, it's more like a roller-coaster type thing. One minute, you're like, 'Oh, they're so cute and happy and it's just SO sweet-', and then BAM. You're hit with something really dark and angsty and the result is, 'O.O; .... OMG. .... ;-;' Well, that's how it kind of is for me, anyway. ^-^; So, if you do decide to continue (which I really hope you do!), I would like it if you could consider lightening it up just a bit. But of course, whatever you would like to do is perfectly fine! Even if you decide to just leave it as is. I don't want to come across as being really pushy. I'm really just appreciative of authors like you that share their written fanworks... how else would I get my sasunaru fix? :p ..... *notices how long review has become* I really can't believe I just wrote this much. I'm so sorry. ^^; (I have a tendency to ramble... obviously.)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - firskey on January 17, 2005
    That was creepily entertaining... Very interesting though - a refreshing break all the poorly written WAFF-y sasunaru. Another chapter or two would be nice... *coughhinthintcough*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - jadetiger on January 16, 2005
    oh very sad, hope there is more!
    Report Review

  • From yaoiqueen on January 16, 2005
    no...not a one shot....o.o...please. it was way too good to be anything but that.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tenohikari on January 16, 2005
    OMFG, This story got me a tear jerk out of me ::covers face:: but it's wonderfully written and chocked full of angsty goodness - which is refeshing than being suffocated by fluff all the time. Please continue!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - narlover on January 16, 2005
    WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING! Naruto's had such a sad life and you had to do that to him. You better update this story or i swear i'll make sure no one reads any of you stories. EVER AGAIN!

    - you can email me if u have any questions on why i hate ur stories
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kayoko on January 16, 2005
    weird and twisted, but twisted in a way that was hot.

    I honestly liked Sasuke like this...*bangs head on table* i am so messed up. I do feel sorry for Naru-chan (let's just pretend that Sasuke was fantasizing about you when he was doing his self loving). The story really portrays this sense of craziness in Naruto for being a demon and in Sasuke for doing the sick things that he did to Naruto.

    When i started to read this fic, I never expected Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's confession to be something like this...it was a surprise and welcomed one. *nods* Loved the part where Sasuke tied Naruto with the wires (I thought that was very Sasuke-like). Hm...i was expecting Sasuke to mouth-rape (?) Naruto...oh wells. ^_^ things were still cool.

    wow, i'm really all over the place in this review (sorry).

    anyways, i really like the fic and hope it develops into a longer story. I'd be really neat to see how Naruto copes with Sasuke's reaction. And if Sasuke 'enjoyed' it enough that he'll repeat the same thing again (that's be really nice).

    damn..this was really good, i want more. *laughs* do you have another other pieces of writing like this one?

    yes, yes, please tell me if you ever decide to continue this!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Scottishfae on January 16, 2005
    I was so in tears at the ending of this. It's so sad! But, even though you said you did it to take up time and you didn't like it that much, you should so continue it. I would love to read more on how Naruto changes more because of this. I think you did a very good job of capturing both characters' emotions here and though yes its very angsty, and I would love to kick some Sasuke ass after that, you could expand this to make a very interesting story (w/ an ending of angst or happyness). I do hope you think of continuing this story. If not, that's okay. It was a brilliant story!

    Until Next Time,

    Sfae
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ezj on January 16, 2005
    O_O...


    But damn was that good or what... O_O
    I should think it's horryifying to poor
    Naruto but damn it was good...
    Even if the ending were great some
    where deep down I will be hoping for
    an extra chapter even if it were a great
    ending... =^_^=
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!