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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on January 19, 2005
    i love this story. and tsk tsk, this is too sad for even an "i love you," "well, i hate you" fic. good story tho.
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  • From ANON - darkangel on January 19, 2005
    *giggle* big meanie-poo sasuke-pervert. lol. i actually dun mind naruto being submissive. i mean, he's a natural sub!!!! i love your story. please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - DarkSetoKaiba(not logged in) on January 19, 2005
    *eye twitches* .... *twitch twitch* .... *fingers twitch* .....

    Senna: Uh-oh... this isn't going to be pretty...

    *twitches again, eyes slowly narrowing, centimeter by centimeter* .....

    Kairi: Quick! HIDE THE WEAPONS!

    Josh: WHY!?

    Kenny: BECAUSE SHE'S GOING TO EXPLODE DAMMIT! I PERSONALLY DO NOT WANT TO GET IN HER WAY!

    Josh: ...Point taken!

    Everyone: *rushes around trying to hide all the weapons*

    .................*background heart monitor sound goes beeeeeeeeeep*

    Senna: We're doomed.... *dives under the couch*

    WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ALL ABOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTT!?! *glares muderously* SURE SASUKE IS INSANE AND NOT QUITE RIPE UP THERE! BUT THE ONE WHO WOULD ACTUALLY DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT WOULD BE ITACHI! OR OOUCHIMARU DAMMIT ...... *swings her flail around meanicingly* I don't mind angst, I don't mind rape, I don't mind torture, I don't mind alot of things.. BUT PSYCHO-ANALYSIS ON CHARACTERS AND TORTURE DO NOT BELONG TOGETHER! I would know, I have been writing fictions for many years!! *brandishes her Tsutana*

    Kenny: *peeking out from under the carpet* I suggest you run... she's an expert at Kendo and is very deadly with that thing! Especially since her bf taught her...


    AHHHHHHHHH *starts swinging sword madly, slashing blindly and seeing red* NONONONONONONONO DAMMIT NO! NOT RIGHT! NOT WRONG! JUST AHHHHHHH *flails madly*

    Kairi: And she says Sasuke is Psycho? Tsh...

    *sees author and eyes narrow* THAT'S IT NO MORE! *swings her sword*

    Senna: Uh-oh... Everyone!

    Josh: *trumpet sounds* CHARRRGGGEEEE!

    Everyone: *tackles and dog-piles her*

    *screams and flails madly* GET OFFA ME! I HAVE TO END THE MADDNESS! AIEEE!

    Seira: Tsh.. Another author pissed her off?

    Senna: *nods* Get over here and helkp us hold her down, she's gotten stronger, she must have been training

    Seira: Ah.. Gotcha... *sits on DSK's back*

    GET OF ME! NO DAMMIT I HAVE TO KILL.. MUST KILL... *glares muderously at everyone*

    Josh: Where's DYM when we need her?

    Kenny: in Texas, asleep stupid.

    Josh: Oh... right! Anyways, let's get her out of here!

    Everyone: *starts dragging a screaming DSK off*


    *flails madly* Nooooo! ....this fic better get better if you continue it... NO MORE PSYCHOANALYSIS! *wails loudly as she's dragged out the door*
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  • From TenshiKaitou on January 19, 2005
    oh, come on, you're so modest! (huggles you til you turned blue) ur fic is really good! the sadism of it just makes me wonder! as for this second chappie, i can't say but how twisted Sasuke is. Man, that guy seriously need a pyscharist! A doctor! A shrink! Whatever! Poor Naruto is in for a ride! Heh heh...
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  • From ANON - JadeTiger on January 18, 2005
    yay! i got my wish!

    hmm some how i imagained naruto running away or killing himself. but that would have been way to predictable. glad you didn't just jump into that righ out the gate. looks like its gonna be good! oh please update again sooN!
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  • From ANON - MimiruChan on January 18, 2005
    >> Sasuke is such a jerk! God I really should kill you for making our Naru-chan suffer so much ;__; I hope Naruto decides to kill Sasuke and then burn his dead body and feed it to Sakura >> Anyway, update soon ^__^ I am loving this fic even though it pains me to read it ^^;
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  • From ANON - Ezj on January 18, 2005
    YAY multi chaptered... *does a happy dance'
    ohhh just gotta love this twisted psycothic
    way of Sasuke... I can't write stuff like that
    cause I would feel guilty... Then I just have to
    read more from you YAY more more...
    I probably scared you of now but I will wait
    patiently till you shov up writing more ^_^

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  • From ANON - kayoko on January 18, 2005
    hm...yay for a multi-chapter fic!~ *hearts*

    you changed the name of the fic? o.O

    Sasuke's inner self is pretty messed up *nods*

    too bad i don't know about the other series you write fics for..oh wells, i can keep up with this fic instead! *heart*heart*

    i liked the end scene of the chapter where Naruto came to their practice and how you described their spar as a dance that had been practiced and perfected. it was a great way to describe the events.

    smoking sasuke is very cute. ^_^

    thank you for writing!
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  • From ANON - Saki on January 18, 2005
    Lol, alright. Though the second chapter is pretty good. The one that surprised me though is how Sasuke actually started smoking but still I really do feel sorry for Naruto and I can't wait til Kyuubi will make an appearance. I hope he'll put Sasuke in his place...maybe?
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on January 18, 2005
    Whee - now its Sasuke's turn to angst! ... or maybe not; still it's nice to know he feels a liiitttle guilty - but now plans on playing mind games? Oooh I hope Kyubi kicks his ass.
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  • From ANON - Vampia Zee on January 18, 2005
    uh.... damn. I had a review all writen out..but I'm not use to the stupid school mac that I deleted it ;___;

    Let me try and re-write it ...

    I feel really bad about not reviewing for this fic back when you first put it up (and nobody had reviewed it yet...i could have been the first person to review ;__;) And I'm very, very, very happy that you decided to continue it! In the first chapter, like on of your other reviewed (who I am too lazy to find the name of), I thought Sasuke was going to mouth rape Naruto. But what you did instead was very hot too. o__o (maybe you awakened the more sadistic me? Or..whatever you call it :D) I keep thinking that Sasuke is just going to throw Naruto on the floor, and have his way with him....hmm...

    I look forward to more! Thank you for the very hot fic :3
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  • From TenshiKaitou on January 18, 2005
    omg!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! is this a one-shot?! it looks like a one-shot! even if it is a one-shot, can you please CONTINUE it! onegai! it is so rare to see such sadistic fics! i thoroughly enjoyed it! too much in fact! i want it to continue! please please please...it really has the potential to continue. oh crap, i'm raving mad again? darn, that means your fic is really good. too good, it makes me to be ashamed of my own pathetic writings. waaaaai.
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  • From on January 17, 2005
    Pleeeeeese don't make this a one-shot! It could be soooo terribly, wonderfully angsty I can hardly stand it!!! *pout* Pleasepleasepleaseplease??
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 17, 2005
    Vicious.
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  • From ANON - Emily on January 17, 2005
    ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................WOW! That is some very powerful writing there and I must say I am almost speechless. that story was so well written, I can't believe it! The emotions and the actions as well as the feelings of the characters is so real, it stuns me. They are so in depth and well thought out. And the way Sasuke acted to Naruto after he told him, it was so real. I just can't believe how great this is. You must consider writing more to this. I want to know what happens to Naruto now that he has been left crying and what caused Sasuke to go a little unstable and do that to Naruto. It is just so marvelous. I hope you will write more.

    Excellent work and keep it up!
    Emily
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